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Interesting Iscribble RP

Interesting Iscribble RP by TheGameArtCritic
Interesting Iscribble RP by TheGameArtCritic

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Category Comics » - Original Comics » - Pages & panels
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TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 2:53:35 PM

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TheGameArtCriticTodd: I'm gonna run ahead. <:/ *He does so* HEY, MIA!

Harry and Sam: <:/ *Walks behind him*

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 3:24:26 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *pauses at the voice, but no, that was Todd--she keeps going*

Key: *stays back* ...She's determined. <:/

Sarah: <:(

Claire: ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 3:28:24 PM

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TheGameArtCriticTodd: *Sprinting, he manages to find Mia and catch up to her* HEY! Hey! Mia, we've gotta just head back. <:/

meanwhile

Everyone: <:(

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 3:45:39 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: Not without finding him! D:>

meanwhile

Everyone: <:/ ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 3:54:55 PM

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TheGameArtCriticTodd: Look, Altodd's kinda weird. If he doesn't turn up tomorrow, we'll sure as hell be able to find him tomorrow NIGHT. <:/

meanwhile

Everyone: <:/ ...

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 4:03:00 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: ...He should've been back by now...

meanwhile

Everyone: ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 4:10:56 PM

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TheGameArtCriticTodd: Yeah, but again, he WILL show up soon. Sometimes he just needs a LOT of alone-time to think and stuff, y'know?

meanwhile

Everyone: <:/ ...

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 4:17:33 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: I guess... <:/

meanwhile

Everyone: *waits*

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 4:24:22 PM

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TheGameArtCriticTodd: ... He knows where we are. He'll come back when he NEEDS to. <:/

meanwhile

Everyone: *Waits*

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 4:30:51 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: ... *nods silently. she couldn't help but feel like something was wrong, though...*

meanwhile

Everyone: ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 4:38:27 PM

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TheGameArtCriticTodd: C'mon, let's go back to the others. <:/

meanwhile

Everyone: *Waits*

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 4:41:04 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: ...Alright... *starts heading back*

meanwhile

Everyone: *waits*

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 4:54:46 PM

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TheGameArtCriticTodd: *Heads back with Mia*

Harry: Oh, good.

Sam: So at least we got Mia back... But Altodd's missing. <:/

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 4:55:53 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *is very quiet, drowning herself with worry*

Sarah: Well, he'll turn up sooner or later. <:/

Claire: :/

Key: <:( ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 5:16:04 PM

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TheGameArtCriticTodd: Maybe it's a good idea if we got some sleep? We were out searching for a while. Who knows, maybe if we wake up, Altodd will be there. <:P

Sam: Maybe, yeah. <:D

Harry: ... *He sits down against a tree*

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 5:20:26 PM

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mechadragon13Claire: *sits down next to Harry* ...

Mia: ... *lays down on the grass* ...

Key: <:( ... *sits down with Todd*

Sarah: ... <:/

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 5:27:06 PM

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TheGameArtCriticTodd: <:/ ...

Sam: <:( *He sits with Sarah*

Harry: ...

*The next day, at sunset*

Todd: Okay, so Altodd's still missing, but you know what are really really loud? Werewolves. Werewolves are loud. He'll be super easy to find, then. <:)

Sam: <:/

Harry: ...

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 5:31:51 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *paces nervously, completely silent, worried sick*

Key: *knows that this is a very bad sign...*

Claire: :/ ...

Sarah: <:/

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 5:34:43 PM

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TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 7:47:20 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Lying* Yeah, I slept alright.

Todd: ... <:/

Sam: *He sighs and just nuzzles Sarah*

Harry: ...

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 9:00:32 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: ...Alright.

Key: <:/

Sarah: ... *nuzzles him back*

Claire: ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 11:15:44 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: I'm gonna go for a walk again. One more night until the next full moon and all that. I... I need... To kinda go alone. All alone.

Todd: You okay there?

Altodd: *He nods a little at Todd, then gets up and walks away from them all*

Sam: :/

Harry: ... Hrm.

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 11:51:40 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: *watches him leave, worried--though she respects his wishes and doesn't go after him* <:( ...

Sarah: <:/

Claire: ... :/

Key: <:(

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 12:02:24 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He walks for a while, not really understanding why he wants to walk alone, but does so anyway. Nothing was really telling him to stop*

Lucifer: Altodd.

