TRAPPED! *A Different Kind of Reality Show*
Submitted December 13, 2003 Updated May 27, 2004 Status Incomplete | It's all of your favorite anime and game men trapped in the same room for as long as the creator (that's me!) feels like it! How long will it take before they all kill each other? It won't take long, that's for sure!
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Chapter 1 - Day One of Chaos
Submitted: December 13, 2003 • Updated: December 13, 2003
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Chapter 2 - New Members, Sugar, and Radioactive Sqiurrells *Oh
Submitted: December 14, 2003 • Updated: December 14, 2003
Word count: 3221 • Size: 18k • Comments: 6 • views: 134
Chapter 3 - Evil Pshycotic New Members With Switchblades
Submitted: December 15, 2003 • Updated: December 15, 2003
Word count: 1438 • Size: 8k • Comments: 6 • views: 124
Chapter 4 - Not Another Badly Written Jerry Springer Parody!
Submitted: December 17, 2003 • Updated: December 17, 2003
Word count: 1191 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 117
Chapter 5 - Attack of Rabid Clone!
Submitted: December 17, 2003 • Updated: December 17, 2003
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Chapter 6 - The Rabid Clones are Coming!
Submitted: March 10, 2004 • Updated: March 10, 2004
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Chapter 7 - An Uncanny Alliance
Submitted: March 17, 2004 • Updated: March 17, 2004
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Chapter 8 - Are You My Mommy?
Submitted: March 20, 2004 • Updated: March 20, 2004
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Chapter 9 - Seto...He's What's for Dinner
Submitted: March 27, 2004 • Updated: March 27, 2004
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Chapter 10 - And Now, This Public Service Announcement
Submitted: March 31, 2004 • Updated: March 31, 2004
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Chapter 11 - Hello Morons
Submitted: April 1, 2004 • Updated: April 1, 2004
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Chapter 12 - Read This...QUICK!
Submitted: April 1, 2004 • Updated: April 1, 2004
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Chapter 13 - To bishy ...
Submitted: April 10, 2004 • Updated: April 10, 2004
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Chapter 14 - Silver and Hiei are Doing WHAT?!
Submitted: April 13, 2004 • Updated: April 13, 2004
Word count: 2264 • Size: 12k • Comments: 23 • views: 245
Chapter 15 - The Training Begins (and Ends too!)
Submitted: April 19, 2004 • Updated: April 19, 2004
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Chapter 16 - To a-drawer-4ever...
Submitted: April 20, 2004 • Updated: April 20, 2004
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Chapter 17 - Kurama V.S The Clones!
Submitted: April 24, 2004 • Updated: April 24, 2004
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Chapter 18 - "Kaiba's Roasting On an Open Fire!"
Submitted: May 26, 2004 • Updated: May 26, 2004
Word count: 3525 • Size: 19k • Comments: 13 • views: 195
Chapter 19 - And the Part Goes To...
Submitted: May 27, 2004 • Updated: May 27, 2004
Word count: 594 • Size: 3k • Comments: 18 • views: 152
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Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on July 17, 2006, 6:13:24 AM
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on (Chapter: index)
If it were possible, I'd like to know how you thought up the idea for TRAPPED. I'd like to, as I'm sure I've told you 2 or 3 times now, start my own edition of TRAPPED, called.......Well, the title will be another word for TRAPPED, if I can think of one. Could you help me?Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on July 17, 2006, 6:00:35 AM
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on (Chapter: 19)
*watches Silver run, then walks off* I know some weird people.Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on July 17, 2006, 5:57:03 AM
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on (Chapter: 18)
.........What children.......What fools.......Â
The guys: *nod in agreement, then continue playing black jack*
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Me: I WIN!*grabs their money, Sephy's sword, Yugi's, Kaiba's, and Marik's God Cards, and everyone elses weapons, forging them together to create the shiny lemon drop of doom!!
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on July 17, 2006, 5:36:10 AM
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on (Chapter: 17)
Silver: *Sighs* Oh well... Guess there are worse things than being on the bottom of a pile of hot guys.
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Yeah, for a girl, I'm sure there is nothing better.
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on July 17, 2006, 5:20:11 AM
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on (Chapter: 16)
I never yell at people like you, who entertain me with the rediculousness of your hilarious stories which I really want to make. I'm better at making stories than fan art, or art period. Keep going with TRAPPED! Make a sequel, if you like, or I could. Of course, I'd speak the truth and say the original was yours.Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on July 17, 2006, 5:15:41 AM
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on (Chapter: 15)
Link: How come I'm not here? I've been left out!!!!They always leave me out when things get good!!!*runs away and hides in closet with Zelda, crying*Â
Me:.....Dumb arse!*locks closet door and pushes "How to Have a Baby" pamphlets under it* Have fun, you two.
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on July 17, 2006, 4:57:01 AM
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on (Chapter: 14)
*steals Sephy and hands him to my girlfriend, who absolutely adores him*watches as she spends endless hours of ball-shocking-goodness, then hands him back to Silver*Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on July 17, 2006, 4:18:44 AM
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on (Chapter: 13)
if possible, I'd like to know if I could join this story.Â
Me on a good day: not much hyperness, but much comedy, and a lot of serious when needed or bored. Does own stunts and likes to goes insane and rabid like a fangirl, but prefers to chew on people's heads......Yes, the ones on their shoulders. Has big problem with Marik, Kaiba.....Sora's gone, so that leaves the other two, only. Likes bashing people with evil hammer of Ultimate DOOM, and with Tsuriga, favorite sword, made myself. Likes to kick people in nuts when they tick me off, or when I'm bored. Would get along best with Link, Yami, Sephiroth, and Cloud. Would still kick their nuts, if they actually have any. Only fear would definitely be rabid vampiric Sora clones hidden away in Silver's basement. Only weakness is: Can not resist red wine, which means I am an alcoholic, but I don't get drunk. Goes berserk and must be tied down if given a lots of 3 Musketeers, Dr. Pepper, and Cherry flavored popsicles.
