Interesting Iscribble RP
Interesting Iscribble RP
Interesting Iscribble RP by TheGameArtCritic
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TheGameArtCritic on May 7, 2011, 6:17:00 AM
Todd: *he still sleeps, having had strange dreams the night before - he was running from an entire PACK of the umbra - then he realized that he wasn't running FROM then, but running WITH... he WAS an umbra...*
mechadragon13 on May 7, 2011, 6:20:04 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on May 7, 2011, 6:32:43 AM
Todd: Uh... sure... I uh, I was kinda running around. I wasn't running around the blank space or anything... it was... black. And I was running from these umbra... there were, like, five or six of them... and I was running, but... then I realized that I was an umbra, and I wasn't running FROM them, but WITH them...
mechadragon13 on May 7, 2011, 6:35:57 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 7, 2011, 6:40:59 AM
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mechadragon13 on May 7, 2011, 7:15:42 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 4:19:37 PM
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mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 4:30:21 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 4:32:49 PM
mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 4:40:45 PM
Claire: *her remorse turns to gratitude and relief, and her smile returns. she places a hand on his cheek and rests her forehead against his*
Sam: *now finding that Harry's head is out of reach, he pouts a bit, but remains quiet otherwise, wondering why his mother and this familiar fuzzy thing seemed to like each other*
Sam: *now finding that Harry's head is out of reach, he pouts a bit, but remains quiet otherwise, wondering why his mother and this familiar fuzzy thing seemed to like each other*
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 4:43:33 PM
mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 4:49:09 PM
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mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 5:23:46 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 5:28:36 PM
*they sleep*
MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT, MEANWHILE
Altodd: *has a strange dream. He couldn't call it frightening like the others - in fact, it almost seemed like his mind had produced some sort of erotic film for him to watch while he slept - but it was him - him and KEY. Together. Fully. And they were both enjoying it. And Altodd admitted, it did seem rather... pleasing. As terrible as that sounded. But this was only a dream (no it's not), and he and Key, he figured, could never have fallen together like that (you loved her)*
MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT, MEANWHILE
Altodd: *has a strange dream. He couldn't call it frightening like the others - in fact, it almost seemed like his mind had produced some sort of erotic film for him to watch while he slept - but it was him - him and KEY. Together. Fully. And they were both enjoying it. And Altodd admitted, it did seem rather... pleasing. As terrible as that sounded. But this was only a dream (no it's not), and he and Key, he figured, could never have fallen together like that (you loved her)*
mechadragon13 on May 7, 2011, 6:12:14 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 7, 2011, 6:14:24 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 2:47:27 PM
mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 2:52:01 PM
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mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 3:05:27 PM
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mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 3:14:34 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 3:17:53 PM
mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 3:21:12 PM
Sam: *wakes up, as if sensing the dark presence, and starts to cry loudly as soon as it sees it*
Claire: *is woken up, and sits up reluctantly* mrrrff... Sam, what is-- *sees the Umbra, and is immediately awake, reaching for the crossbow on her nightstand as she gets out of bed, quickly loading a bolt* D8<
Claire: *is woken up, and sits up reluctantly* mrrrff... Sam, what is-- *sees the Umbra, and is immediately awake, reaching for the crossbow on her nightstand as she gets out of bed, quickly loading a bolt* D8<
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 3:25:12 PM
Umbra: *seems to stare at her* Eeeee...!
meanwhile
Harry: *is woken up seconds after Claire does. Somehow, he knew something was very wrong. Running out of his room, through the dark halls of the stronghold, he runs over to Claire's room, practically breaking the door down when he enters* !!!
Umbra: *twists its head over to Harry* ... eeeeeee...!!
meanwhile
Harry: *is woken up seconds after Claire does. Somehow, he knew something was very wrong. Running out of his room, through the dark halls of the stronghold, he runs over to Claire's room, practically breaking the door down when he enters* !!!
