Tides of Time
Submitted December 14, 2007 Updated October 20, 2009 Status Complete | A Naruto fic. Yep, that''s my speech, lol. Enjoy!
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Sasuke's Girl
Submitted: December 14, 2007 • Updated: December 14, 2007
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Chapter 2 - The Predominant Emotion
Submitted: December 16, 2007 • Updated: December 16, 2007
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Chapter 3 - See My Reflection Change...
Submitted: December 17, 2007 • Updated: December 17, 2007
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Chapter 4 - Ninjas Into Dreams
Submitted: December 18, 2007 • Updated: December 18, 2007
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Chapter 5 - Sasuke's Ultimatum
Submitted: December 18, 2007 • Updated: December 18, 2007
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Chapter 6 - Medical Clearance
Submitted: December 19, 2007 • Updated: December 19, 2007
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Chapter 7 - Under the Knife
Submitted: December 21, 2007 • Updated: December 21, 2007
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Chapter 8 - Konoha's "Dragon Boy"
Submitted: December 22, 2007 • Updated: December 22, 2007
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Chapter 9 - Burning Out the Dead Wood
Submitted: December 24, 2007 • Updated: December 24, 2007
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Chapter 10 - Things Change and Chunin Chaos
Submitted: December 28, 2007 • Updated: December 28, 2007
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Chapter 11 - Four-Way Free-For-All!
Submitted: January 2, 2008 • Updated: January 2, 2008
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Chapter 12 - The Tides Take a Turn
Submitted: January 2, 2008 • Updated: January 2, 2008
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Chapter 13 - The System on Trial!
Submitted: January 7, 2008 • Updated: January 7, 2008
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Chapter 14 - A Valiant Effort
Submitted: January 9, 2008 • Updated: January 9, 2008
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Chapter 15 - A Village Divided
Submitted: May 24, 2008 • Updated: May 24, 2008
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Chapter 16 - A Desperate Manuever
Submitted: May 26, 2008 • Updated: May 26, 2008
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Chapter 17 - Out of the Ordinary
Submitted: May 27, 2008 • Updated: May 27, 2008
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Chapter 18 - Passing of Time
Submitted: June 2, 2008 • Updated: June 2, 2008
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Chapter 19 - The Desperate Escape: Ekyt's Rage Shows Through!
Submitted: June 4, 2008 • Updated: June 4, 2008
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Chapter 20 - Strengthened Resolve
Submitted: June 13, 2008 • Updated: June 13, 2008
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Chapter 21 - The Warrior Born Anew!
Submitted: June 21, 2008 • Updated: June 21, 2008
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Chapter 22 - Finding Your Place!
Submitted: July 1, 2008 • Updated: July 1, 2008
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Chapter 23 - An Old Injury
Submitted: July 12, 2008 • Updated: July 12, 2008
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Chapter 24 - Showing your Hand
Submitted: July 16, 2008 • Updated: July 16, 2008
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Chapter 25 - Bull's Eye
Submitted: July 26, 2008 • Updated: July 26, 2008
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Chapter 26 - The Warzone of the Mind
Submitted: July 28, 2008 • Updated: July 28, 2008
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Chapter 27 - Samurai Pride: The Naming Ceremony!
Submitted: July 30, 2008 • Updated: July 30, 2008
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Chapter 28 - Poison's Power
Submitted: August 3, 2008 • Updated: August 3, 2008
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Chapter 29 - Weakness Becomes Strength
Submitted: August 5, 2008 • Updated: August 6, 2008
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Chapter 30 - Evil's Shadow
Submitted: August 13, 2008 • Updated: August 13, 2008
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Chapter 31 - Right of Passage
Submitted: August 25, 2008 • Updated: August 25, 2008
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Chapter 32 - Student vs Teacher
Submitted: August 31, 2008 • Updated: August 31, 2008
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Chapter 33 - The Mind's Burden
Submitted: September 4, 2008 • Updated: November 13, 2008
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Chapter 34 - Vow of Silence
Submitted: September 7, 2008 • Updated: September 7, 2008
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Chapter 35 - Appeal of Silence
Submitted: September 14, 2008 • Updated: September 14, 2008
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Chapter 36 - The Shojo Star?
Submitted: September 17, 2008 • Updated: September 17, 2008
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Chapter 37 - Defining Trait
Submitted: September 29, 2008 • Updated: September 29, 2008
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Chapter 38 - Giving Advice
Submitted: October 1, 2008 • Updated: October 2, 2008
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Chapter 39 - The Poison Mist
Submitted: October 5, 2008 • Updated: October 5, 2008
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Chapter 40 - Another Tangled in the Web
Submitted: October 7, 2008 • Updated: October 7, 2008
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Chapter 41 - The Author
Submitted: October 8, 2008 • Updated: October 8, 2008
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Chapter 42 - Sixth Sense
Submitted: October 10, 2008 • Updated: October 10, 2008
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Chapter 43 - Nightmare
Submitted: October 11, 2008 • Updated: October 11, 2008
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Chapter 44 - Dreamy Festival
Submitted: October 12, 2008 • Updated: October 12, 2008
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Chapter 45 - Theory and Practice
Submitted: October 13, 2008 • Updated: October 13, 2008
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Chapter 46 - Live Through Another
Submitted: October 17, 2008 • Updated: October 17, 2008
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Chapter 47 - Surprise! The Akatsuki's Plan Revealed!
Submitted: October 18, 2008 • Updated: October 18, 2008
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Chapter 48 - Akatsuki Aftermath
Submitted: October 20, 2008 • Updated: October 20, 2008
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Chapter 49 - Strength from Within
Submitted: October 25, 2008 • Updated: October 25, 2008
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Chapter 50 - Too Much of a Good Thing?