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You could ignore this comment, and the information given, if you wanted to. I was just telling you, if you wanted to add me to the story. Or I could make one like this, but it's reversed, with girls trapped and I'm watching their every move. You could be a part of that.....*is bored, loves this story, would love to be in it, and likes Final Fantasy*
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~Avankiri Amaranth, Ghost of Perdition~
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on July 17, 2006, 4:05:55 AM
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on (Chapter: 12)
*grabs cookie in mid-air and chomps on it, smashing Hiei with the super ultra large 1337 hammer of X-TRA LARGE DOOOOOOOOOMINESS!*watches Hiei fall through Earth's core, out the other side, and into absolute oblivion*.....Ok, I'll bring him back for the peasure of we audience people.*drags Hiei back*Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on July 17, 2006, 3:58:35 AM
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on (Chapter: 11)
You're not a jerk.*disagrees with "SPIKE HEAD" and sets Bahamut loose on him* Fly my dragon of demise! Fly!*B. eats SPIKE HEAD, then pukes and flies away*Â
I guess he didn't taste too good. Anyway, the only question I have is: Where did Link go?*looks around and throws Ganondorf and Zelda into the room, Link doesn't appear*
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Me:*looks stunned* He didn't show up, and poor little Zelda is getting brutally beaten here.........Oh well.*walks off*
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on July 17, 2006, 3:54:22 AM
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on (Chapter: 10)
Lol.*sing-song* Yami and silver, sitting in a tree.F-u-*-*-i-n-g.*runs off, still singing*Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on July 17, 2006, 3:46:50 AM
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on (Chapter: 9)
*shoves Talim at Riku Clones* Kill him/her, my EEEEEVVVVVVVVIIIIIIILLLLLLL little buddies!!!!!! Kill him/her.Â
((What's your gender, Talim?*too lazy to check Talim's profile to see*))
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on July 17, 2006, 3:36:18 AM
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on (Chapter: 8)
Exactly what are you and Hiei doing in your bedroom, anyway?Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on July 17, 2006, 3:18:13 AM
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on (Chapter: 6)
Must read all, like Maroon said. I hope you can make more stories. If you want help, I could.Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on July 17, 2006, 2:24:16 AM
Demon_of_the_Dark_Fall_clan on (Chapter: 1)
The entire story itself is hysterical. When I tried to read it, I couldn't stop laughing. I like this story. Could you possibly make another one like this, except have females in it and a guy trapping them, with security cameras and sex toys in the room. the girls find a way to please themselves....*cough cough* Or you could just do one with girls and guys, and frack up their lives just like this one!*had faved a while back.KingdomHeartShera on January 17, 2006, 1:49:57 AM
KingdomHeartShera on (Chapter: 1)
OMG, funny! Sounds like me when I sleep .. . I sleepwalk and sleeptalk. Though not about chestnuts or doughnuts . .. lol. Good job! Only, next time, can you put it so it's easier to read?theGhostofInuYasha on September 14, 2005, 11:14:33 AM
theGhostofInuYasha on (Chapter: 19)
*sigh* I guess I missed the part......RIGHT MORE SOOOOOOOOON!!!!
Thanatos: Make sure to add lots of pain death and destruction. You know the usual...
theGhostofInuYasha on September 14, 2005, 11:10:45 AM
theGhostofInuYasha on (Chapter: 18)
PLEASE CAN I BE JULIET!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!! Yami would be my romeo! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! *begs for the next 3 hours* PLEASE!!!!!!Thnatos: DON"T DO IT!!!
theGhostofInuYasha on September 14, 2005, 10:55:29 AM
theGhostofInuYasha on (Chapter: 17)
YAMI!!!! YOUR A BASEBALL BAT!!!*Runs off crying and screaming*
WHY SILVER??? WHY!!!!!!??????
Thanatos: *chuckels* Nice chap!
Oh and Hiei, I give you a 10 on pain and creativity! Keep up the good torture!
YAMI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
theGhostofInuYasha on September 14, 2005, 10:42:16 AM
theGhostofInuYasha on (Chapter: 15)
I LOVE THE MINI SHOW!!!! You should definitly make it a seris! Just don't kill Yami!Thanatos: Really? I say blow his freaking brains out!
theGhostofInuYasha on September 12, 2005, 12:00:12 PM
theGhostofInuYasha on (Chapter: 14)
PLUSHIES!!!!! *foams at mouth*MUST HAVE PLUSHIES!!!!!!!
Thanatos: 0.O' creepy....
PLUSHIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
theGhostofInuYasha on September 11, 2005, 11:13:06 PM
theGhostofInuYasha on (Chapter: 8)
SETO HAS BEEN CAPTURED!!! I am soooooooo happy!! * begins dancing around with thanatos*NO MORE SETO!!!!
T: WHAT THE.....!!!!!?????
theGhostofInuYasha on September 11, 2005, 11:07:22 PM
theGhostofInuYasha on (Chapter: 7)
Can i adopt a clone? PURLEASE!!!!T: -.-' NO CHIBIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
theGhostofInuYasha on September 11, 2005, 10:53:53 PM
theGhostofInuYasha on (Chapter: 6)
YOU GO GET EM' YAMI!!!!!Thanatos: KILL THE CHIBI BASTERDS! DEATH TO ALL THINGS CHIBI!!!!!
*picks up pom poms* GO YAMI!!!
theGhostofInuYasha on September 10, 2005, 3:02:20 PM
theGhostofInuYasha on (Chapter: 5)
*cries* MY POOR YAMI STUCK WITH A CHESTNUT CRAZY CHIBI!!!! well at least i still have Thanatos...*looks around* Thanatos?!(Meanwhile about three miles away)
T: I'm FREE! I'M FREE!!!!!!
-.-' Great now I have to go get him..... I'LL BE BACK MY PAHAROH!
theGhostofInuYasha on September 10, 2005, 2:48:16 PM
theGhostofInuYasha on (Chapter: 4)
*sweatdrop* YAMI I'M COMING!!!!!*sits down on stool* THANATOS WHATS TAKING SO LONG WITH THAT DOOR?
T: I'm working as fast as I can! It would help if you got THESE FREAKING SQUIRRELS OFF MY BACK!
^_^ Sorry, but I can't! I have to look pretty for Yami! Get Mortis to do it.
theGhostofInuYasha on September 10, 2005, 2:40:45 PM
theGhostofInuYasha on (Chapter: 3)
YAMI!!!!!!! I will save you!!!!Thanatos help me! *grabs tool kit*
T: No...I beleive i like him best right where he is....
Do you want to go in the room with them? -.-'
T: On second thought, I'll get the crowbar! ^_^'
Desuca on July 17, 2005, 12:01:32 PM
Desuca on (Chapter: 2)
Must...save....Cloud!!!!*Takes out anti boys-traped-in-a-room-with-a-steel-door-lasers-and-a-dead-chihuahua kit*.Must....free...Cloud*opens door*Thank you anti-squirrely scouts!jura on June 3, 2005, 1:06:14 PM
jura on (Chapter: 5)
NonononononononooonononononoCloud:oww!