Altodd: !! LUCI --

Lucifer: *Puts a hand on his head, silencing him* ... Sshh... It's alright. You're my slave now, happy to serve me. You will not sleep unless I tell you to -- You are completely devoted to my will.

Altodd: *Nods blankly* ...

Lucifer: *He grins, satisfied*

meanwhile

Everyone: *Waits* :/

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 12:16:00 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *worries* ...

Everyone: *waits* ... :/

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 12:21:00 PM

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TheGameArtCritic*After a few hours*

Todd: ... Um. Is Altodd gonna ever think of coming back?

Harry: Something must have happened. *Stands up* We need to go look for him. Now.

Sam: D:

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 12:33:49 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *is on her feet quickly--she knew she should have gone with him*

Key: *gets up* We're going to have to spread out, who knows where he went?

*they do, scouring the forest for altodd*

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 12:44:58 PM

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TheGameArtCriticLucifer: *Has taken Altodd and hidden him away in a cave where no one will find him. He must wait for tomorrow night. Then he can eliminate the others in a fun sort of way* >:)

meanwhile

*No one can find Altodd after a few hours of searching*

Todd: ... Where did he GO?? D8>

meanwhile

Sam: *Still looking* <:/

meanwhile

Harry: *has given up. He sighs*

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 12:59:05 PM

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mechadragon13Claire: *can't find him ANYWHERE, even though his werewolf stench should stick out to her* ...

meanwhile

Mia: *keeps searching, refusing to give up*

meanwhile

Key: *has taken to the air, trying to see if she can spot him from above--but no luck* D:>

meanwhile

Sarah: *as she searches, she runs into Sam* Sam! No luck? <:/

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 1:03:22 PM

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TheGameArtCriticTodd: <:/ ... *He heads back to the spot they were all camping out at*

meanwhile

Harry: *Does the same*

meanwhile

Sam: No, and I'm guessing the same goes for you. <:/

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 1:36:52 PM

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mechadragon13Claire: *meets the others back at the campsite* ... <:/

meanwhile

Sarah: Unfortunately... Do you think he might've just... left?

meanwhile

Key: <:( ... *heads back to the campsite*

meanwhle

Mia: *keeps looking*

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 1:39:36 PM

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TheGameArtCriticTodd and Harry: <:(

meanwhile

Sam: I think that something MUCH worse might've happened, considering his other personality is suicidal. <:/

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 2:00:55 PM

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mechadragon13Sarah: ...If he had killed himself, we would have found him... Especially since Claire can smell blood from like.. a mile away...

meanwhile

Key: *looks around at the others for some sign of hope, but finds none* ... <:/

Claire: <:/

meanwhile

Mia: *refuses to stop looking*

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 2:12:13 PM

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TheGameArtCriticSam: It didn't have to be a bloody suicide -- There IS a body of water around here, what if he DROWNED himself? <:(

meanwhile

Todd: ... Mia's not back yet.

Harry: And neither are Sarah or Sam. We should go find them and bring them back. <:/

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 2:20:17 PM

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mechadragon13Sarah: I checked there, I didn't see anything... *sighs in defeat* Come on, we should head back...

meanwhile

Key: Good idea. <:/

meanwhile

Mia: *is desperately still looking*

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 2:25:27 PM

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TheGameArtCriticSam: *Also sighs* Alright. <:/ *He heads back with Sarah*

Todd: Oh hey, looks like we just need to find Mia, then.

Harry: C'mon. <:/

*They all go looking for Mia, calling out her name*

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 2:39:02 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *hears them, but refuses to go back--she HAS to find him, she HAS to...!*

meanwhile

Claire: ...She isn't too far.

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 2:50:46 PM

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TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 5:47:42 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: Yeah, yeah I guess... *He sighs, resting his head against the tree*

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 5:51:35 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *sits quietly for a while, not sure what to say, or if she should say anything at all* ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 5:54:58 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... I'm just gonna... Try sleeping.

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 5:59:38 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: Okay. *pauses of a moment, before leaning over to kiss his cheek* Goodnight...