Submitted: October 27, 2008 • Updated: October 27, 2008
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Chapter 51 - Triple Rashomon
Submitted: November 1, 2008 • Updated: November 1, 2008
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Chapter 52 - A New Life
Submitted: November 11, 2008 • Updated: November 11, 2008
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Chapter 53 - Information Exchange
Submitted: November 13, 2008 • Updated: November 13, 2008
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Chapter 54 - 'Just Acquaintances'
Submitted: November 13, 2008 • Updated: November 13, 2008
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Chapter 55 - The Past Rises to Confront the Present
Submitted: November 14, 2008 • Updated: November 14, 2008
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Chapter 56 - Hunter and Prey
Submitted: November 17, 2008 • Updated: November 17, 2008
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Chapter 57 - Even it Up
Submitted: November 19, 2008 • Updated: November 19, 2008
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Chapter 58 - Accepting an Offer
Submitted: November 20, 2008 • Updated: November 20, 2008
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Chapter 59 - Game of Death
Submitted: November 24, 2008 • Updated: November 24, 2008
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Chapter 60 - Survival
Submitted: November 26, 2008 • Updated: November 26, 2008
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Chapter 61 - More Akatsuki Involvement
Submitted: November 26, 2008 • Updated: November 26, 2008
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Chapter 62 - Beautiful Relationship
Submitted: November 30, 2008 • Updated: November 30, 2008
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Chapter 63 - Truly Immortal
Submitted: December 8, 2008 • Updated: December 8, 2008
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Chapter 64 - Time and Time Again
Submitted: December 10, 2008 • Updated: December 10, 2008
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Chapter 65 - 1 Year Anniversary Special!
Submitted: December 13, 2008 • Updated: December 13, 2008
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Chapter 66 - The Rose
Submitted: December 20, 2008 • Updated: December 20, 2008
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Chapter 67 - The Tournament- Part 1
Submitted: December 31, 2008 • Updated: January 9, 2009
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Chapter 68 - The Tournament Part 2
Submitted: January 9, 2009 • Updated: January 9, 2009
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Chapter 69 - Death
Submitted: January 29, 2009 • Updated: January 29, 2009
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Chapter 70 - Insane Alliances
Submitted: February 2, 2009 • Updated: February 2, 2009
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Chapter 71 - Words of Honesty
Submitted: February 8, 2009 • Updated: February 8, 2009
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Chapter 72 - When Heart's Collide
Submitted: February 17, 2009 • Updated: February 17, 2009
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Chapter 73 - The Dragon Trio
Submitted: February 19, 2009 • Updated: February 19, 2009
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Chapter 74 - The Last Dragon
Submitted: February 20, 2009 • Updated: February 20, 2009
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Chapter 75 - The Illness
Submitted: February 23, 2009 • Updated: February 23, 2009
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Chapter 76 - The Invisible Assailant
Submitted: February 27, 2009 • Updated: February 27, 2009
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Chapter 77 - Success is the Journey...
Submitted: March 2, 2009 • Updated: March 2, 2009
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Chapter 78 - ...Not the Destination
Submitted: March 9, 2009 • Updated: March 9, 2009
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Chapter 79 - Crippling Anxiety
Submitted: March 12, 2009 • Updated: March 12, 2009
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Chapter 80 - My Intuition and My Wisdom Grow
Submitted: March 16, 2009 • Updated: March 17, 2009
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Chapter 81 - Cross to Carry
Submitted: March 19, 2009 • Updated: March 19, 2009
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Chapter 82 - Ekyt: The Next Guardian?
Submitted: March 23, 2009 • Updated: March 23, 2009
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Chapter 83 - Faithful and Valuable
Submitted: March 29, 2009 • Updated: March 29, 2009
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Chapter 84 - The Smile
Submitted: April 3, 2009 • Updated: April 3, 2009
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Chapter 85 - What Are Friends For?
Submitted: April 15, 2009 • Updated: April 15, 2009
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Chapter 86 - Seven Swords
Submitted: April 25, 2009 • Updated: April 25, 2009
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Chapter 87 - Hidden Relationship
Submitted: April 29, 2009 • Updated: April 29, 2009
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Chapter 88 - Shape Myself
Submitted: May 13, 2009 • Updated: May 13, 2009
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Chapter 89 - I Can't Face Her Like This!