Me:Now what have I've been telling you people cloud is under strict contract with me and as long as you want to borrow him keep your mini idiots of his nuts'thouse are mind to play with'(Thinks)
Cccclllloooouuuudddd!
Cloud:oh no not again!(runs like the wind but gets caught in my new attack white rose whip)Owwwwwwwww!
hykkadurain on January 12, 2005, 1:36:04 AM
hykkadurain on (Chapter: 19)
hey why dont' you Update its' driving me crazy. Hey make A fanfic aboutinuyasha because Kaiba is an arse holehykkadurain on January 12, 2005, 1:36:01 AM
hykkadurain on (Chapter: 19)
hey why dont' you Update its' driving me crazy. Hey make A fanfic aboutinuyasha because Kaiba is an arse holehykkadurain on December 30, 2004, 1:40:31 PM
hykkadurain on (Chapter: 19)
hey you should up date today but still nice story oh and you should add Mr. game and watch or kirbyhykkadurain on December 30, 2004, 1:40:23 PM
hykkadurain on (Chapter: 19)
hey you should up date today but still nice story oh and you should add Mr. game and watch or kirbyhykkadurain on December 30, 2004, 1:40:17 PM
hykkadurain on (Chapter: 19)
hey you should up date today but still nice story oh and you should add Mr. game and watch or kirbyShadowRulz on December 5, 2004, 2:56:25 PM
ShadowRulz on (Chapter: 9)
Kaiba SUXSShadowRulz on December 5, 2004, 2:27:36 PM
ShadowRulz on (Chapter: 6)
Please get rid of kaiba cuz he sux yeah u heard me he SUXGamerdude on September 12, 2004, 6:57:25 PM
Gamerdude on (Chapter: 19)
O and anyone that steals from my character will be hunted down until the item is given back or the individual that stole from him is dead. So, Theives? Beware. O and occasionally he goes insane and starts attacking the walls and furniture with his sword for no apparrent reason.Gamerdude on September 12, 2004, 7:37:02 AM
Gamerdude on (Chapter: 19)
can you add my fan-character to your fic? he is 16, male, white shirt, blue pants, carries a 6-foot sword that is indestructible and cuts through anything except for another sword, his hair is green, and has dragon wings (green). His friends are Yami Yugi and Tails (if you add the Sonic-x cast). He is out to get Marik (Yugi-oh), Robotnik (Sonic-x), Sephiroth (Kingdom Hearts), and is out to humiliate Kaiba in a duel (hates that self-centered, power-hungry, greedy little fool). He has the ability of healing, ressurection, enhanced speed, enhanced reaction time, flight (dragon wings), lightning magic, and enhanced strength. Getting him drunk makes him hunt down (mindlessly) the person that committed the horrible act. He does not get sugar-high like so many humans do. I hope you also add some members of the Sonic cast into here.Gamerdude on September 12, 2004, 5:02:53 AM
Gamerdude on (Chapter: 3)
(laughing his @$$ off) since when has Sephiroth cared? haha!bishyboylover on August 12, 2004, 11:46:08 AM
bishyboylover on (Chapter: 19)
When are u gonna update?It's been 2 freakin' months and I've been waiting for a while!Talim22 on August 7, 2004, 11:13:04 AM
Talim22 on (Chapter: 19)
YAY U BURNT BRITTNEY SPEAES CDS!!!...dude i am on a fanfic high right now...heh heh heh...keep writing and i would love a part in this fic! PLEEEEAAASSSEEE? 6.6 (those are puppy-dog eyes)
Talim22 on August 7, 2004, 10:47:39 AM
Talim22 on (Chapter: 15)
That was evil..and FUNNY! *laughs uncontrolably for an hour and then calms down.* I luve the little mini-show! ^_^ keep writing!Talim22 on August 7, 2004, 10:37:13 AM
Talim22 on (Chapter: 14)
u did a good job on this chap.and, i was trying to think of something else, and it worked for like, a couple of sentences. but you are really good at typing that!
Talim22 on August 7, 2004, 10:20:34 AM
Talim22 on (Chapter: 11)
HaHa very funny Hiei I read last chap. and I know it's you. AND IF YOU LAY ONE HAND ON LINK YOU WILL DIIIEEEE!!!!! *grabs magic wand* And i will turn you into a toaster like i do to faries in my fanfic!Talim22 on August 7, 2004, 10:14:37 AM
Talim22 on (Chapter: 9)
Chestnuts! HaHa!, I said the evil word, what r u gonna do about it? give me to the Riku clones? I think not! *pulls out an M-16* the clones will die before they reach me! MUAHAHAHA!oh, and I'm allergic to peanut butter so I'l give the cookie to my brothers. ^_^ Keep writing!
Talim22 on August 7, 2004, 5:21:37 AM
Talim22 on (Chapter: 8)
GRRR! WHERE IS LINK?!?!?!?!?!?good fic. super funny. keep writing! ^_^
Talim22 on August 7, 2004, 5:01:25 AM
Talim22 on (Chapter: 5)
YAY^_^ Link is safe!!!Talim22 on August 7, 2004, 4:36:39 AM
Talim22 on (Chapter: 2)
AHHHH NO NOT LINK NO! 8SAVES LINK AND IS THEN FORCED TO SAVE KURAMA BECAUSE OF A FRIEND*your story is really good, and funny too. Keep on writing!
a-drawer-4ever on July 11, 2004, 7:32:33 PM
a-drawer-4ever on (Chapter: 19)
Liz: yeah what happened to the story we should all pick-it outside silvers house ^^ yayness! Hiei: how about let's not!
Ren: Ed want a nap...
Liz: oh well hope you come back to it sometime..