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 6:13:45 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: <:( ... *He kisses her back* ... 'Night. *He then lies his head back against the tree again and closes his eyes, trying to sleep*

mechadragon13 on July 30, 2012, 1:43:52 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *does the same, though her thoughts keep her awake for a little while longer*

TheGameArtCritic on July 30, 2012, 3:05:25 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Falls asleep eventually, though it's difficult after the scare he got*

mechadragon13 on July 30, 2012, 4:40:14 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *loses her balance at some point in the middle of the night as she sleeps, and her head thumps onto Altodd's shoulder. It wakes her up for a moment, but she doesn't think to pull away before falling asleep again*

TheGameArtCritic on July 30, 2012, 6:29:37 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Asleep, and was unable to notice*

The next morning

Altodd: *He groggily wakes up to find Mia on his shoulder* ! ... <:)

mechadragon13 on July 30, 2012, 6:30:23 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *is sound asleep*

TheGameArtCritic on July 30, 2012, 6:44:49 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He nuzzles her a little. He knows Neo is watching, though he can hear nothing from him. Good. Better for him to be silent right now*

Todd: *Watches Altodd and Mia, awake* ...

mechadragon13 on July 30, 2012, 6:47:44 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *mumbles something unintelligible, and scoots a little closer to him*

TheGameArtCritic on July 30, 2012, 7:07:27 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Smiles a little wider and puts his arm around Mia, holding her close*

Everyone: *Waking up*

mechadragon13 on July 30, 2012, 7:10:42 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *also wakes up. she notices where she is, and drowsily wonders how she got there* ...?

TheGameArtCritic on July 30, 2012, 7:24:37 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: Hey... G'morning. :)

Todd: ...

Sam and Harry: *Stretches*

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 7:25:48 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: *smiles back* Good morning...

Key: *sits quietly with Todd*

Sarah: *rubs her eyes sleepily*

Claire: ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 7:35:07 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: How'd you sleep?

Todd: *Continues to watch Altodd and Mia* ...

Harry: ...

Sam: :/

mechadragon13 on July 31, 2012, 7:44:39 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: Pretty decently... you?

Key: ...

Sarah: *looks at Sam* ?

Claire: ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 31, 2012, 7:45:46 AM

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TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 4:17:07 PM

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TheGameArtCriticNeo: Of course not! ... I let Shidako DIE...

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 4:28:21 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: ...She sacrificed herself for you. She knew what would happen if she saved you, and she did so willingly. It wasn't your fault.

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 4:31:13 PM

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TheGameArtCriticNeo: It's COMPLETELY my fault! Sh-she didn't know what she was DOING! Yes, she saved me, but she didn't have to DIE!

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 4:42:35 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: NONE OF US wanted her to die that day, but trust me when I say that she knew what she was doing. You could see it in her face. You should give her more credit for that. And I'm not saying you can't mourn either, because you have every right to--but that doesn't give you the right to make someone else miserable.

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 4:47:48 PM

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TheGameArtCriticNeo: He SHOULD BE MISERABLE!! D8<

Todd: Wah! Woah! Okay, hey, no shouting! D8

Everyone: <__<;

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 4:55:12 PM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Mia: *through her teeth, pointedly keeping her voice down* But not because of you. You both belong to the same body, causing HIM suffering will only make YOU feel WORSE.

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 4:57:06 PM

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TheGameArtCriticNeo: We BOTH deserve it... BOTH OF US...

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 5:07:54 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *her exasperated look softens a bit* ... <:/ ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 5:10:47 PM

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TheGameArtCriticNeo: ... D-don't look at me like that...

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 5:16:42 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: ... *sits back against the tree, looking straight ahead. She just didn't know what to say to him anymore, and she didn't feel like arguing* ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 5:19:08 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ...! I'm sorry -- I was trying to regain control, but he was pretty determined to stay put. <:/

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 5:26:03 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *doesn't move* Yeah, I could tell.

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 5:30:34 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Quietly* Sorry again... <:(

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 5:33:35 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *looks at him* It's okay. It wasn't your fault. <:/

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 5:38:38 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... Still. I feel responsible for him. <:/

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 5:42:47 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *sighs, and shakes her head a little bit* It's his own fault.

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 5:46:57 PM

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TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 1:05:30 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: D:> ... *He drags himself over to Mia*

Everyone: <:/

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 1:16:34 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *pulls him into a tight hug* ...