Umbra: *twists its head over to Harry* ... eeeeeee...!!
mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 3:27:59 PM
Claire: *is startled by the door slamming open, but extremely relieved when it's Harry that comes through the door and not another one of those hooded freaks. Claire puts herself between the Umbra and the crib, pointing the crossbow at the Umbra, her main concern at the moment being keeping Sam safe*
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 3:30:48 PM
mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 3:35:25 PM
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mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 3:42:27 PM
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mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 3:52:00 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 3:58:49 PM
Harry: *shaking himself awake* Guhhmngh... *he slowly gets up, onto his feet*
Umbra: *shrieks when the bolts cuts through its other arm, then slashes at Claire*
Harry: !! *he then transforms into his beast form and grabs the Umbra* RAAUURRGH!!
Umbra: !! *struggles, hissing*
Harry: *rips the thing in half*
Umbra: *is ripped in half. Black smoke spreads everywhere and disappears*
Harry: *huffing from the adrenaline rush and simultaneous exhaustion the fight gave him*
Umbra: *shrieks when the bolts cuts through its other arm, then slashes at Claire*
Harry: !! *he then transforms into his beast form and grabs the Umbra* RAAUURRGH!!
Umbra: !! *struggles, hissing*
Harry: *rips the thing in half*
Umbra: *is ripped in half. Black smoke spreads everywhere and disappears*
Harry: *huffing from the adrenaline rush and simultaneous exhaustion the fight gave him*
mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 4:07:20 PM
Claire: !! *is suddenly awake from the shared rush, heart racing. that THING had come MUCH too close to killing all three of them* ....
Sam: *had been crying the entire time, at the sounds, and at the sight of the monsters--he had never seen Harry in his beast form either*
Claire: D:>... *takes Sam out of the crib, and rocks him back and forth, trying to calm him down* <:(
Sam: *had been crying the entire time, at the sounds, and at the sight of the monsters--he had never seen Harry in his beast form either*
Claire: D:>... *takes Sam out of the crib, and rocks him back and forth, trying to calm him down* <:(
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 4:10:03 PM
mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 4:15:38 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 4:18:32 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 1:27:41 PM
THE RACCOON: EVEN THAT WHOLE BIT WITH THE VOICES IN ALTODD'S HEAD. THAT'S US TOO. BUT THESE UMBRA ARE ESPECIALLY US, DON'TCHA KNOW.
Todd: ... What are they?
THE RACCOON: MANIFESTATIONS OF THE WORST SIDE OF ALTODD - CREATED FROM HIM. THEY EAT A PERSON'S HAPPINESS UNTIL THE VICTIM LIES DEAD ON THE GROUND. THEY KNOW NO FEAR, AND AS YOU NOW KNOW, ARE VERY HARD TO KILL BECAUSE OF THEIR SPEED.
Todd: They came from Altodd?
Todd: ... What are they?
THE RACCOON: MANIFESTATIONS OF THE WORST SIDE OF ALTODD - CREATED FROM HIM. THEY EAT A PERSON'S HAPPINESS UNTIL THE VICTIM LIES DEAD ON THE GROUND. THEY KNOW NO FEAR, AND AS YOU NOW KNOW, ARE VERY HARD TO KILL BECAUSE OF THEIR SPEED.
Todd: They came from Altodd?
mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 1:31:55 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 1:37:14 PM
THE RACCOON: BECAUSE YOU EXPERIENCED HIS VERY WORST, MOST EVIL ACTION AS A HUMAN BEING, AND THEREFORE, YOU AND HE ARE AFFECTED FAR WORSE THAN ANYONE ELSE BY THE UMBRA.
Umbra: *it appears, standing upright, it's hands twitching, and it's head looking around, as if sniffing for food*
Todd: !!! *stands up, ready to kill it*
Umbra: *doesn't attack*
THE RACCOON: THESE CREATURES ARE FAR MORE POWERFUL THAN ANY ZOMBIE, OR MOOK YOU'LL FACE. THEY REQUIRE TEAMWORK TO TAKE DOWN, BECAUSE ONE THEY'RE ON YOU, THERE'S NO WAY TO GET THEM OFF. AND IF THERE'S NO ONE THERE BESIDE YOU...
*suddenly Bob appears, but his eyes are white and blank. He immediately falls down, dead - the umbra had gotten to him already*
THE RACCOON: THERE GOES YOUR CHANCE FOR ESCAPE! HAH!
