Fiercely I Love you, Suddenly I Lose You
Submitted March 9, 2005 Updated August 8, 2005 Status Incomplete | Everyone has an epic battle, this is mine.
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Your Metal Box
Submitted: March 9, 2005 • Updated: March 9, 2005
Word count: 598 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 139
Chapter 2 - My Metal Box
Submitted: August 8, 2005 • Updated: August 8, 2005
Word count: 1662 • Size: 8k • Comments: 7 • views: 136
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unfocused on May 22, 2006, 9:01:26 AM
unfocused on (Chapter: index)
you're hardly in any position to negotiate >:(hirataitokyo on April 17, 2006, 12:07:56 PM
hirataitokyo on (Chapter: 1)
i will read the story later but will you read mine its called ~coming~ in the naruto series' at the VERY VERY bottom okay if ya read mine then i will read yours!jade_princess on March 8, 2006, 2:05:24 PM
jade_princess on (Chapter: 2)
pain is beautiful but sometimes i wish it wasn't or at least that i could see it wasn't. ignorance is blissjade_princess on March 8, 2006, 1:58:56 PM
jade_princess on (Chapter: 1)
my gosh are you seriously a guy, dudes aren't supposed to see these things you know
ham_chan on March 6, 2006, 8:08:12 AM
ham_chan on (Chapter: 2)
oh wow i'm speechless. this is one of the best things i have ever read. reading this has made me want to draw or write something dark. it really hypnotized me into an evil trance. u've got real talent.ham_chan on March 6, 2006, 7:46:11 AM
ham_chan on (Chapter: 1)
woah. that was so awesome. really makes you think, ya know.heavensent92 on February 13, 2006, 7:11:30 AM
heavensent92 on (Chapter: 2)
That was.... So much emotion, you could feel it. ...coldly beautiful. I loved itheavensent92 on February 13, 2006, 7:09:40 AM
heavensent92 on (Chapter: 1)
Woah...ThaKakarot on February 9, 2006, 12:37:17 PM
ThaKakarot on (Chapter: 2)
dude... that was so deep... i could feel your hurt and your anger radiating through it... this is by far the best thing i've read on this site.reading this has put me in some kind of dark mood, which only goes to show how full of life your story is...
really dude.. awesome job.. your art is amazing, you write some kickass shoot.. now if you can sing too.. you'll have the whole damn package :P
oh and btw... i kinda pictures morgan freemans voice in my head while reading it...
so weird :D
Delayed_Reaction on January 9, 2006, 11:06:44 AM
Delayed_Reaction on (Chapter: 1)
Oh my god...that was amazing!! Wootwoot!