Submitted: May 17, 2009 • Updated: May 17, 2009
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Chapter 90 - Unhealthy
Submitted: May 20, 2009 • Updated: May 20, 2009
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Chapter 91 - On the Road
Submitted: May 26, 2009 • Updated: May 26, 2009
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Chapter 92 - Blood-Soaked Darkness
Submitted: June 2, 2009 • Updated: June 2, 2009
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Chapter 93 - The Return Home
Submitted: June 5, 2009 • Updated: June 5, 2009
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Chapter 94 - Aftershock
Submitted: June 11, 2009 • Updated: June 11, 2009
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Chapter 95 - The Dark Underside
Submitted: June 19, 2009 • Updated: June 19, 2009
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Chapter 96 - Dream World
Submitted: July 17, 2009 • Updated: July 17, 2009
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Chapter 97 - Destroy What You Love
Submitted: August 25, 2009 • Updated: August 25, 2009
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Chapter 98 - Blood Spilled; A Life Taken
Submitted: September 10, 2009 • Updated: September 10, 2009
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Chapter 99 - Crumbling
Submitted: October 11, 2009 • Updated: October 11, 2009
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Chapter 100 - Shuushin (Final Trial)
Submitted: October 19, 2009 • Updated: October 19, 2009
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YunieXTidus on January 31, 2011, 7:03:30 AM
I really like this! Once I get caught up on your co-op, I'm gonna have to look through your other stuff, cause you've got some great stuff here!YunieXTidus on January 31, 2011, 6:34:58 AM
Love thid!YunieXTidus on January 10, 2011, 9:09:43 PM
Hilarious! But aww he failed. Now I'm gonna have to keep reading. :pY0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 3, 2009, 6:46:29 AM
*sniffles* That's sad, but cute. Poor Ekyt, having to put up with so much heartbreak.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 1, 2009, 6:45:41 PM
Why is everybody always out to get Ekyt? It's just not FAIR!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 1, 2009, 6:36:50 PM
Oh dear, not old 'Rochi again...Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 1, 2009, 6:28:57 PM
Argh, he's gone all fatalistic again. Silly Ekyt, that'll never help. Ah well, here's hoping he gets out of this mess in one piece.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 1, 2009, 6:13:06 PM
I love these three. Especially Okayu. They're so cool! Shame they ave to take Ekyt to his death...Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 1, 2009, 5:46:06 PM
Aw, dammit. That was so sweet, but so...argh. Still, nice to see Ekyt take the lead for once ^__^Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 1, 2009, 5:37:36 PM
Here's hoping he's had a breakthrough, rater than a breakdown. Ekyt never gets things easy...andr28a on October 21, 2009, 8:54:15 PM
*Faints* Took me awhile to read this chapter.This was an amazing story, I'm honored to have read this excellent story from start to finish
andr28a on October 16, 2009, 9:12:41 PM
Geez, Ekyt is losing his mind with all this legend stuffandr28a on September 10, 2009, 10:58:27 PM
I'm just speachlessandr28a on September 10, 2009, 1:52:52 AM
Damn that Zetsuandr28a on September 10, 2009, 1:09:14 AM
Has Ekyt become a jedi or something, he can sense things that can happen in the futureandr28a on September 10, 2009, 12:37:43 AM
Orochimaru is active againandr28a on September 9, 2009, 10:52:06 PM
How far has Ekyt grown during his exileandr28a on September 9, 2009, 10:26:34 PM
Go Asunaandr28a on June 3, 2009, 4:28:41 AM
This does not bold wellandr28a on June 1, 2009, 9:01:44 PM
I get the feeling the end of this story is drawing near.....erm is itNice chapter
nextguardian on June 2, 2009, 2:05:02 PM
lol, I can't give that away. But things DO get more interesting from here. That much I can promise :)andr28a on May 21, 2009, 2:54:10 AM
Some wierd plan Azami has come up withI think I might have read this wrong but is Azami already Pregnant?
andr28a on May 19, 2009, 12:29:18 AM
What happened to Ekyt back there? He just lost itandr28a on May 13, 2009, 7:17:12 PM
Gah, Ekyt you depressed baka, what the hell do you think your doing.Neopetgirl on May 8, 2009, 1:56:51 PM
What a dream. o.o And so detailed. I found it fascinating! How you described Suki and Kasai was so close to how I would picture Sasuke and Sakura's children to be like. It really IS ironic. And you can really feel the frustration that Ryouko's going through. Your writing grabs so much attention for the reader that it makes it so hard to turn away from the screen and so much time passes that you don't realize it. ^^' I get so sucked in. Amazing work, your stories never cease to leave me with any less. Eh, I'm so sorry, this comment isn't much. I can never seem to be satisfied with what I said after leaving on. I kept re-reading over some of the parts I liked most though!
andr28a on April 29, 2009, 8:26:22 PM
What a revelationandr28a on April 27, 2009, 10:21:37 PM
A friendly mist ninja? Never thought I'd see the dayandr28a on April 20, 2009, 8:58:41 PM
I sense a change in Ekytandr28a on April 13, 2009, 6:38:02 PM
I have a bad feeling about whats to comeandr28a on April 13, 2009, 6:23:29 PM
Now that was a fighthflp on April 4, 2009, 12:45:33 PM
What is it that Ekyt realized. He had some sort of epiphany, I just can't figure out what.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on April 1, 2009, 7:03:50 PM
He really, really needs to stop overthinking things. It's just making him ever more confused and miserable! I hope the miko can help though, she's cool.hflp on March 24, 2009, 12:09:43 PM
Oh crap. I got a bad feeling about this.andr28a on March 23, 2009, 7:12:27 PM
This is going to be goodY0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on March 21, 2009, 9:10:07 AM
I hope this girl really can help. Ekyt needs some good luck!andr28a on March 19, 2009, 11:15:20 PM
Question? Is Ekyt really human? The way you write suggests that he might not be.nextguardian on March 20, 2009, 2:07:15 PM
He is indeed human. But he used to hate his own kind for being impractical and whiny. Plus, he hated himself for his weakness. Add that in to his bully trouble and anxiety, and you've got a guy who isn't quite ready to believe in the human race.hope that helps.