Umbra: *it appears, standing upright, it's hands twitching, and it's head looking around, as if sniffing for food*
Todd: !!! *stands up, ready to kill it*
Umbra: *doesn't attack*
THE RACCOON: THESE CREATURES ARE FAR MORE POWERFUL THAN ANY ZOMBIE, OR MOOK YOU'LL FACE. THEY REQUIRE TEAMWORK TO TAKE DOWN, BECAUSE ONE THEY'RE ON YOU, THERE'S NO WAY TO GET THEM OFF. AND IF THERE'S NO ONE THERE BESIDE YOU...
*suddenly Bob appears, but his eyes are white and blank. He immediately falls down, dead - the umbra had gotten to him already*
THE RACCOON: THERE GOES YOUR CHANCE FOR ESCAPE! HAH!
mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 1:40:36 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 1:46:29 PM
Todd: *stares at the stick man's body in horror - Bob had been HELPING THEM ESCAPE - he had POWER... and just like that, he was dead* Oh... oh my...
Umbra: *screeches its nails-on-chalkboard screech at Todd and Key* EEEEEEEEE...!!
Todd: D8>
THE RACCOON: DON'T WORRY. THIS ONE WON'T HURT YOU. I MADE SURE IT WOULDN'T. IT'S JUST HERE FOR YOU TO STUDY, I GUESS. GET TO KNOW YOUR ENEMY.
Umbra: *screeches its nails-on-chalkboard screech at Todd and Key* EEEEEEEEE...!!
Todd: D8>
THE RACCOON: DON'T WORRY. THIS ONE WON'T HURT YOU. I MADE SURE IT WOULDN'T. IT'S JUST HERE FOR YOU TO STUDY, I GUESS. GET TO KNOW YOUR ENEMY.
mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 1:48:16 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 1:54:02 PM
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TheGameArtCritic on May 5, 2011, 11:26:05 PM
mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 11:20:37 AM
Key: *flinches a bit, and looks down, her shoulders shake as she starts to cry. she slowly steps forward, and rests her forehead on Altodd's chest, continuing to cry--she didn't care it was him, it didn't matter right now--the memory was so vivid, so painful, that it almost felt like it had happened all over again*
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 11:24:46 AM
mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 11:47:39 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 11:51:06 AM
mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 12:04:35 PM
Key: *sniffles* ...th-thank you...I-- *freezes--ohhh no no no. NO. she wasn't doing this again, she wasn't going to fall for this AGAIN! putting her hands on his chest, she lightly pushes away from him, looking off to the side--she couldn't allow herself to fall for him, not again, not after all--STOP REMEMBERING IT!*
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 12:08:51 PM
mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 12:14:22 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 12:37:13 PM
mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 12:42:06 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 12:55:02 PM
Altodd: *he watches her run away from him (good good). It hurt to see her scared of him like that... but, as much as he didn't feel it, it was all his fault (my fault). There was no way he'd ever be able to connect with any of them. Altodd would stay alone - forever* ... *he walks away to his room. If anything, at least he was able to comfort her - helping Key made him feel better - like he was wanted. Or was he? She still ran (yes she did). She ran from HIM - he saw it. He understood. It was his fault (our fault)* No, YOUR fault! You did that to her - not me! YOU raped her - I would NEVER do that to her - I would NEVER be a monster like you were! *He stood huffing, realizing - (but you were. You were me once - you existed too - before me) - what? (you were innocent - and you are now. You don't remember what you suffered)* ... *Altodd left, walking over - dragging his feet - to his room*
meanwhile
Todd: *had come back from Harry's room a while ago, and had been worried about Key* Key! What happened - where... *he assumes, and this hurts him* ... did he hurt you again...? Did he... rape you... again?
meanwhile
Todd: *had come back from Harry's room a while ago, and had been worried about Key* Key! What happened - where... *he assumes, and this hurts him* ... did he hurt you again...? Did he... rape you... again?
mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 12:58:05 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 1:01:49 PM
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mechadragon13 on May 6, 2011, 1:23:54 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 6, 2011, 1:24:48 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 5, 2011, 11:47:24 AM
Todd: Alright - I'll talk to Harry. He seemed really off on the field. Obviously, he's still suffering from his... er... breakup with Claire. *he walks off to Harry's room*
Altodd: ... *he decides that he'll talk to Key. He couldn't hide what was happening to him forever - especially not after his outburst on the field*
Malvagita: This is our stronghold. Unfortunately, we must share this place with OVERLANDERS.
