My poems
Submitted August 25, 2009 Updated March 8, 2011 Status Incomplete | Here are some poems I''ve been working on.
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - fruit of life
Submitted: August 25, 2009 • Updated: August 25, 2009
Word count: 97 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 413
Chapter 2 - just one of my rants
Submitted: March 26, 2010 • Updated: March 26, 2010
Word count: 446 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 389
Chapter 3 - Horror's
Submitted: April 2, 2010 • Updated: April 2, 2010
Word count: 232 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 371
Chapter 4 - Data
Submitted: April 23, 2010 • Updated: April 23, 2010
Word count: 214 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 373
Chapter 5 - love
Submitted: July 19, 2010 • Updated: July 19, 2010
Word count: 182 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 364
Chapter 6 - How much i care
Submitted: August 28, 2010 • Updated: August 28, 2010
Word count: 127 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 386
Chapter 7 - Inner side
Submitted: October 18, 2010 • Updated: October 18, 2010
Word count: 252 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 379
Chapter 8 - Hidden emotions
Submitted: October 18, 2010 • Updated: October 18, 2010
Word count: 359 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 352
Chapter 9 - A poem for her
Submitted: October 20, 2010 • Updated: October 20, 2010
Word count: 521 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 372
Chapter 10 - Used
Submitted: December 5, 2010 • Updated: December 5, 2010
Word count: 243 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 321
Chapter 11 - dispersed
Submitted: February 27, 2011 • Updated: February 27, 2011
Word count: 148 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 326
Chapter 12 - my rememberance
Submitted: March 8, 2011 • Updated: March 8, 2011
Word count: 126 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 281
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ShadowMagic on October 2, 2011, 9:58:57 AM
Your poems are awesome...I wish i could write like this...but i can never find the right wordsShadowMagic on October 18, 2010, 4:42:54 PM
Lawl ^3^ LIGGY WAS HERE!!!! got to love the ol' guy, this guy inspired me to keep writing even when things went to hell for me.
True words of wisdom <3 I am still writing a story with him to this day.
My comment on this piece:
as i read this i kind of pictured this with a rhythmic song. sharp and fast motion. Gaaa i wish i could explain myself better....i can only do it better with pictures... well in short i like this very much. <3
keep on writing ^3^
ShadowMagic on October 18, 2010, 4:25:37 PM
That is deep.... it is easy to get lost, an the fun part is picking your self off the floor and gluing whats left of your self back together. I guess that is life, what doesn't kill you make's you stronger (or more rough around the edges)^3^ keep writing my friend
Viddax on August 7, 2010, 8:37:49 PM
frack i need to get out moreViddax on May 21, 2010, 6:35:02 AM
most of this is just me free writing and on a rantliggybird on May 14, 2010, 7:29:06 AM
This captures the struggle to remain true to ourselves in the face of the confusing diversity of our feelings and of other people.liggybird on May 14, 2010, 7:17:59 AM
I like how you describe the overwhelming mass of data that surrounds us, then end this by pointing out that what matters is living, learning and experiencing things (data)on the level of our living senses. (I've also often thought how there do seem to be quite a few similarities between humans and computers, lol.)liggybird on December 19, 2009, 7:23:59 PM
I think it's very effective to have this as a long, unpunctuated sentence Viddax. Doing it that way, for me, emphasises the impression of time's 'unstoppability'. Lovely strong opening. I also like the (irregular?) way you shift from one rhyme to the next. Very poignant ending.