hflp on March 20, 2009, 12:36:41 AM
You know what would be a real kick in the guts for Ekyt. If Chakaro and Kayla made an appearance now. That would mess with Ekyt's head even more now.hflp on March 17, 2009, 8:14:44 AM
Nice chapter. Good work.andr28a on March 16, 2009, 7:29:39 PM
Typical the person that can teach him a new tech is a girlY0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on March 16, 2009, 12:29:44 AM
At least he's realized he needs help. I hope things get better for him...and that he doesn't become a smoker.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on March 16, 2009, 12:18:59 AM
Grr, he's just so self abusive! Tsunade needs to get him on a team, and the people he trust most need to be there for him more!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on March 16, 2009, 12:09:08 AM
He really is his own worst enemy. But having people around to help should make a difference.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on March 15, 2009, 11:57:57 PM
Sakura really has a lot of power right there. I hope she makes the right decision, I'd hate to see Ekyt go totally off the rails.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on March 15, 2009, 11:47:15 PM
Finally, he's got someone on his side! With training and friendship he'll get through...though things are never easy for Ekyt.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on March 15, 2009, 11:38:04 PM
Ekyt really has the worst luck possible. At least he marred Azami's looks a little (I'm feeling kinda angry with her, in case you hadn't noticed). I can't wait to see what happens!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on March 15, 2009, 11:30:25 PM
Damn. This doesn't look so good. Stupid, short sighted girl, Azami needs to get her brain back in order!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on March 15, 2009, 11:21:50 PM
Go for it! You can beat these guys, I know it!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on March 15, 2009, 7:46:38 PM
Waaah...I don't want Azami and Ekyt to battle at full power, they'll get hurt! Be interesting to see who wins the teacher/student battle thoughY0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on March 14, 2009, 3:42:18 AM
Sasori wants to help the LEAF??? Nice to know that Ekyt isn't just being depressed though, he's nice like thishflp on March 13, 2009, 12:50:03 AM
It sounds like Ekyt is finally starting to understand. He might be alright afterall.andr28a on March 12, 2009, 7:30:32 PM
People die in war. I wonder if this will get Ekyt snap out of his problemhflp on March 10, 2009, 3:25:18 AM
I don't care what he says he needs to swallow his goddamned pride. He says he doesn't want to bother anyone but he's doing it anyway by not asking for help.andr28a on March 9, 2009, 7:19:16 PM
Some one punch some sense into Ekyt, please.hflp on March 5, 2009, 10:43:28 PM
Well, at least we know no one can kick Ekyt's @$$ like Ekyt can.andr28a on March 2, 2009, 5:13:53 PM
Never thought that anxiety would cause so much damage. This will be interestingandr28a on March 2, 2009, 7:52:43 AM
Ekyt is starting to fall apart.hflp on February 28, 2009, 12:47:45 AM
Geez. What is with this guy always going it alone. He's gonna kill himself that way.andr28a on February 23, 2009, 5:30:01 PM
...............I'm speachless...............I can't find words to describe this.........this is amazing and I also agree with hflpandr28a on February 23, 2009, 5:14:22 PM
What a battle AWESOMEhflp on February 23, 2009, 10:40:28 AM
Once this kid finds a true master to train under he will be invincible. He just needs to get rid of his naive nature.hflp on February 20, 2009, 12:35:07 PM
Whoa... She is tough. I bet Ekyt would have faired much better if he had someone training him full time. Also someone who didn't use kid gloves on him.andr28a on February 19, 2009, 6:14:40 PM
Holy s**t this battle in awe inspiring.The suspense is killing me
hflp on February 19, 2009, 3:30:08 AM
This is gonna be close. Can't wait to see how it finishes.andr28a on February 18, 2009, 1:57:13 AM
Go Ekyt. Win. Everyone is watching, dont screw up, this is your big momenthflp on February 18, 2009, 1:39:26 AM
This may be the surge of emotion he needs to be able to use his Blood line abilities. He may have a chance of winning this.andr28a on February 9, 2009, 5:45:48 AM
Two hearts bound for battle. THis will be funhflp on February 9, 2009, 1:26:38 AM
This is going to be interesting ot say the least. I can't even picture how it will end.hflp on February 3, 2009, 5:34:08 AM
I like this Ekyt. I wished he would come around more often.andr28a on February 2, 2009, 5:22:59 PM
WOW where did this Ekyt come from, much better then the zombie version (Noraml)Great chapter looking forward to the next
Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on February 2, 2009, 5:40:43 AM
AZAMI!!! What the F*** do you think you're doing??? I hope she dies of guilt. Or better still, that she kills 'the voice' and goes back to Ekyt to grovel.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on February 2, 2009, 5:33:58 AM
Wow, I never expected Iruka and Anko to work so well together. The only problem is, I've now got way too many ideas in my head, I'll never get them all down on paper!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on February 2, 2009, 5:24:19 AM
Lol, Hana and Shikamaru...the crackest couple ever! Actually...they could work quite well...*runs away from the plot bunnies*Can't wait to see who wins!!
Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on February 2, 2009, 12:59:41 AM
Stupid stats. Ekyt can go as far as he likes, if he works at it. And even though he's not at Gamabunta-level, he CAN summon, which not everyone can.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on February 1, 2009, 8:15:19 PM
AWH! He's so clueless, yet totally cute ^__^ Azami's a lucky girl.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on February 1, 2009, 7:55:32 PM
LOL! "Go hit a strip club" I loved that, such a ridiculous image...and so fitting too. I'm glad things are on the up for Ekyt though, he deserves some reward for all his hard work.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on February 1, 2009, 7:18:36 PM
Cheating Akatsuki. I like Ekyt's third reason, nicely put!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on February 1, 2009, 6:52:02 AM
Three cheers for first love ^__^ And another for Ekyt going for jounin!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on February 1, 2009, 1:40:00 AM
He should fill Hidan's scroll with exploding tags...or something. And what's Itachi's sneaky scheem-y thing??Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on February 1, 2009, 1:33:19 AM
Hahaha! Hidan really is hilarious. And YAY, Ekyt lives ^____^ Great chapter!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on February 1, 2009, 1:25:53 AM
Ekyt, nooo! I don't want him to die. Please?hflp on January 29, 2009, 12:18:06 AM
jeez. That is just terrible. I wonder if Ekyt will ever be able to forgive her?andr28a on January 28, 2009, 7:24:55 PM
I get the feeling Pein is behind what Azami just did.Excellent work as always
andr28a on January 12, 2009, 5:22:19 PM
That was an awesome battle. And the fun has only begunhflp on January 10, 2009, 7:11:40 AM
Impressive display. Common fight for this group. I got a feeling they'll be showing some new tricks later on.andr28a on January 5, 2009, 5:43:37 PM
This is going to be one hell of a tournamenthflp on January 1, 2009, 2:21:34 AM
Hmmm.... This is going to be VERY interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next.andr28a on December 24, 2008, 3:34:26 AM
Ekyt always finds a way to move through his sorrowY0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on December 21, 2008, 6:40:41 AM
Disband the council! Then reform it, only with the rookie nine. Ryouko makes me laugh, you write the mix of the two personalities brilliantly.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on December 21, 2008, 6:30:55 AM
Fantastic! Azami is great, and it's so nice to see Ekyt getting a girl at last! It'll be great to see how she gets on with the other villagers.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on December 21, 2008, 12:00:29 AM
Ha! Sasori's puppets failed. Fantastic to bring the Akatsuki into things, and yay for Tsunade! Brilliant chapterY0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on December 20, 2008, 11:47:49 PM
Azami rocks! Great chapter, I can't wait to meet her employers ^__^hflp on December 20, 2008, 12:06:24 PM
Course this bit of news might give him access to his Emotional Chakra again.hflp on December 20, 2008, 12:05:16 PM
I don't beleive any of that statistical crap for one second. If Ekyt had a proper sensei he would go beyond anything they have ever seen. He just needs someone to come along and train him hard.hflp on December 16, 2008, 4:23:17 AM
Cool. I cannot wait till there's more.andr28a on December 15, 2008, 1:53:18 AM
What a sweet chapter.Look forward to the next, wonder what Ekyt will do after Jiraiya's talked to him......if his date ever finishes
hflp on December 11, 2008, 4:25:26 AM
Alright. He's happy...ish. And he's got a girl to beat up girls for him. Everything is coming up Ekyt. About damn time.andr28a on December 10, 2008, 5:17:03 PM
Ekyt seems to be more human then a depressed Zombie now. It's great.Good work as usual
andr28a on December 8, 2008, 6:15:40 PM
I was wondering how Ekyt had survived so many encounters with the Akatsuki. They were their copiesGood work can't wait for more
andr28a on December 1, 2008, 1:09:34 AM
Awesome chapterandr28a on December 1, 2008, 12:59:06 AM
Poor Hidan LOLandr28a on December 1, 2008, 12:51:21 AM
The endings LOLhflp on November 30, 2008, 9:44:26 PM
I just KNEW those two would ahte eachother.hflp on November 27, 2008, 11:56:57 AM
-_-'. He should've just punted that guy's head as far as he could.hflp on November 26, 2008, 12:40:42 PM
hahahahahh....... That ending was GREAT!!!! I can't stop laughing.hflp on November 25, 2008, 10:17:28 AM
This is going to end very good or very bad. Can't wait to find out.andr28a on November 24, 2008, 5:15:19 PM
Ekyt/Ryouko you fool if you use that thing you die........Hello you've got a girl don't lose herandr28a on November 21, 2008, 5:27:29 AM
The council are not the best people to lead the leaf anymore they need a real dose of realityhflp on November 20, 2008, 11:52:25 AM
Those stupid, old, dumbass, sons of doges. Do they have any idea what they're doing anymore. Maybe it's time for a little change in the establishment.andr28a on November 19, 2008, 5:10:27 PM
Those two seem made for each otherhflp on November 19, 2008, 12:40:53 PM
That... was... AWESOME. Ekyt might FINALLY get a girl. It's about damn time. I also really like this Azami girl. Good addition. I wonder how she'll take to Linda? If they ever run into eachother.hflp on November 17, 2008, 10:51:24 PM
Sasori's human puppets again. He is dangerous in that he can use his defeated enemies jutsus. Just perfect.andr28a on November 17, 2008, 5:09:08 PM
I had a feeling that Akatsuki were involved. Graveity users now that is in interesting jutsuhflp on November 14, 2008, 7:58:10 AM
Damn this is good. This blows a lot of your previous work out of the water. Keep this going.andr28a on November 14, 2008, 6:26:24 AM
Damn it now I wish I had Azami as a girl.Awesome piece of work keep going
andr28a on November 14, 2008, 6:13:54 AM
Wow just wowY0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 13, 2008, 6:11:56 PM
Woo! He finally kissed someone! I want to hold a party for him!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 13, 2008, 5:26:31 PM
He just had to get the girl who wants to kill him...poor Ekyt, he has the most twisted luckY0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 13, 2008, 5:16:44 PM
Wooo! Azami's real! So cool!hflp on November 13, 2008, 11:19:45 AM
DAMN. Ekyt's got some moves. His instincts are better than most guy's best stuff. Cool.nextguardian on November 13, 2008, 11:38:47 AM
Kinda makes you wonder how he's stayed single all this time, doesn't it? lolhflp on November 12, 2008, 9:32:46 PM
Oh boy. Ekyt's got a girl that openly likes and will probably still kill him at the drop of a hat. Figures.andr28a on November 12, 2008, 5:19:14 PM
OOOOOO I am loving this, keep it goingandr28a on November 11, 2008, 5:09:11 PM
I knew that dream meant something but I never expected this, totally awesomehflp on November 11, 2008, 12:35:30 PM
o_o. What... the hell... just happened? This is starting to get weird. I LOVE IT!!!!!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 8, 2008, 8:04:48 PM
Poor hungover people...but at least Sakura doesn't know how much Ekyt likes herY0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 8, 2008, 7:57:23 PM
Ekyt and Hinata...they'd be the least confident couple EVER, and they'd never be forward enough to hold hands. Still, they'd be good for each other...Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 6, 2008, 11:07:31 PM
Yay! ANBU is just what he needs to boost his self-confidence. And hurray for Hayate and Yukao, they deserve some happiness!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 6, 2008, 10:57:13 PM
I can never work out whether Ekyt has really good luck, or really bad luck - he never has an easy time, but he still manages to survive...I think I'm turning into a fangirlY0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 6, 2008, 9:13:40 PM
Nooooo! Hurry up, backup squad!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 6, 2008, 9:07:00 PM
This is NOT good. He's so going to have Itachi after him, and Kisame's too big to die! Plus he's injured and he's just sent the strongest fighters back to the village and...*panics*Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 6, 2008, 8:53:25 PM
Well, if that's the future...he could do worse. Well, assuming he actually stayed with Azami.The mission sounds worrying though, he's only just got off sick-leave!
Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 6, 2008, 8:43:52 PM
Poor, poor guy. He really needs to give in to his impulses more...I hope it's not an accurate dream.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 6, 2008, 5:44:53 PM
That's one hell of a bad dream...Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 6, 2008, 5:35:53 PM
He thinks waaay too much...But i suppose i would too, in that situation.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 6, 2008, 5:26:23 PM
Wow, that library sounds AMAZING. If i got in, I'd probably never come out again...and there must be so much you can learn about the people who invented the jutsu by the scrolls they write.P.S. AAAWH! Yuushi's so cute!
Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 5, 2008, 10:05:46 PM
'Temari made a remark about Linda, which caused Lee and Linda to perk up, followed by Kimimaro (who didn’t really understand this atmosphere) getting up to glare mildly at everyone.'Pure Kimimaro...loved that line. And the whole chapter generally.
Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on November 5, 2008, 9:44:22 PM
I think i like Ekyt with Shizune...i've never thought of him with anyone but Sakura, but i think he and Shizune are a good match.andr28a on November 3, 2008, 1:26:41 AM
Clever move by Ekyt, revenge is sweethflp on November 1, 2008, 11:14:13 PM
Awesome. Truly a great chapter. Lots of Humor.andr28a on October 27, 2008, 8:11:17 PM
Ekyt and Hinata would sound like an interesting couple, they both are the same in many respects I think.hflp on October 27, 2008, 10:40:25 AM
Uh-oh. That would be a VERY interesting couple. Another reason for Ekyt and Neji to go to blows. I wonder if that could pan out? Very interesting indeed.andr28a on October 27, 2008, 2:52:31 AM
*Falls to the ground reading last sentance*What from the rank he is now to an ANBU wow go Ekyt
hflp on October 26, 2008, 11:26:12 AM
ALRIGHT. He's finally going to get the training he always needed. I have a feeling with someone actually training him now, Ekyt is going to be unstoppable.hflp on October 21, 2008, 1:07:21 AM
Does this kid EVER spend a day outside of a hospital?!andr28a on October 20, 2008, 6:41:11 PM
Ekyt thinking about joining Akatsuki?! OK I'm afraidandr28a on October 20, 2008, 6:28:52 PM
You dumbass move, moveandr28a on October 20, 2008, 6:18:18 PM
What happenedhflp on October 18, 2008, 1:34:23 PM
Ah crap. Come on kid. If you're going down at the very least take one of them with you. There's always one more move to pull off.hflp on October 17, 2008, 12:45:47 PM
Oh... crap. Ekyt's going to wind up dead at this rate.andr28a on October 17, 2008, 2:29:04 AM
BAM reality sets in.These series of chapters were totally cool
andr28a on October 17, 2008, 2:17:36 AM
Not much has changed through the gererationsandr28a on October 17, 2008, 2:05:19 AM
If this is a vision of the future, holy crap man this is crazy.Awesome chapter
hflp on October 13, 2008, 9:24:39 AM
Hmmm. There are a lot of possibilities for what's to come. This is shaping out to be one of the best stories I've ever read.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on October 13, 2008, 7:43:11 AM
Oh dear god. Fangirls! Run Ekyt, don't let them get their mangy paws on you! It would be better to marry Orochimaru!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on October 13, 2008, 7:34:04 AM
Okkuu is such a little ******. I want to maim him. At least Ekyt's going to speak! (I hope!)Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on October 13, 2008, 7:26:47 AM
Lol "Then let Sakura watch for all I care!" I love that line. Poor Ekyt...he really goes through a lot. But Hayate's alive! Woo!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on October 13, 2008, 7:17:33 AM
I've fallen behind! Sorry, I didn't realize you'd updated...Fantastic chapter, as usual. I think one of the things you do better than any other author, is write good fight scenes. You've got a knack for leading the reader through a battle at just the right pace, and I always understand what's going on. It's a rare skill, you should be proud ^__^hflp on October 12, 2008, 1:24:25 PM
The way this is panning out. Maybe this should have been a seperate story. But I won't say stop. This is getting so good it's rediculous.hflp on October 11, 2008, 1:36:17 PM
Wow. Even Ekyt's dreams manage to kick him in the nads. The kid has no safe refuge.andr28a on October 10, 2008, 10:17:40 PM
I wonder what that kid is thinking deep inside his heart, it seems that this place has awoken something from deep within his soulhflp on October 10, 2008, 12:23:36 PM
Damn. Answer one question and he gets twenty more to takes its place. This poor kid's mind never stops working.andr28a on October 8, 2008, 6:24:02 PM
Thia library isn't just a place for jutsus, its also a history lesson. The things he could fine in there. Makes me quiver just thinking about ithflp on October 8, 2008, 1:20:58 PM