Altodd: ... *he decides that he'll talk to Key. He couldn't hide what was happening to him forever - especially not after his outburst on the field*
Malvagita: This is our stronghold. Unfortunately, we must share this place with OVERLANDERS.
mechadragon13 on May 5, 2011, 12:07:08 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 5, 2011, 12:10:05 PM
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mechadragon13 on May 5, 2011, 1:22:24 PM
Key: *her expression turns from fear to horror as he speaks--then she narrows her eyes and stares at hin in a silent fury. he remembers. somehow, he remembers, and he's coming to ask her about it!? she keeps her mouth shut, knowing what kind of words would come out--fortunately, her change in expression says enough*
TheGameArtCritic on May 5, 2011, 1:26:30 PM
mechadragon13 on May 5, 2011, 1:34:44 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 5, 2011, 1:37:25 PM
mechadragon13 on May 5, 2011, 1:56:51 PM
Key: !!! *is thrown back into that room, that dark, horrid room, held down by the throat as he violently forces himself upon her--the pain of it hits her like a speeding truck, and she cries out, she screams, she pleads/i] for release, feeling just as powerless and terrified as when he took her the first time* PLEASE, GOD, STOP IT, STOP!!
TheGameArtCritic on May 5, 2011, 2:03:01 PM
Umbra: *continues sucking the happiness out of Key, feeding itself*
Altodd: *had heard the scream, and immediately runs to the source - when he finds the umbra there, he nearly cries out in horror - this is a safe haven! There aren't supposed to be things like THAT here! (it wants us to die) The voices. The voices started again - no (yes) get out (can't) Altodd speaks quietly, his voice shaking* ... get out of my head...
Umbra: *continues to eat*
Altodd: *(I cannot - I am you - I will always be you) knowing that the creature that stood before him, attacking Key, was causing the voice to get louder, and much worse he figures he has no choice but to kill it - not that he wouldn't anyway - he had to save Key - he readies his sword*
Altodd: *had heard the scream, and immediately runs to the source - when he finds the umbra there, he nearly cries out in horror - this is a safe haven! There aren't supposed to be things like THAT here! (it wants us to die) The voices. The voices started again - no (yes) get out (can't) Altodd speaks quietly, his voice shaking* ... get out of my head...
Umbra: *continues to eat*
Altodd: *(I cannot - I am you - I will always be you) knowing that the creature that stood before him, attacking Key, was causing the voice to get louder, and much worse he figures he has no choice but to kill it - not that he wouldn't anyway - he had to save Key - he readies his sword*
mechadragon13 on May 5, 2011, 2:11:21 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 5, 2011, 2:17:28 PM
Altodd: *quickly, he plunges his sword right into the umbra, squeezing his eyes shut and gritting his teeth under his helmet as the voice screamed in his head - his OWN scream as if HE was the one in pain - he almost tried to pull the sword out, just to get the screaming to stop, but he didn't until all of the black smoke leaked out of the creature, leaving only a pile of ratty clothes behind. He looks over at Key*
... are you okay?
... are you okay?
mechadragon13 on May 5, 2011, 2:24:11 PM
Key: *staggers back against the wall, wide eyes staring blankly at the ground as her mind returned to reality. she puts a hand over her mouth and her eyes begin to water--she was still reeling from the vivid flashback, the pain, the words, all etched firmly into her mind--she doesn't respond to him at all*
TheGameArtCritic on May 5, 2011, 2:26:08 PM
mechadragon13 on May 5, 2011, 9:14:41 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 5, 2011, 11:23:56 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 4, 2011, 2:07:19 PM
Todd: Right. :(
Altodd: ... okay... *if he told Key about his dream - about ANY of it, she'd hate him more than she did now. He couldn't risk that*
*suddenly the air seemed to grow still and dead. Out of nothing fades in three frighteningly thin figures - each wearing what seemed to be Todd's hoodie and pants, but the bandages were like Altodd's arrangement, back before he committed suicide. They moved VERY quickly, on all fours, but awkwardly, as they were shaped like humans. They immediately went after Altodd first, screeching like nails on a chalkboard, their black, thin claws dragging across the ground with each limping step in their sprint*
Altodd: *suddenly finds himself on the floor, screaming more than he thought he was as SOMETHING was being sucked out of him, and into the THING on top of him - and what (submit submit) what were (they are you) th... (they are you) ...ey...? (submit submit submit)*
Todd: !!! ALTODD!!