Maroon005 on July 4, 2004, 2:18:09 PM
Maroon005 on (Chapter: 19)
UHHHH...what happened to the story?????? i guess u got tired and ran out of ideas.^^ hehe but still i LOVED it soo far. SO FRICKIN FUNNY~~!!!~~~omg..i cant stop laughing..hehe ur a great writer. BRAVO!!!Maroon005 on July 4, 2004, 2:13:54 PM
Maroon005 on (Chapter: 18)
is it too late to sign up for the juliet??? i guess so..:(Maroon005 on July 4, 2004, 1:56:27 PM
Maroon005 on (Chapter: 17)
yami a baseball? pegasus in a thong? HAHAHHAHA too funny!!!! active imagination man! Maroon005 on July 4, 2004, 1:42:13 PM
Maroon005 on (Chapter: 15)
HAHAHAAAA too funny...got to go read the other chapters...only 4 left..Maroon005 on July 4, 2004, 12:35:40 PM
Maroon005 on (Chapter: 14)
i thought that u and Hei were making cookies or eating them. hehe nice like always...next chapMaroon005 on July 4, 2004, 9:33:46 AM
Maroon005 on (Chapter: 11)
UHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH....OKI...do some yuga it helps ^^Maroon005 on July 4, 2004, 9:27:40 AM
Maroon005 on (Chapter: 9)
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!! SACRIFICE!!!!!!! HEHEHE i wonder what the costumes are?? lol nice job yet again.Maroon005 on July 4, 2004, 9:18:41 AM
Maroon005 on (Chapter: 8)
HEHEHE....OMG TOO FUNNY...poor seto..hehehe ...im off to the next chapter! *i have no life -_-Maroon005 on July 4, 2004, 9:12:15 AM
Maroon005 on (Chapter: 7)
OMG how do u do it? each chapter gets funnier than the one before~!!~~ this is soooo going to my favs.Maroon005 on July 4, 2004, 7:09:07 AM
Maroon005 on (Chapter: 6)
OMG THIS IS TOO FUNNY!!!! ahhh my stomach hurts. i wish i had one of those little bomb thingies. ^^ 13 more chapter....MUST READ ALL O_OMaroon005 on July 4, 2004, 7:00:42 AM
Maroon005 on (Chapter: 5)
HEHEHHEE...funny chapter! *something hits me in the head* CHESTNUTS????!?!?!??! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Maroon005 on July 4, 2004, 6:42:25 AM
Maroon005 on (Chapter: 3)
LOOOOL!!!! well off to next chapter*looks down list hmmm..O_O 16 more...DAMNNN. i joined the party late.Maroon005 on July 4, 2004, 6:33:05 AM
Maroon005 on (Chapter: 2)
HHEHEHHEEH LOOOL!!! this is soo funny! next chapter.a-drawer-4ever on June 18, 2004, 4:53:40 AM
a-drawer-4ever on (Chapter: 19)
Me: yayness let the show begin! hey maybe you could do 'a midnights summer dream' hint, hint!kurama: romeo and juliet and now... this!?
Me: like silver said, lighten up!
Hiei: (poor kurama..) get over it kurama!
Me: your SOOOOO understanding, hiei...
Ren: why am I here?
Me: dunno! sooo just think about it silver! ^_^
hippo_afro_puff on June 15, 2004, 8:17:19 AM
hippo_afro_puff on (Chapter: 18)
Can I be Juliet?Can Kiba (from Wolf's Rain) be Romeo?Do I ask to many questions?hippo_afro_puff on June 15, 2004, 8:17:18 AM
hippo_afro_puff on (Chapter: 18)
Can I be Juliet?Can Kiba (from Wolf's Rain) be Romeo?Do I ask to many questions?hippo_afro_puff on June 15, 2004, 8:17:18 AM
hippo_afro_puff on (Chapter: 18)
Can I be Juliet?Can Kiba (from Wolf's Rain) be Romeo?Do I ask to many questions?hippo_afro_puff on June 15, 2004, 8:17:18 AM
hippo_afro_puff on (Chapter: 18)
Can I be Juliet?Can Kiba (from Wolf's Rain) be Romeo?Do I ask to many questions?hippo_afro_puff on June 15, 2004, 8:17:17 AM
hippo_afro_puff on (Chapter: 18)
Can I be Juliet?Can Kiba (from Wolf's Rain) be Romeo?Do I ask to many questions?hippo_afro_puff on June 15, 2004, 8:17:17 AM
hippo_afro_puff on (Chapter: 18)
Can I be Juliet?Can Kiba (from Wolf's Rain) be Romeo?Do I ask to many questions?hippo_afro_puff on June 15, 2004, 8:17:17 AM
hippo_afro_puff on (Chapter: 18)
Can I be Juliet?Can Kiba (from Wolf's Rain) be Romeo?Do I ask to many questions?hippo_afro_puff on June 15, 2004, 8:17:07 AM
hippo_afro_puff on (Chapter: 18)
Can I be Juliet?Can Kiba (from Wolf's Rain) be Romeo?Do I ask to many questions?hippo_afro_puff on June 15, 2004, 8:17:03 AM
hippo_afro_puff on (Chapter: 18)
Can I be Juliet?Can Kiba (from Wolf's Rain) be Romeo?Do I ask to many questions?hippo_afro_puff on June 15, 2004, 7:36:03 AM
hippo_afro_puff on (Chapter: 14)
me have sephy now?*does really cute face*pweeeaaasssee?FrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on June 13, 2004, 10:59:16 AM
FrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on (Chapter: 17)
or...SPIKE!!!!!!!! Spike, Spike, hez my man, if he cant do it, no one can!FrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on June 13, 2004, 10:57:38 AM
FrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on (Chapter: 17)
meep. Pegasus in a-a th-th-thong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!O.O! O.O! O.O! O.O! *cough* Kenshin or Inuyasha could come... or wolfwood! FrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on June 13, 2004, 10:47:30 AM
FrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on (Chapter: 16)
sexY I mean...FrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on June 13, 2004, 10:46:46 AM
FrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on (Chapter: 16)
WHOOT!!!!!! Pegasus is seeeeeeeeeex! Erm, not in a thong tho, Id prefer the freakish suits thank uFrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on June 13, 2004, 10:43:52 AM
FrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on (Chapter: 15)
*calm voice* There goes Marik.lol Looks painful. I rate the pain 99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999 FrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on June 13, 2004, 10:30:57 AM
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Ibishyboylover on June 13, 2004, 12:25:23 AM
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YOU MUST UPDATE!!I HAVE BEEN WAITING AND THE ANTICIPATION IS KILLER!I CAN WAIT NO MORE!!!FrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on June 10, 2004, 4:37:17 AM
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and I LIKED Riku! Not anyMORE!!! Hes trying 2 kill Seto!!!!!!!!!!! *cries* *cough* When Seto iz freed I shall add this story 2 my favs!!FrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on June 10, 2004, 4:29:44 AM