They are going to have to drag that kid kicking and screaming out of that damn library. No doubt his fancination could very well be his downfall.andr28a on October 7, 2008, 6:20:40 PM
"Maybe it’s because teamwork is rare for me, but I’m starting to understand the important of creating jutsus people have never seen, so they can’t defend against them so easily."This sentance has me worried as it's bordering on Orochimaru's beliefs on learning all the jutsus
hflp on October 7, 2008, 1:28:10 PM
Oh good grief. Giving Ekyt the key to the Leaf Village's version of the congressional Library. They'll never see him again.andr28a on October 6, 2008, 3:02:37 AM
Ekyt should stop these damn heroics, he'll end up dead soon if he doesn't stop.Great chapter by the way
hflp on October 5, 2008, 11:24:14 AM
COOL. Keep this going.hflp on October 2, 2008, 7:32:33 AM
That was a great chapter. Loved every bit of it. Keep it going.andr28a on October 1, 2008, 6:06:36 PM
Good greif everyone has a girl geez and Ekyt seems to be the dating guru all of a suddenGreat chapter can't wait for the next
hflp on September 30, 2008, 12:19:55 PM
That was really cool. Also, very interesting at the near EkytxShizune Pairing. That would have been interesting. Keep this up.andr28a on September 29, 2008, 7:40:25 PM
“Shizune, please write down that he’s exhibiting normal behavior.”LOL Can't stop laughing at this line, good one
andr28a on September 18, 2008, 1:49:28 AM
Jiraiya must be desprete for money to do thatEkyt failing a test is not good on his already diminished pcyche
hflp on September 17, 2008, 12:50:34 PM
That was so freaking hilarious. Poor Ekyt.hflp on September 15, 2008, 7:39:04 AM
Ok this is going to be awesome. And I am willing to bet I know exactly who that author is. Get the next chapter up fast.hflp on September 7, 2008, 11:17:47 PM
O_O. Ohhhh.... boy. Okkuu has really done it now. The anticipation is killing me.hflp on September 3, 2008, 10:29:24 PM
Whoa. I'm Speechless. Keep this going.hflp on September 1, 2008, 12:32:39 AM
ALRIGHT!! Now if he can survive it will be a good day for Ekyt.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on August 28, 2008, 12:52:40 AM
Noooooooo! Yuushi's gone evil (sort of). Ekyt has the worst luck ever...though i'm glad he's made chunin at last. Can't wait for the next chapter!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on August 28, 2008, 12:42:39 AM
Noo! Hands off Yuushi you evil snake! Fantastic chapter, by the way ^__^hflp on August 25, 2008, 12:37:02 PM
Ohhh... This sucks on so many levels it's not funny. How can Ekyt have this much bad luck?! I hope there's a good outcome cause I don't think he can take much more of this.hflp on August 13, 2008, 11:07:50 PM
Wow. Amazing chapter. Keep this going.hflp on August 5, 2008, 11:20:20 PM
Awesome update. Keep this going.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on August 5, 2008, 6:46:05 AM
What happened to the antidote Tsunade gave him??nextguardian on August 5, 2008, 2:52:32 PM
Dang, three mistakes in a matter of days! That'll be explained in the next chatper, nice find!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on August 5, 2008, 6:35:43 AM
Yuushi learning the Sexy Jutsu?? Oh dear...^_^Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on August 5, 2008, 6:19:50 AM
Okkuu is the most annoying character I've ever met! (well, read about) I hope Ekyt makes chunin this time though, he's at jounin level!Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on August 5, 2008, 6:09:53 AM
I'm so glad his eye is okay really...poor guy never catches a break though. Great chapter, by the way!hflp on August 3, 2008, 10:06:55 PM
Whoa. Ekyt's going to wind up killing this kid. At least I hope so. The little punk.hflp on July 30, 2008, 12:45:34 PM
Awesome update. Cool idea with the name ceremony. And oh god what was Ekyt thinking putting Yuushi with Naruto? The next chapter is going to be very interesting.hflp on July 29, 2008, 10:57:41 PM
Awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter.hflp on July 28, 2008, 12:49:55 PM
I also noticed another flaw in this story. Didn't Sakura and Naruto start going out while Ekyt was avoiding capture?hflp on July 28, 2008, 12:51:58 PM
I think it was in chapter 17.nextguardian on July 28, 2008, 1:03:28 PM
Wow, nice find! I was SURE I had them go their seperate ways- but that was in "The Power Inside". Oops again! That'll be corrected in future issues as well. Nice find!hflp on July 27, 2008, 11:22:59 PM
ummm... I just noticed an error here. Kimimaro did come to the Leaf earlier in this story and was receiving treatment. So, when did he die?nextguardian on July 28, 2008, 4:48:37 AM
Wow, nice catch! This is an example of three storylines getting confused, lol. I'll be correcting this in the next issue. Thanks for pointing that out!hflp on July 26, 2008, 12:03:57 AM
Well? At least he has been given a chance. -_-' Despite the load-mouthed punk who's going to get himself killed.hflp on July 17, 2008, 12:19:48 AM