Altodd: ... okay... *if he told Key about his dream - about ANY of it, she'd hate him more than she did now. He couldn't risk that*
*suddenly the air seemed to grow still and dead. Out of nothing fades in three frighteningly thin figures - each wearing what seemed to be Todd's hoodie and pants, but the bandages were like Altodd's arrangement, back before he committed suicide. They moved VERY quickly, on all fours, but awkwardly, as they were shaped like humans. They immediately went after Altodd first, screeching like nails on a chalkboard, their black, thin claws dragging across the ground with each limping step in their sprint*
Altodd: *suddenly finds himself on the floor, screaming more than he thought he was as SOMETHING was being sucked out of him, and into the THING on top of him - and what (submit submit) what were (they are you) th... (they are you) ...ey...? (submit submit submit)*
Todd: !!! ALTODD!!
mechadragon13 on May 4, 2011, 2:17:00 PM
Key: AAH!! *immediately points her pistols at the being and shoots where she knew she wouldn't hit Altodd as well--then suddenly, she was violently thrown to the ground, a hand grabbing her throat, forcing her against the bed--then she was back in the blank space, eyes still wide in terror--what the hell was THAT?!*
TheGameArtCritic on May 4, 2011, 2:25:24 PM
Todd: Key?? Are you okay -? DON'T FREAK OUT ON ME, TOO, OKAY??
Umbra: *still sucking out something from Altodd*
Altodd: *his thoughts slow to a crawl as the monster worked (let it kill you. Let it. Let it.) c... (you shouldn't be here. You know you shouldn't)*
Todd: Oh frack, whatsit DOING to him?? D8
Umbra: *still sucking out something from Altodd*
Altodd: *his thoughts slow to a crawl as the monster worked (let it kill you. Let it. Let it.) c... (you shouldn't be here. You know you shouldn't)*
Todd: Oh frack, whatsit DOING to him?? D8
mechadragon13 on May 4, 2011, 2:32:25 PM
Key: I-I-I Dunno, but if it's anything like what I just-- *shakes her head. don't think about it, don't think about it...* W-We need to get that thing off him!! *tries to shoot the thing again--a hand covers her mouth when she screams, pleads for him to let her go, taking away her only chance of rescue--* nnhh--I-I can't-- I can't hurt these things! D8>
TheGameArtCritic on May 4, 2011, 3:01:30 PM
Altodd: *he has stopped struggling (good) - he wanted the creature to kill him, now (good) - he couldn't go on, he had to die (yes, yes) yes... (let it kill you) let it... (you have to die - we must die)*
Todd: *instead of asking her "why not", Todd lunges at the creature on Altodd, ripping it off without a problem, then stabbing the screeching thing with his clawed gauntlets until it finally died, the clothing flattening out as a cloud of black smoke seeped out from inside it*
Altodd: *shaking, he gets up, almost falling down again. He picks his sword back up*
Todd: Altodd, are you okay? D:>
Altodd: *... and points it at himself*
Todd: !!! *yanks the sword out of his hand* WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING?? D8
Altodd: *quietly, his voice a dull drone* can't... can't live... can't go on...
Todd: D8 ...
Todd: *instead of asking her "why not", Todd lunges at the creature on Altodd, ripping it off without a problem, then stabbing the screeching thing with his clawed gauntlets until it finally died, the clothing flattening out as a cloud of black smoke seeped out from inside it*
Altodd: *shaking, he gets up, almost falling down again. He picks his sword back up*
Todd: Altodd, are you okay? D:>
Altodd: *... and points it at himself*
Todd: !!! *yanks the sword out of his hand* WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING?? D8
Altodd: *quietly, his voice a dull drone* can't... can't live... can't go on...