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*does a super pose* Ill save u Seto! eeeeeeeeeep!! nevermind! FrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on June 10, 2004, 4:23:49 AM
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I CALLED FOR THE HAMSTER EXTERMINATOR!!!!!!!!!!!! *cough* FrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on June 10, 2004, 3:57:18 AM
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meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep..........................................................FrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on June 8, 2004, 7:02:01 AM
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O.O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!S-s-s-eto i-is a g-gir-girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!FrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on June 8, 2004, 2:10:41 AM
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...................meep.........................................................Master_of_Darkness on May 31, 2004, 11:21:06 PM
Master_of_Darkness on (Chapter: 13)
happy poke yeah the story is so cute.have a happy day silver making the guys lives miserable.Very nice story keep it up.bishyboylover on May 31, 2004, 2:29:05 AM
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Darkraven scares me sometimes....like muffinz!Die muffinz! *Runs away screaming "THE MUFFINZ R ATTACKING!"*coca-cola on May 27, 2004, 11:57:24 AM
coca-cola on (Chapter: 19)
yay go Silver with her subliminal messages!!!!!! :D can't wait to read that new fanfic of your's bishyboylover on May 27, 2004, 9:20:11 AM
bishyboylover on (Chapter: 19)
YAY!I think the part went to me because I was the only reviewer!Crazy people can't even comment.Anywho,yay!*Runs to costume store and buys a Juliet costume*EVIL BRITNEY SPEARS!*Burns Britney up with her flamethrower*Now that that's done,I'm gonna go find Kurama!*Runs off to who-knows-where*And you're welcome for helping you win that bet!I was always lucky in a way! =^-^=bishyboylover on May 27, 2004, 7:18:02 AM
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OOH!I've always wanted to do a play!I could be Lady Juliet,and Kurama could be Romeo! *Quotes Shakespeare* Romeo,Romeo,where for art thou,Romeo? *Unquote*What do ya think?Do I get the part? *Huggles Kurama plushie* Anywho,keep updating! *Does first comment dance*
Mew-Mint on May 3, 2004, 11:57:54 AM
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hehehe this i cool, Link sleeps like a log ^.^a-drawer-4ever on April 27, 2004, 6:19:06 AM
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Me: hiei did well...Hiei: thank you!
Silver: so hiei where DID you get that evil idea?
Hiei: *points to Liz*
Me: ehehehe.. what?
Silver: ...
Hiei: it was an evil-genius momment!
Me: well I loved your story silver! didn't we all?
All: yaynes!! more more more!
Me: you heard 'em now write your little fingers off!
coca-cola on April 25, 2004, 11:36:32 AM
coca-cola on (Chapter: 17)
LOL funny funny *sinff, sinff* poor poor Marik i feel your pain *laugh's insainly*, hay silver would you and Georgie come join me and hiei to watch Roes Red, o'ya Hiei needs help with the DVD player would you mine helping him???bishyboylover on April 24, 2004, 10:44:18 PM
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Kill the clones,Kurama!*Gets hit in the head with a chocolate Kurama*OW!*looks down at chocolate Kurama*Yay!I no eat this!Okay i will.*Eats the chocolate Kurama in one bite*Mmmmmm.Chocolate foxy hotness.^-^a-drawer-4ever on April 23, 2004, 2:25:55 AM
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Me: I'd love to torture vash evryday of de week 24 hours a day!Vash: *eating donuts* yum...
Me: and for my first fiendish act *swipes de donuts, and eats dem* muw ahahahha *choke* ... i'm better
Vash: no!!!
a-drawer-4ever on April 22, 2004, 4:43:10 AM
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Me: yayness! I can't believe you'd do dat just fer me! *grabs donut*Vahs: donut! *drools*
Me: muwa ahhahahha!! *eats donut greedily!*
Vash: ... *blink, blink* ARGH!! gimmie gimmie gimmie! wah!!
Me: evil me...>D
works for me silver!
bishyboylover on April 21, 2004, 7:01:38 AM
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U are gonna have ALOT of helpers by the end of this fic! I won't yell but u need to update. Thanks for putting me as the Official Torturer of Kurama,or else there will be some major fangirl killings.*Pulls scythe out of backpack* Hehehe......this is only for other fangirls.*Points to scythe*^-^bishyboylover on April 20, 2004, 6:30:25 AM
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*looks at Kurama plushie in hand and smiles* You could of given it to me, ya know. *fixes it with a spell so it looks alright* Yay! *Huggles plushie* Keep updating!a-drawer-4ever on April 20, 2004, 1:14:30 AM
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Me: *gets a totally evil look on her face, and follows hiei* this one you gotta hear!Kurama: ...
Kaiba: chocolate .. goood!
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well I only wanted to say great story I love your writing! Oo can you add Vash soon! maybe me sometime two mayeb! *halo, with horns holding it up*
kawii011 on April 15, 2004, 10:03:43 AM
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hahaha aewsome story! I thought you and Hiei were playing Video games, wow and what does the word pervert means anyways? Boy am I a slow learnera-drawer-4ever on April 14, 2004, 6:00:23 AM
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EEEK!!! HIEI PLUSHIES!!!!!!!! *grabs box and rippes it open, finds hiei and george plushies, Huggles hiei plushie and adds it to her VERY large collection, and looks at the little george plushie* hm...I can only be true to hiei and no other (except kurama) so... *hands kurama the george plushie* from me to you!^^ Kurama: Oo! it's very cute!
Me: your welcome!
Kurama: now I have to go save yami's and my butts *smooch* see ya later *runs behind the bed plotting*
Me: *heart eye's* sigh...