Everyone: <:/ ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 1:20:59 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ! ... *He hugs Mia back, just as tightly, squeezing his eyes shut and trying to block out the image of his rotting corpse-self*

Everyone: <:/

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 1:37:57 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *rubs his back comfortingly, speaking quietly* Whatever it is you saw, you're safe... it's not here anymore.

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 1:43:52 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... Something tells me that it's been there all along...

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 1:56:09 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *gives him a sad look--she isn't sure what he saw, or how it happened, so she doesn't know what else to say to him*

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 2:20:29 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... I just... Kinda need to sit right now. Wanna sit with me? <:/

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 2:27:18 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *nods* Mhmm. <:( *takes his hand, and leads him over to a tree, sitting down against it*

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 2:43:40 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *When they sit, he nuzzles her* ...

Neo: *Stops nuzzling Mia and whispers in her ear* I did it... Because he doesn't DESERVE you.

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 2:56:47 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *her breath hitches in her throat, startled by the sudden appearance of the other personality. she stares at him, and finally manages to stammer out* That's... That's not for you to decide.

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 3:02:01 PM

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TheGameArtCriticNeo: Anyone with a sense of morality should know he doesn't... He has RAPED and MURDERED... People like that aren't ALLOWED to have happy endings.

Everyone: *Notices that something's up* D: ?

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 3:13:16 PM

mechadragon13 on
mechadragon13Mia: *quietly* People can atone for their mistakes.

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 3:17:24 PM

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TheGameArtCriticNeo: No matter what he does, he'll never atone for what he's done. NEVER.

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 3:36:03 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: Isn't forgiveness enough?

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 3:39:37 PM

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TheGameArtCriticNeo: Of course it's not. He doesn't DESERVE forgiveness.

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 4:01:12 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: Like I said, that isn't for you to decide. He's already been forgiven, who are you to deny him of that?

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 4:10:07 PM

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TheGameArtCriticNeo: I'm HIM. I know EVERYTHING he's done. Every little thing. DB<

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 4:11:17 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: And you don't think you deserve forgiveness as well? >:/

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 4:16:04 PM

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TheGameArtCritic on July 28, 2012, 5:30:37 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: Why? Because you used her to help Mia?

Todd: <:/

Everyone: ...

mechadragon13 on July 28, 2012, 5:32:52 PM

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mechadragon13Key: Because I haven't gotten really angry for a while. She wants a rampage, I say no, she gets snippy. *heals him as best as she can with her uncooperative demekarr*

TheGameArtCritic on July 28, 2012, 6:00:36 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: Well... As long as she still heals people...

Todd: ... Harry really needs to learn to control HIS...

Harry: I'm TRYING, alright?? D:>

Sam: <:/

mechadragon13 on July 28, 2012, 6:02:43 PM

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mechadragon13Key: <:I ... *pulls her hands away, sighing* That's all Mehnit's going to do for you, I'm sorry. It might scar. <:/

Mia: <:/ ...

Claire: ...

Sarah: :/

TheGameArtCritic on July 28, 2012, 6:09:40 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... Another few to add to the collection. It's okay.

Todd: <:/

Everyone: ...

mechadragon13 on July 28, 2012, 6:14:27 PM

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mechadragon13Key: *feels bad that she can't heal him any further, though she tries not to get angry at Mehnit for it--it's what the demekarr wants, anyway...*

Mia: <:/

EVeryone: ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 28, 2012, 6:17:28 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... I really need to go wash my face...

Todd: Well, we're still near that waterfall. <:/

Altodd: Right. I'll go wash my face there, then. *He walks off*

Everyone: ...

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 7:20:04 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: *watches him leave* ...

Key: <:/ ... *sits down against the tree again*

Everyone: ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 7:22:06 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He goes and washes his face when he reaches the waterfall, ignoring the voice of his other self in his head. Just ignoring it. He doesn't want to talk to Neo* ...

meanwhile

Todd: <:/ *Nuzzles Key a bit*

Everyone: ...

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 7:31:27 AM

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mechadragon13Key: *nuzzles Todd back* ...