Todd: D8 ...
mechadragon13 on May 4, 2011, 3:28:01 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 4, 2011, 3:33:41 PM
Altodd: *in a quiet, begging voice* ... please give the sword back... I don't deserve to live... why couldn't you just let me die...?
Todd: *rips the helmet off of Altodd and gives him a good slap in the face*
Altodd: *his voice gains more emotion* AH!! Why'd you do that?? D8>
Todd: That thing DID SOMETHING to you... how did you feel when it was on you like that?
Altodd: ... I-I dunno... I just felt really REALLY depressed... I just... I wanted to die...
Todd: *to Key* ... maybe it ate happiness, or something.
Todd: *rips the helmet off of Altodd and gives him a good slap in the face*
Altodd: *his voice gains more emotion* AH!! Why'd you do that?? D8>
Todd: That thing DID SOMETHING to you... how did you feel when it was on you like that?
Altodd: ... I-I dunno... I just felt really REALLY depressed... I just... I wanted to die...
Todd: *to Key* ... maybe it ate happiness, or something.
mechadragon13 on May 4, 2011, 3:38:16 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 4, 2011, 3:40:18 PM
mechadragon13 on May 4, 2011, 9:16:24 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 4, 2011, 11:24:54 PM
Todd: ... you don't have to say it, Key.
Altodd: ... *he walks over and picks his helmet back up, placing it over his head. That thing - that creepy, shadowy FREAK did something besides just suck out his happiness - it made that voice in his head almost... stronger... and far more persuasive, it seems. But what WAS that monster - (it was you, you are a monster)* ... don't... don't say that...
Todd: Altodd?
Altodd: *(yes, you are a monster - you raped her, you monster - you can't come back - not fair)* I-I'm NOT a monster! Stop TALKING to me!!
Todd: *glances over at Key questioningly*
Altodd: ... *he walks over and picks his helmet back up, placing it over his head. That thing - that creepy, shadowy FREAK did something besides just suck out his happiness - it made that voice in his head almost... stronger... and far more persuasive, it seems. But what WAS that monster - (it was you, you are a monster)* ... don't... don't say that...
Todd: Altodd?
Altodd: *(yes, you are a monster - you raped her, you monster - you can't come back - not fair)* I-I'm NOT a monster! Stop TALKING to me!!
Todd: *glances over at Key questioningly*
mechadragon13 on May 5, 2011, 9:08:47 AM
TheGameArtCritic on May 5, 2011, 9:56:16 AM
Altodd: *he looks over at Todd and Key, who both looked confused - SCARED of him* Y-You can't hear it, can you? I-It really IS in my head... am I... am I crazy...?
Todd: *wants to say "yes you are" very much, but fears he may make things worse for Altodd* Hey, maybe that thing just messed you up a little - that's it. We'll just... avoid them.
Malvagita: *throws fireballs at one of the umbra, but they miss completely, as the thing was far to quick* Rrrrgh!
Umbra: *charges at him, slashing his chest with the quickness of a chainsaw*
Malvagita: !!! *takes the creature and sets it on fire* D8<
Umbra: *squirms when it begins to burn*
Todd: *wants to say "yes you are" very much, but fears he may make things worse for Altodd* Hey, maybe that thing just messed you up a little - that's it. We'll just... avoid them.
Malvagita: *throws fireballs at one of the umbra, but they miss completely, as the thing was far to quick* Rrrrgh!