coca-cola on April 14, 2004, 3:50:15 AM
coca-cola on (Chapter: 14)
ummm kind off lol i'm pervered lol sorry i did put this in my first comment i did see what ya put o's well talk to ya laterbishyboylover on April 14, 2004, 1:57:01 AM
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When I said Hiei and Marth plushies I meant to say Hiei and GEORGE plushies.I am on a sugar high!Woohoo!Update or I shall sick my evil green monkeys on u!Better than evil green monkeys,I shall sick my army of rabid chibi Kurama clones on u!bishyboylover on April 13, 2004, 10:06:07 PM
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HAHAHA!Oh my god that is so darn funny!*gets hit in the head with a Hiei plushie and a Marth plushie*What the?*looks down at plushies*I'm not really someone who likes either so I'll just change these.*Casts a spell to change the Hiei and Marth plushies into Kurama and Inuyasha plushies*Thanks for the plushies!Keep updating!^-^coca-cola on April 13, 2004, 12:44:50 PM
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lol poor poor Kaiba*sinff, sinff* o'well keep up the awesome work and don't worry i have no life as'well lol, and i hope Sephy learns his leson lol well comment to ya later eclipsedmoongoddess482 on April 13, 2004, 8:54:15 AM
eclipsedmoongoddess482 on (Chapter: 14)
Okay, I forgot to add this but, I have to know; Did any of you think that me and Hiei were doing...something else? C'mon! You can tell me! I'll give you another plushie! ^_^bishyboylover on April 13, 2004, 6:28:16 AM
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Eclipsedmoongoddess482 needs to update her story.I can't wait to see what's gonna happen to Kaiba!And just to get me excited about the little part with me and Kurama in the closet,I think I'm gonna listen to Itazura no KISS.I think it's the sixth ending theme for Inuyasha.I truley have no clue.^-^ Eclipsedmoongoddess,u must update!I am getting really excited!JoyKaiba on April 13, 2004, 5:50:53 AM
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Hehehe, it's me again. I would just like to say that I love the way your story is coming along. :holds fuzzy kitten up: Maybe I could have a make-out session with Joey in the closet. :grins happily: Once again, love your story. LOLbishyboylover on April 12, 2004, 9:54:15 PM
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One more thing I forgot,*steps aside to reveal the original mini Riku* I need to return this little fellow.^-^He did quite well (I can't spell if my life depended on it).He not only destroyed the evil,he drove all the teachers in my school insane and destroyed half the school!*Gives the little Riku a hug* I'm gonna miss ya,little buddy.bishyboylover on April 12, 2004, 5:29:36 AM
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YAY!Wait a sec.....didn't u say you somehow couldn't comment on your story?*ponders for a second* I'm done!^-^ *Runs around computer room screaming "Wahoo!I'm an O.T.K!"*And Kurama,don't worry,I don't bite.......much.And I'll go easy on yah in the closet!^-^
eclipsedmoongoddess482 on April 12, 2004, 1:19:08 AM
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Consider yourself a part of TRAPPED!!! ^_^ How does Kita sound to ya? (It's the fastest one for me to type and the easiest one for me to remember.) Oh and Kurama says that he would just LOVE to spend some time with you in a closet, right Foxy? *Grips Kurama's leash and smirks*Kurama: O.O *nods really fast*
Me: See? He can't wait! ^_^
bishyboylover on April 11, 2004, 10:38:37 PM
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Why am I always forgeting to put stuff in my comments?!?! Well,anywho, in the story you call call me one of these three names:B.B.L. (short for Bishyboyluver)
Kita (I don't know why,but I like that name!)
Reia (pronounced Raya)
I think that's everything,I forgot!My description!I have long red hair,red fox ears and ared fox tail,and green eyes!I will no longer bother you.^-^
bishyboylover on April 10, 2004, 9:35:51 AM
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And I forgot to add this- I would love afew minutes in a closet with the hot fox!*gets heartz in eyes*bishyboylover on April 10, 2004, 9:33:30 AM
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Thankies!*turns toward Kurama who is chained up and gagged in her room*Oh,man,this is gonna be fun!Kurama*who is still chained up and gagged*:*whimpers*
Me:And all is forgiven about neglecting mah comment!I kinda figured u wouldn't see it anyways!
bishyboylover on April 10, 2004, 1:41:44 AM
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I left a comment on chapter 5 and u still haven't given me a reply!I wanna know if I can be in the story ,too!I can take care of the chibi Riku(the original chibi)and torture Kurama with my affection!I won't disagree if ya say no but I just wanna know!eclipsedmoongoddess482 on April 7, 2004, 1:08:32 PM
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To a-drawer-4ever: Thanks! I am going to add a bunch of new guys after the Clone Wars...Thing and as for Hiei well, I can see where he's a bit out of character so I'll fix that 'lil problem. Hey! I know exactly how! And now, its off to Leash 'R Us! *Cue the evil laugh*a-drawer-4ever on April 7, 2004, 1:05:32 PM
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hey 'silver' can you add Vash? maybe a 'few others' -^_^- well thanks (btw make hiei a little more anti-social like his true personality) *grabs her Hiei, and shares a the sondae with him* ^^ *munch, munch*a-drawer-4ever on April 7, 2004, 12:55:46 PM
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1. hiei lives! (total hotness)2. kurama goes (dat's bad)
3. yami goes! (dat's bad)
4. kaiba goes! (dat's fine by me)
ok dat's my thoughts keep up the evil work!
a-drawer-4ever on April 7, 2004, 12:52:58 PM
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buwa hahhahahah!! *two thumbs up for hiei* Oo!! taking hiei's clothes? dat's new (I should have thought of that) >D well dat's all then gooodbye *grabs her plushy hiei*a-drawer-4ever on April 7, 2004, 12:35:17 PM
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as I have said before you are the lordess of all evilness! keep up the pure evilness!! a-drawer-4ever on April 7, 2004, 11:22:32 AM
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*eats donut* buwa hahahahahahahh!!! *bows down* you are the lord/lordess of all evilness *adds to fav.* bishyboylover on April 4, 2004, 9:48:36 AM
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And it's what you get when you mess with me!*huggles a chibi Kurama clone*Do that again and you get something much worse than me pummling you into the ground!Got that,Spikey?(hiei)eclipsedmoongoddess482 on April 4, 2004, 9:46:04 AM
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Me: *Looks down at Hiei (who's still underground)* See? This is what you get when you mess with me.Hiei: *Muffled* LET ME OUT OF HERE!
Me: Alright, fine! *Pulls on Hiei's hair untill he is above ground* Happy now?
Hiei: NO! My head hurts.
Me: And I thought I complained a lot. -_-; C'mon Spikey, I'll get ya some asprin.
bishyboylover on April 4, 2004, 9:45:52 AM
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Grrrr.......HIEI YOU JERK FACE SPIKY HAIRED PYROMANIAC!I SHALL KILL YOU FOR MAKING ME THINK THAT KURAMA WAS GOING TO DIE!*Hits hiei with a mallet so many times,the bumps on his head poke out through his hair*bishyboylover on April 4, 2004, 9:42:06 AM
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Hiei you crazy spiky-headed jerk face pyromaniac!How dare you say that Kurama was going to die!*hits Hiei with a mallet until the only thing you see is a few spiky bristles of hair poking out of the ground*eclipsedmoongoddess482 on April 4, 2004, 9:41:12 AM
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Me: *Frustrated* I swear I'm going to KILL that 'lil Spike-Head! (Hiei) Hiei: Hn. It's your fault. Shouldn't have messed with me.