Mia: ... *lays back down on the grass, waiting for Altodd to return. her hand wanders back down to her stomach, finding it incredible that a fatal wound could be healed just like that...*

Everyone: ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 7:37:59 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He starts heading back*

*Suddenly what looks to be himself (while he was rotting and skeletal) shoves Altodd against a tree and screeches at him*

Altodd: *Screams, the thing startling him as well as scaring him badly*

Thing: *It disappears as quickly as it came, leaving Altodd practically attached to the tree behind him in fright*

Altodd: *Is shaking, in a state of shock -- TERRIFIED. Was that Neo? Was it real? Or maybe his mind was playing tricks on him?*

meanwhile

Todd: ... Key, did you hear something?

Everyone: ... :/

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 7:44:41 AM

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mechadragon13Key: *had heard it loud and clear--she stands up* Yes, yes I did. D:

Mia: ?? *sits up, worried* Should we do something? D:>

Key: ...I can't hear anything else.

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 7:47:18 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He puts a hand over his heart. It's beating incredibly fast. He waits for it to slow down before he starts walking - RUNNING - back to the others*

meanwhile

Todd: Do you think Altodd got hurt out there? Somehow?

Everyone: D:

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 7:50:57 AM

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mechadragon13Key: I really hope not--hang on, someone's coming. D:

Everyone: !!

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 12:17:49 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Runs back to the group* D8>

Todd: Altodd! D:

Sam: What's wrong? D:>

Harry: <:/

Altodd: Nuh-Nothing. Nothing's wrong. D8

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 12:38:03 PM

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mechadragon13Key: You sure? D:>

Mia: <:( ...

Everyone: D: ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 29, 2012, 12:53:07 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: J-just... *He takes a deep breath* ... Just... Nothing. Got spooked by nothing.

Todd: D:

Harry: :/

Sam: <:/

mechadragon13 on July 29, 2012, 12:55:32 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: ... *quietly waves him over to where she's sitting*

Key: <:/ ...

Everyone. D: ...

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TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 6:06:38 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Starts panicking* WH-WHAT'S GOING ON?? WHY ISN'T SHE GETTING BETTER??

Everyone: DDDDDDDDDDDDDD8 ??

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 6:13:40 PM

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mechadragon13Key: *also a bit panicked* Mehnit isn't cooperating...!!

Mia: ...?? *her vision is getting fuzzy--she's dreadfully pale*

Everyone: !??!??!?

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 6:15:13 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Fully panicking* WH-WHAT?? W-WELL TELL HER TO COOPERATE!! DDDDD8>

Everyone: DDDDDDDDD8

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 6:25:17 PM

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mechadragon13Key: I'M TRYING! D8>

Mia: *passes out from blood loss*

Everyone: !!!!!!!!!

Key: !! *finally feel the demekarr react, the demon having decided that that was enough toying with emotions for today* FINALLY...! DX>

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 6:28:02 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Is shaking and pale. Nearly losing Mia was quite traumatizing for him* ... ...

Todd: Ey, it's alright now, Altodd. Mia's gonna be better, see? D:>

Altodd: ... ...

Everyone: <:/

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 6:29:58 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *is healing, slowly but surely. She was going to live*

Key: *heals her silently, hands shaking slightly from the close call*

Everyone: ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 6:33:58 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He never once takes his eyes off of Mia* ... ...

Everyone: <:(

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 6:39:15 PM

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mechadragon13Key: *doesn't stop concentrating until Mia is fully healed, and even then, she waits a few moments before pulling away* ...

Mia: *is unconscious, but the gaping wound in her stomach is no more*

Everyone: *relaxes a bit*

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 6:44:52 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He gets on his knees by her head and gently touches her cheek with the back of his hand* D:> ...

Todd: <:/

Everyone: *Scoots away from them*

mechadragon13 on July 28, 2012, 3:21:54 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: *unconscious*

Everyone: *scoots away*

Key: *is still a little shaky--she and Mehnit were going to have a TALK.*

TheGameArtCritic on July 28, 2012, 5:51:42 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Stays by Mia, determined to not move until she wakes up* <:(

Everyone: *Leaves them alone*

mechadragon13 on July 28, 2012, 11:24:57 AM

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mechadragon13Key: *sits against a tree, having a somewhat one-sided argument with Mehnit. While the demekarr seemed to be wearing out Lucifer's command, her voice was still quiet in Key's mind*

Mia: *takes a little while to regain consciousness. When she finally does, she looks up at Altodd* ...?