Umbra: *charges at him, slashing his chest with the quickness of a chainsaw*
Malvagita: !!! *takes the creature and sets it on fire* D8<
Umbra: *squirms when it begins to burn*
mechadragon13 on May 5, 2011, 10:48:25 AM
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Key: ...which we are not. *nods* Okay. Let's go over there, then. *goes towards Altodd with Todd*
*a bluish-green something drops out of the sky, flailing about for a moment before righting itself and landing near the demon prince*
Arthemis: !! Malvagita! *hurries over, eyes narrowed from the sudden brightness of the blank space*
*a bluish-green something drops out of the sky, flailing about for a moment before righting itself and landing near the demon prince*
Arthemis: !! Malvagita! *hurries over, eyes narrowed from the sudden brightness of the blank space*
TheGameArtCritic on May 4, 2011, 1:49:11 PM
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mechadragon13 on May 3, 2011, 2:40:19 PM
Key: ...I can't do it because it makes me think too much of... *groans in frustration* you were right, okay?? I--It's impossible to tell you two apart just by looking at you. There, I said it.
meanwhile
Claire: Mhmm... *heads towards her new room. she enters it, finding a crib already in the corner (of course, they plan EVERYTHING...) she puts a half-asleep Sam in the crib, then gets into bed herself. she tries not to think of the empty spot in the bed next to her--tries and fails. the emptiness hurt too much to ignore*
meanwhile
Claire: Mhmm... *heads towards her new room. she enters it, finding a crib already in the corner (of course, they plan EVERYTHING...) she puts a half-asleep Sam in the crib, then gets into bed herself. she tries not to think of the empty spot in the bed next to her--tries and fails. the emptiness hurt too much to ignore*
TheGameArtCritic on May 3, 2011, 2:57:46 PM
mechadragon13 on May 3, 2011, 3:02:59 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 3, 2011, 3:12:05 PM
Todd: No, it's okay, Key. He really hurt you before he died - I totally get how uncomfortable this must be for you. *trying to lift the mood, he jokes a bit* ... I'm not gonna put my shirt back on, though. <:P
meanwhile
Harry: *he tries to think of something else - ANYTHING to keep his mind off of Claire, and help him sleep. He watches an old-fashioned clock tick back and forth on a nearby wall. He hoped that by watching the swinging arm, he could perhaps hypnotize himself into falling asleep (as silly as the idea sounded)*
meanwhile
Harry: *he tries to think of something else - ANYTHING to keep his mind off of Claire, and help him sleep. He watches an old-fashioned clock tick back and forth on a nearby wall. He hoped that by watching the swinging arm, he could perhaps hypnotize himself into falling asleep (as silly as the idea sounded)*
mechadragon13 on May 3, 2011, 3:16:35 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 3, 2011, 3:24:02 PM
Todd: I guess I'll take my pill now, though. I can be your passed-out teddy bear. XP *he leans over and takes his tranquilizer, then goes back to cuddling Key*
meanwhile
Harry: *though he can't fall asleep, Harry still found at least a little peace in knowing that Claire did still love him. Unless she was lying*
meanwhile
Harry: *though he can't fall asleep, Harry still found at least a little peace in knowing that Claire did still love him. Unless she was lying*
mechadragon13 on May 3, 2011, 3:32:01 PM
Key: *laughs a little at the idea--when he returns, she hugs him and squeezes him tightly, resting her head on his chest* goodnight, Todd...
meanwhile
Claire: *has this sinking feeling that Harry had doubts... how could she make him understand that she still loved him? she couldn't, not without getting close to him...*
meanwhile
Claire: *has this sinking feeling that Harry had doubts... how could she make him understand that she still loved him? she couldn't, not without getting close to him...*
TheGameArtCritic on May 3, 2011, 3:38:54 PM
mechadragon13 on May 3, 2011, 3:46:23 PM
Key: ...Uh oh. That's not... That's not good. D:> *bites her lip nervously, wondering if he'd be okay--ohmygoshireallyhopehe'llbeokaywhydidntinoticethatearlierohmygoshweareseriouslystupidorsomething* D8>
meanwhile
Claire: *falls asleep a little while later, wondering over and over if Harry really WAS doubting her...*
meanwhile
Claire: *falls asleep a little while later, wondering over and over if Harry really WAS doubting her...*
TheGameArtCritic on May 3, 2011, 3:58:40 PM
Todd: *completely passed out*