Me: Yeah, but I didn't thing people would actually take what you said SERIOUSLY! Peeps, PLEASE make sure to read the chapter; Read this...QUICK after you read this. Hiei typed this chapter in order to get revenge. So just read that chapter and all will be explained. Oi! *Frustrated sigh* I need a drink.
Hiei: How about some hot chocolate?
Me: NO!!!
bishyboylover on April 4, 2004, 9:36:32 AM
bishyboylover on (Chapter: 11)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!NOT KURAMA!PLEASE NOT KURAMA!!!!eclipsedmoongoddess482 on April 1, 2004, 1:08:59 PM
eclipsedmoongoddess482 on (Chapter: 11)
To everyone: Just to clear things up, make sure you read the chapter: Read This...QUICK after you read this. Thanks to a certain SPIKE HEAD, who shall leave annonymous, I now look like the biggest jerk this side of FC! NEwayz, just make sure you read that and remember: Beware of hot guys bearing gifts (like hot chocolate!)eclipsedmoongoddess482 on April 1, 2004, 1:04:02 PM
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To coca-cola: You have fallen for Hiei's prank, I assume. Have you read the chapter: Read This...QUICK yet? It explains why this is even here. Make sure you read this otherwise you'll either be very dissapointed or relieved. It all depends on who you prefer. ^_^coca-cola on April 1, 2004, 12:14:40 PM
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why i know hiei's the best and all but why kill kurama and the other guy's umm what r there names o'well there not importaint well if you were to do that there be a lot of fangirls after you coca-cola on April 1, 2004, 12:10:31 PM
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lol thats funny funny you go hieicoca-cola on April 1, 2004, 12:10:11 PM
coca-cola on (Chapter: 10)
lol you go hiei lol thats funny funny sweetblood on March 27, 2004, 9:34:34 AM
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*laughs hed off from pure enjoyment* I just spent bout 2 hours reding your story and almost died laughing! Why dont you have Yusuke!!! Yusuke would make the show much better!! Luv the story great job! CHESTNUTS!!!coca-cola on March 27, 2004, 8:58:08 AM
coca-cola on (Chapter: 9)
noo don't kill Seto kill marik steo has mairlk doesn't lol thats really good eclipsedmoongoddess482 on March 27, 2004, 7:55:24 AM
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Silver: Eep! I'm sorry! *Hides behind Hiei* Hiei! Protect me! Hiei: Do I get a cookie?
Silver: *Sees DARK still charging at her* HIEI! Now's not the time to discuss cookies!
Hiei: Yeah I see that but do I get a cookie?
Silver: FINE! FINE! You can have your stupid cookies! Do something about her! *Points at a raging DARKRAVEN*
Hiei: Hn. *Picks up Silver and carries her to safety with his lightning speed* Do I get my cookie now?
Silver: Sure. *Hands Hiei a bunch of cookies* Thanks! *Hugs Hiei*
Hiei: *Too busy eating his cookies to notice or really care*
bishyboylover on March 26, 2004, 11:34:57 AM
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*pokes JoyKaiba's first comment*Can I be in you story, too? I can take care of the little Riku and torture Kurama.And I would be at the mercy of your every command!bishyboylover on March 26, 2004, 11:19:57 AM
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I feel sorry for him too.*puts the little Riku in a titanium case *Hehehe...this should work nicely.I hope the poor guy survives....wait,no I don't!*Releases the little Riku and shows him a picture of the evil*You know what to do, right?Little Riku:CHESTNUTS!*tears the picture to shreds*
Me:Good boy!Now,go get him!*releases him into her school*^-^ This will be fun.....
bishyboylover on March 26, 2004, 11:05:50 AM
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Sora go boom and I'm happy about it!^-^JoyKaiba on March 22, 2004, 8:22:21 AM
JoyKaiba on (Chapter: 8)
That's fine with me. I can wait. In the meantime, I'll tourcher Joey with a cute fuzzy kitten. :shows cute fuzzy kitten to Joey:Joey: NOOOOOOOOOOOO, A CUTE FUZZY KITTEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Me: :grins evily: BTW, my name's Amber and I truely like Joey, but it's fun to tourcher him too. :shows cute fuzzy kitten to Joey:
Joey: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
eclipsedmoongoddess482 on March 21, 2004, 4:41:41 AM
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I knew I was going to get yelled at for this! Oh well... Hey DARK,(Mind if I call you that?) I'd love for you to be in this! Just make sure to tell me what you want to do to poor Seto and I'll put it in. He'll be one less person I have to worry about torturing (Sephy, Link, Hiei, Kurama, and Yami are my 'lil victims!)^_^ coca-cola on March 20, 2004, 2:44:27 PM
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*looks at gound* poor poor Seto *sniff sinff* HE BETTER BE OKAY (says calmly) because i have an interview w/him joey and yugi soon eclipsedmoongoddess482 on March 20, 2004, 12:37:29 PM
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To JoyKaiba: Hey, I won't be able to put you and Joey in until a chapter after the Clone War incident. I'm sorry. It's because before you asked to be in this, I already had typed the chapter after the Clone War incident. But don't worry! I promise that you'll be in this. I just don't want you to think that I fogot or was neglecting putting you and Joey in this. I'm actually looking foward to what'll happen between Kaiba and the Mutt (no offense to Joey.) JoyKaiba on March 18, 2004, 9:55:28 PM
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Whoe, this was another funny chapter. ^_^ I can't wait until you add Joey in there. :starts rubbing her hands together: I can't wait to see what I get to do!Joey: 0.0 Eep.............
Me: CUTE FUZZY KITTENS!
Joey: Ahhh........WHERE!?
Me: :starts giggleing: Good chapter once again. I can't wait for the next chapter.
coca-cola on March 18, 2004, 3:41:07 PM
coca-cola on (Chapter: 7)
yay i love kids there so cool now to find that guy w/ the yu yu hakusho box set eclipsedmoongoddess482 on March 18, 2004, 10:35:19 AM
eclipsedmoongoddess482 on (Chapter: 7)
To coca-cola; Hmmmmm...all right. You can baby-sit George. I have to go baby-sit my neighbors kids this weekend so I could use some help in watching little Georgie. But just remember that he's afraid of clowns and hamsters. Oh, and he's allergic to peanuts too. George: Mommy, am I going somewhere? *Hugs tightly around my legs* I don't want to leave you mommy. *sniffle* I LOVE YOU! WHAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!