TheGameArtCritic on July 28, 2012, 11:33:34 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ! *He gives her a sad smile* ... I'm sorry...

Todd: *Stays near Key, trying not to listen to her conversation with Mehnit -- Or rather, what Key says* <:/

Everyone: *Doing their own thing*

mechadragon13 on July 28, 2012, 11:37:58 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: *a hand unconsciously touches her stomach, as if to check it was really still in one piece. she smiles back, and answers quietly* It was an accident... *frowns when she sees how badly his face is bleeding* You need to get that looked at... D:>

Key: *is quietly muttering to herself, still arguing with the demekarr*

Everyone: *hangs around*

TheGameArtCritic on July 28, 2012, 11:43:32 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: I -- What? *He touches the left side of his face and quickly pulls his hand away when he feels the warm, sticky blood* !! Oh, yeah! Yeah, I do! D:

Todd: *Places his hand on Key's* <:/

Everyone: *La dee da*

mechadragon13 on July 28, 2012, 11:46:30 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: *sits up, wincing a bit as her stomach was still a bit sore from the rapid healing* Go talk to Key, I'll be okay. <:/

Key: *glances at Todd, giving him a small smile before returning to her internal argument*

TheGameArtCritic on July 28, 2012, 11:55:21 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Winces along with her. He takes her hand in both of his, rubbing the top of it* ... You sure? <:(

Todd: *Continues to hold Key's hand* <:/ ...

Everyone: *Deep de doo*

mechadragon13 on July 28, 2012, 12:04:44 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: Absolutely. Go on, before that gets any worse. <:(

Key: *mutters to herself*

TheGameArtCritic on July 28, 2012, 4:15:17 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: <:( ... *He nods a little and gets up to walk over to Key* ... Hey, uh... Sorry for interrupting, but could you fix my face?

Todd: Jeez! You're bleeding EVERYWHERE, Altodd! D8

Everyone: <___<

mechadragon13 on July 28, 2012, 4:28:15 PM

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mechadragon13Key: --OH! Yeah, yeah sure-- *stands up and dusts herself off, then lays her hands on his shoulders* If Mehnit feels like cooperating... she isn't too happy with me right now. *tries to heal him*

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TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 6:38:47 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He nuzzles Mia a little*... I-I guess we should head back, then...

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 11:26:41 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: *pulls away* You're sure you'll be okay?

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 1:23:35 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: I... I'll be alright... But will YOU be okay? With me? Now that you know what I've done? D:>

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 4:17:28 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *nods* You know your mistakes, and you've learned from them--that already makes you a better man. Besides... I already promised I wouldn't run.

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 4:33:26 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He smiles a little at this* ... Thank you, Mia...

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 4:38:47 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *squeezes his shoulder reassuringly, smiling at him, then takes his hand again* Come on, everyone else is waiting.

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 4:44:57 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: Right... *He walks with her back to the others*

Harpies: *ATTACKING EVERYONE*

Altodd: !! shoot! *He draws his sword and runs over to help everyone*

Todd: shoot is right! frack Air City, man! frack them all with something sharp and uncomfortable to frack! DX *Defending himself*

Everyone: *Fighting*

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 4:47:00 PM

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mechadragon13Key: *has taken to the air, trying to drive them away--but there's too many of them*

Mia: !! *draws her sword, and sets it aflame, the area too crowded for her to do much else without hurting an ally--she attacks the harpies that come after her, sticking close to Altodd*

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 5:04:16 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He swings at the harpies as carefully as he can without hurting his teammates. He decides to move a bit farther away from them to avoid accidentally slashing them*

Harpy: *From above, it screams and swoops down, grabbing at Altodd with its talons*

Altodd: *He hears and ducks, but the talons still manage to get him, opening up deep cuts in his left cheek (going all the way up to his eye), his other cheek, and his brow right near his temple. The blood coming from that area in particular pours down quickly and into Altodd's left eye. He yowls in pain and from the sudden half-blindess*

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 5:08:17 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *hears this and turns around* Altodd--! *sees another harpy swoop down at her, screeching, and manages to deflect its talons with her sword, but the force of the hit knocks her back into Altodd*