meanwhile, later
Altodd: *it was the middle of the night when he bolted upright from yet another nightmare - a RAPE - he RAPED Key! He... he (loved her) BARELY KNOWS her - how the hell did he get the sick idea of RAPING her (no, not sick)?? The image was so deeply engraved in his head, now, that no matter what, he couldn't make it go away. It was wrong (she lied to you) - no wonder she hated him (you were right) - he was a MONSTER (Todd Huntings, you were right)... no, he was wrong in doing that (you were right)* NO, I WAS WRONG!! *he stays perfectly still, staring blankly after he yelled fiercely at absolutely no one - no, someone had to be there - he wasn't just HEARING things!* COME OUT! I KNOW YOU'RE HERE - IT'S NOT LIKE I'M ARGUING WITH MYSELF! D8<
*but no one comes*
Altodd: *suddenly, he feels very scared. Very scared, and very alone*
meanwhile, later
Altodd: *it was the middle of the night when he bolted upright from yet another nightmare - a RAPE - he RAPED Key! He... he (loved her) BARELY KNOWS her - how the hell did he get the sick idea of RAPING her (no, not sick)?? The image was so deeply engraved in his head, now, that no matter what, he couldn't make it go away. It was wrong (she lied to you) - no wonder she hated him (you were right) - he was a MONSTER (Todd Huntings, you were right)... no, he was wrong in doing that (you were right)* NO, I WAS WRONG!! *he stays perfectly still, staring blankly after he yelled fiercely at absolutely no one - no, someone had to be there - he wasn't just HEARING things!* COME OUT! I KNOW YOU'RE HERE - IT'S NOT LIKE I'M ARGUING WITH MYSELF! D8<
*but no one comes*
Altodd: *suddenly, he feels very scared. Very scared, and very alone*
mechadragon13 on May 3, 2011, 4:07:39 PM
TheGameArtCritic on May 3, 2011, 4:13:30 PM
Todd: *with the drugs being far too powerful for him, he still stays fast asleep*
meanwhile
Altodd: *in the morning, having gotten no sleep, he stumbles out of bed and crashes into a fall, blankly staring at nothing with bleary eyes, his mind also blank - blank except for the memory of the rape. It couldn't be real, could it? It just COULDN'T be (only one way to find out)...* ...
meanwhile
Altodd: *in the morning, having gotten no sleep, he stumbles out of bed and crashes into a fall, blankly staring at nothing with bleary eyes, his mind also blank - blank except for the memory of the rape. It couldn't be real, could it? It just COULDN'T be (only one way to find out)...* ...
mechadragon13 on May 3, 2011, 4:16:56 PM
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Key: --!! *immediately feels uncomfortable, especially looking up at him like this--she felt small, powerless, vulnerable--the similarities were too great for her to take at the moment. she puts her hands against his chest and meekly tries to push him off, averting her eyes to the ceiling above him* w-w-wait--I can't...
meanwhile
Claire: .... *nods*
meanwhile
Claire: .... *nods*
TheGameArtCritic on May 3, 2011, 11:13:42 AM
mechadragon13 on May 3, 2011, 11:19:47 AM
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mechadragon13 on May 3, 2011, 11:36:47 AM
Key: *takes another deep breath, this time letting it out as a long sigh. she didn't know how to answer him. she flips on her side and puts an arm over him, snuggling into him* sorry... I-I just don't think we should...
meanwhile
Claire: *continues on to her room trying to hold back tears, for Sam's sake, and for Harry's sake. The worse she felt, the worse HE felt, and it would just keep going on and on and on...*
meanwhile
Claire: *continues on to her room trying to hold back tears, for Sam's sake, and for Harry's sake. The worse she felt, the worse HE felt, and it would just keep going on and on and on...*
TheGameArtCritic on May 3, 2011, 11:39:18 AM
mechadragon13 on May 3, 2011, 12:06:36 PM
Key: *merely buries her face in his shoulder in response. she couldn't understand it--why could she be HERE, next to him, but anything more... it wasn't like she was doing it on purpose either, she had been fully willing when he asked...* ...
meanwhile
Claire: *slows to a stop as she reaches the residential area, realizing that she didn't have a room. she sighs to herself, wondering if things could get any MORE complicated*
Sam: *is falling asleep against her shoulder*
meanwhile
Claire: *slows to a stop as she reaches the residential area, realizing that she didn't have a room. she sighs to herself, wondering if things could get any MORE complicated*
Sam: *is falling asleep against her shoulder*