Me: O.O C-Calm down Sweetie. You'll have fun with your babysitter. You'll play games and even watch Daddy fight some bad guys! Doesn't that sound like fun?
George: *Sniffle* Will there be popcorn?
Me: Of course! ^_^
George: Yay! ^_^ I can't wait! *Runs off to pack his toys*
Setos_Girl on March 18, 2004, 8:58:29 AM
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A unhappy Hiei is a bad thing. Great job. Please Continue.^_^coca-cola on March 17, 2004, 11:56:16 AM
coca-cola on (Chapter: 7)
LOL thats cute hay can i babysit George some time ;D please well have a great time we can watch his daddy kick some demon @$$ errr but and eat popcorn pleasecoca-cola on March 10, 2004, 3:11:50 PM
coca-cola on (Chapter: 6)
y do you have the story repeat 3 times????????? other than that i loved it but i can't wait for the next onecoca-cola on March 10, 2004, 3:03:47 PM
coca-cola on (Chapter: 5)
now im scared of chestnuts and clones but other then thats these stories are funny as hellJoyKaiba on March 9, 2004, 10:35:05 AM
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Yay! :jumps up and down: Lets me sees. Can I be in charge of tourching Joey when you add him in. You get to chose what I do. You can also get me to do anything else oh mighty one. :bows down: :giggles: Ok cool, thanks for letting me try a story like this. ^____________^eclipsedmoongoddess482 on March 9, 2004, 10:26:14 AM
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That sounds like a good idea. I'm going to kill off one of these guys soon so adding Joey would make this very interesting. Just don't expect him for another 2 chapters (I'm writing the 7th chapter now and am still trying to get some ideas for chapter six.) Sure you can write a story like this and I would love to have someone else help me tourture these cuties! Just let me know what kind of stuff you want to do and I'll put it in! Joey's afraid of kittens, eh? That gives me a great idea *cue evil laugh* MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!JoyKaiba on March 9, 2004, 10:20:23 AM
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:laughing uncontrolably: MAKE IT STOP, MAKE IT STOP! OMG, this is sooooo funny! This is giving me ideas! Hey you should add Joey in there and I could be one of your servents or helpers. What'cha say? Can I also make a story like this? ^_^Joey: You're a nut
Me: He has a fear of cute fuzzy kittens so ya know.
Joey: DO NOT!
Me: :giggleing uncontrollably: This is sooooo rich! :looks at Joey as evil grin crosses her face:
Joey: Eep!
JoyKaiba on March 9, 2004, 10:19:26 AM
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:laughing uncontrolably: MAKE IT STOP, MAKE IT STOP! OMG, this is sooooo funny! This is giving me ideas! Hey you should add Joey in there and I could be one of your servents or helpers. What'cha say? Can I also make a story like this? ^_^Joey: You're a nut
Me: He has a fear of cute fuzzy kittens so ya know.
Joey: DO NOT!
Me: :giggleing uncontrollably: This is sooooo rich! :looks at Joey as evil grin crosses her face:
Joey: Eep!
eclipsedmoongoddess482 on February 17, 2004, 11:32:51 AM
eclipsedmoongoddess482 on (Chapter: 5)
Okay, you can borrow him at your own risk. He has a tendancy to mistake people for chestnuts and you know what that means. But I think if you just make sure that you have some form of protection against him, you'll be fine. BTW, I feel really sorry for the poor sap at your school!bishyboylover on February 17, 2004, 10:13:06 AM
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HAHA!LITTLE RIKU SO CUTE!Can I borrow him? I have a small problem with a boy at school^-^kawii011 on February 9, 2004, 10:23:38 AM
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LMFAO funny! keep up the magnificantly funny stories.kawii011 on February 9, 2004, 10:07:23 AM
kawii011 on (Chapter: 3)
**laugh my head off**HAHAHAHHALOL funny! wow riku really is weird! hahah squeak squeak!hiei_4ever on January 2, 2004, 12:28:37 AM
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hiei should be out there kickin butt' ya know...very funny tho keep up the good workSetos_Girl on December 17, 2003, 1:10:03 AM
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Yeah that works. Along as they get to do some fighting(and show off their powers). Bring in Karasu and your worst enemy.Setos_Girl on December 17, 2003, 1:07:44 AM
Setos_Girl on (Chapter: 5)
Why is Kuramam and Hiei hiding they could be fighting using their special powers. But no they are to scared to help even though they are super strong. And will someone please help my poor Seto. Before Marik kills him or he gets badly hurt.( I summon Blue eyes White Dragon to go and help Seto. Hpeful old Blue Eyes will get there in time to save Seto.). By the very funny and good. Cyaeclipsedmoongoddess482 on December 17, 2003, 12:27:38 AM
eclipsedmoongoddess482 on (Chapter: 4)
Wow, you really like it? I feel so loved! ^_^ Bringing in one of Hiei and Kurama's enemies is such a cool idea! The only person who I can really think to bring on is Karasu but I dunno, maybe him and my worst enemy can team up against our heros. What do you think? NEwayz G2G! Bye! Setos_Girl on December 17, 2003, 12:23:18 AM
Setos_Girl on (Chapter: 4)
Great work. I don't think it is random at all. Don't forget please bring in one of Kurama's and Hiei's enemy/rival. Please. Thankyou and good night. ps. Good luck Seto.Setos_Girl on December 15, 2003, 7:59:33 PM
Setos_Girl on (Chapter: 3)
I like random thing. All I ahve to say is Seto and Kurama best survive. Plus you should put in one of Hiei and Kurama's enemy. Don't care which one. By the way I like the story alot. Please continue to the next and totally random chapter 3.eclipsedmoongoddess482 on December 15, 2003, 5:20:26 PM
eclipsedmoongoddess482 on (Chapter: 3)
MUAWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! "Why would I trap those 3 together in a room," you ask? Well, for all of the chaos that is sure to come of course! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA*cough,cough* HA! BTW, believe it or not, no one really gets voted off. Instead, they either go insane, get killed, or possibly explode *coughSORAcough* And basicly, the last one sane and alive wins. But don't worry, I like Kaiba a lot too so he ain't going anywhere for a while. But Marik on the other hand...eclipsedmoongoddess482 on December 13, 2003, 5:08:39 PM
eclipsedmoongoddess482 on (Chapter: 1)
You actually like it? Wow...Cool!^_^ I guess the first real challenge for them is in the next chapter. I'll give ya a little hint; Sugar and Squirrels.LOL!