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 5:12:58 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Thinking it's an enemy, he quickly turns and stabs Mia. He doesn't realize what he's done until it's too late, and Altodd freezes up, a look of horror on his face* ... Oh no... No, NO...! D8>

Everyone: *FIGHTING*

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 5:18:17 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: HKK--! *looks down at the sword in her stomach, then back at Altodd, just as surprised as he was*

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 5:28:29 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Whispering to her, tearing up* Oh my god... Oh no, I'm so sorry... I'm so, so sorry... *He looks at the others -- They're still fighting. He carefully slips his sword out of Mia, supporting her with his arms* I'm sorry...! D8>

Others: *Manage to kill the harpies*

Todd: *Notices Altodd and Mia* Woah! Woah, what happened?? D8>

Everyone: ???

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 5:32:04 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *coughs up blood as he supports her. even with her hands over the wound, she was quickly turning pale from blood loss*

Claire: !!

Sarah: D8?!

Key: D8!!! L-Lay her down, I-I-I can help her!

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 5:37:13 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: Y-You can?? D8> *He carefully lies Mia down, hating himself for what he's done, accident or not*

Todd: So what HAPPENED? I mean, that wasn't really answered! D8>

Altodd: U-um...

Everyone: D8

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 5:49:35 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *manages to choke out* H-Harpy... g-got me with a claw... *coughs again, blood dribbling out of her mouth*

Key: Shhh... talking'll make it worse...! D:> *gets down on her knees next to her, and puts both hands on either side of the wound, trying to heal her using her demekarr*

Everyone: DDDDDDDDD8

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 5:55:08 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He suddenly looks at Mia, confused. She... Lied for him?*

Everyone: DDDDDDDDD8

mechadragon13 on July 27, 2012, 6:05:24 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *looks back at him, holding his gaze for a moment before resting her head back down on the grass, strength quickly fading*

Key: ...godDAMNIT, Mehnit, not's not a good time for this...!

Everyone: D8??

TheGameArtCritic on July 27, 2012, 6:06:01 PM

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TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 4:14:28 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... No, I mean I REALLY didn't handle it well... Mia, I... I killed people.

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 4:16:46 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: ...Like people-people or infected people...?

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 4:31:09 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Very quietly* ... Like innocent survivors who were only trying to help...

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 4:32:22 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *just stares at him for a few moments--and then comes the question* ...Why?

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 5:21:29 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: I was so... SO angry... At -- At EVERYTHING and EVERYONE... I wasn't thinking straight... I BUTCHERED people. I can NEVER run away from that single fact -- That I'm a MURDERER. I took their lives. I don't deserve that happiness that Todd feels. I don't deserve YOU. For the longest time, I didn't think I deserved to LIVE...

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 5:24:28 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: D:> ... *can't really think of anything to say to him. she squeezes his hand a bit, as a show of support, but she can't turn her thoughts into words*

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 5:29:54 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He squeezes her hand back a little. Only a little* ... There's an indentation on both sides of my head from where I shot myself with Key's gun.

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 5:33:52 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: !!? I--But--how did you survive that...!?

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 5:40:00 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... I didn't. The Creators forced me to come back, but I lost my memory. That's how my... Other self... Came into existence. I was locked away inside my own mind.

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 5:44:13 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: D:> ... *lifts a hand, then hesitates* ... *quietly* Can I...?

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 5:48:31 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *After some silence* ... Sure. Go ahead.

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 5:54:15 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: ... *slowly lifts her hand to his head, and runs her fingers through his hair until she finds the indent* ! *gently passes her fingers over it as the meaning of it sinks in--Altodd was dead once. Dead, by his own hand* ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 6:04:19 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... It doesn't hurt if you touch it. It's just kinda there. To remind me. The Creators punished me. I... I RAPED Key... And I'll never forgive myself for that. What... What THEY did was... They brought Sam back. They brought her back for a day. Maybe a day and a half. For that whole... Day and a half... I was happy... I was so, so SO happy... I forgot about what I did, I just... I didn't care anymore, because Sam -- *He lets out a tiny chuckle* Sam was BACK... After so LONG... After ALL that heartbreak... But it was a punishment. It was all a horrible, horrible trick. Emotional torture. That whole day and a half. The Creators... They stole her from me... Shidako didn't kill her right away. She POISONED her... I was... I was so HELPLESS... She died in my arms.

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 6:07:41 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *it hurt to listen to him, to the pain, the suffering in his voice as he recalls all those horrid, hurtful memories--she finds herself unconsciously hugging him tightly, wishing she could just be rid of the sorrow in his voice--for once, she just wanted to hear him be happy* ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 6:17:32 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He feels his throat tighten and he hugs Mia back, just as tightly. Tears roll down his cheeks* Y-you're n-not replacing Sam. She's always where she'll be in my heart and I can't forget about her -- I-I WON'T forget about her... B-But thank you... Thank you for... For ALSO finding your way into my heart... *He pulls away for a second to give her the faintest smile... Then breaks down sobbing in front of her*

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 6:24:30 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: *hugs him close, gently pulling his head down to her shoulder and letting him sob, slowly running her hand back and forth through his hair and trying to contain tears of her own. She couldn't stand it. She couldn't stand seeing someone in so much pain. if she had one goal now, it would be to make him happy, if only for a while. whatever it took, she would do it*

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 6:27:38 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *Through his tears* W-well... N-now you know why I'm not like Todd a-anymore... A-and n-now you know why I-I can't have s-sex with you.

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 6:33:14 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: ... *nods for his sake, though she doesn't quite understand the last statement... she knows he hurt Key, but he was sorry for it, wasn't he? her friendliness toward him could only be interpreted as forgiveness. then again, if he doesn't forgive HIMSELF... she shakes off that train of thought, and just hugs him, kissing the side of his head*

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TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 6:39:50 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: Ssshh! You might give the Creators ideas! D8

Todd: <______<;

Harry: D:

Sam: >________>;

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 6:44:03 AM

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mechadragon13Key: This isn't the blank space, they can't just change the rules like that here. If they could've, they would have done that already. :/

Sarah: <___<

Claire: ...

Mia: .__.;;

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 6:50:25 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: Still... Don't say stuff like that. >___>;

Everyone: ^^;;;;

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 7:00:03 AM

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mechadragon13Key: -__-

Everyone: <___<

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 7:08:18 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *He gets up* ... Hey, so... I'm gonna go on a walk. Alright?

Todd: Yup, you go ahead.

Harry: ...

Sam: :/

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 11:03:07 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: *also stands up* Can I come with you?

Key: <:/

Claire: ...

Sarah: ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 11:24:54 AM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... Yeah. Yeah, sure. <:/

Everyone: <:/

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 11:55:35 AM

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mechadragon13Mia: <:/ *they walk off into the woods* ...

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 1:35:36 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: So why'd you want to come along?

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 1:39:32 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: I just wanted to spend some time with you. That, and we've been sitting in the same spot for DAYS and my legs are cramped. X( My question is, why did YOU want to go walk in the first place?

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 1:45:25 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: Well... I like the nature. And I wanted to just have some time to... Think. No offense to Todd, but it's pretty hard to do that with him around.

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 1:50:17 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: I've noticed that. <:/

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 1:52:51 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: *With a very... Sad sort of smile, pain showing in his eyes* ... I used to be just like him...

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 2:01:53 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: <:( ... *takes his hand, rubbing it with her thumb* ...I hope you don't mind me asking, but... What happened?

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 3:38:02 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... A lot of things happened... But what really started it was during the infection. Sam - my girlfriend - and Harry got... Infected. I had to shoot them. It... It wasn't fun.

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 3:43:08 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: D:! ...Walter got infected too... I-I couldn't kill him, though... So I left him behind, wondering if someone else would...

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 3:55:05 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: ... It hurts, watching them turn on you... And... Not really understanding WHY... I'm sorry it happened to you, too. <:(

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 3:57:03 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: Mm... Feeling helpless is something I never really enjoyed...

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 4:01:49 PM

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TheGameArtCriticAltodd: No kidding... Seems like you handled it well, though. I didn't... quite do that.

mechadragon13 on July 26, 2012, 4:06:30 PM

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mechadragon13Mia: Maybe that's because you got pulled in here a long while after it happened... it had only been a few days before I got dragged in here. I hadn't really had much time to think. <:(

TheGameArtCritic on July 26, 2012, 4:13:51 PM

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