Ahhh man. What more can they do to Ekyt? It just never ends.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on July 13, 2008, 2:42:21 AM
Owchies! Not a nice injury...i love the puppy-love scene at the end!hflp on July 12, 2008, 1:28:55 PM
Whoa. That sucks for Ekyt. I wonder what will happen next.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on July 5, 2008, 2:42:02 AM
Woooo! ^_^ It's so nice when happiness happens! And he was smiling! Amazing chapter, keep up the good work.andr28a on July 3, 2008, 4:27:34 AM
Oh dear more trouble awaits, can't waitGreat chapter
hflp on July 1, 2008, 11:05:17 PM
Cool chapter. I think that whole mess ended on a very happy note.andr28a on June 24, 2008, 11:11:03 PM
Cool that was an awesome chapterY0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on June 22, 2008, 9:33:55 PM
Woooo! They're safe! But isn't the mist village going to be just a little bit pissed off? Update soon please!hflp on June 21, 2008, 2:02:53 PM
Awesome.andr28a on June 20, 2008, 12:03:28 AM
Sometimes I hate Kakashi for his damn testsY0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on June 16, 2008, 7:05:04 AM
Argh, the suspense! Please, please get the next one out soon...I'm not going to be sleeping properly until i know if Sai and Katsuyori are safe.hflp on June 15, 2008, 10:02:20 AM
-_-' What is with Kakashi and these tests.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on June 8, 2008, 4:05:39 AM
Woah...intense. That actually gave me an adrenaline rush. Ekyt's scary when he's angry...i wonder if team 7 are going with him for real, or to betray him again. Keep up the good work!musicismylife on June 5, 2008, 8:40:24 AM
O.O *steps out of Ekyt's warpath*hflp on June 5, 2008, 12:52:17 AM
Note to self. STAY OUT OF HIS WAY WHEN HE'S PISSED.andr28a on June 4, 2008, 8:23:53 PM
Geez that was intense, Ekyt was pissed of,just as much as Ryofu in my own story.Excellent chapter keep going
musicismylife on June 3, 2008, 6:55:00 AM
wow...that was VERY deep and well written. kudos to you.andr28a on June 2, 2008, 7:12:28 PM
What a touching chapter, I hope their is another for I want to see what happens to Ekyt, now that Sarutobi sensai is gonehflp on May 29, 2008, 10:17:25 AM
This is way out of control.musicismylife on May 28, 2008, 9:09:20 AM
OMFG -kills orochimaru using the ultimate care bear jutsu- HA! my unstopable ULTIMATE JUTSU!!! Great work btw!andr28a on May 27, 2008, 11:50:26 PM
O F**K Orochimaru this is bad.musicismylife on May 27, 2008, 7:11:54 AM
-kills Sakura- there. thats what you get. CHA! XDY0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on May 27, 2008, 5:24:00 AM
Oh. My. God. Sakura is such a dog. I want to strangle her right now...And poor Ekyt! I can't wait to find out what happens next!andr28a on May 26, 2008, 6:21:13 PM
Grr I hate these Hidden Leaf idiotsandr28a on May 25, 2008, 6:19:26 PM
Haha Lady Tsunade is losing loyalties.musicismylife on May 24, 2008, 6:31:22 AM
WOOT!!! KEEP GOING!!! *loves how its coming along*hflp on May 23, 2008, 11:51:49 PM
AWESOME!andr28a on May 23, 2008, 2:01:14 AM
This story is addictive I can't stop reading it.By the way make more chapters I want to read more.
Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on May 21, 2008, 12:05:52 AM
Wow! This is amazing! Gimme MORE!!!eelchic on March 7, 2008, 10:37:30 AM
So sad I relly hope he lives thats,Sasuke needs a big slap over the head to knock some sence into him!!! I'll read more later promise,can't wait too!!!kogalover2013 on March 2, 2008, 8:01:47 AM
omgkogalover2013 on March 1, 2008, 4:35:01 PM
omg sooo excitingkogalover2013 on February 25, 2008, 1:31:13 PM
 OMGkogalover2013 on February 25, 2008, 1:13:22 PM
awsomeÂ
kogalover2013 on February 25, 2008, 12:54:32 PM
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alchemest1 on February 2, 2008, 9:42:15 PM
Wow. Powerfully written. I love the slight changes all the characters are going through. Can't wait to see where they end up. Awesome work!musicismylife on January 9, 2008, 5:21:30 AM
woohoo!!!!! keep dem comin!!!!!hflp on January 9, 2008, 2:29:00 AM
Great chapter. Keep them comingalchemest1 on January 8, 2008, 5:13:49 PM
Lol. I see mine and Jenny's fingerprints all over this one. Lol. Great work. It was awesome. Glad I had a part in it's creation. Lolsubculturalgirl113 on January 8, 2008, 4:46:03 PM
wow i love it hunny lol im glad a1 an i helped ya on this one sorta lmao. i cant wait to read on!musicismylife on January 7, 2008, 8:33:01 PM
woohoo!!!! love the chapter!!!!!!!!!hflp on January 7, 2008, 12:55:32 PM
Awesome.hflp on January 7, 2008, 4:06:11 AM
That was kick @$$. Keep this going.musicismylife on January 2, 2008, 1:12:16 PM
woohoo!!!!!!!!musicismylife on January 1, 2008, 9:13:13 PM
woohoo ekyt!!!!!!!!!musicismylife on December 30, 2007, 6:03:59 AM
haha i can tell Tsunade's gonna be a little tipsy for a while if that sake goes into the village...... lol.musicismylife on December 30, 2007, 5:14:17 AM
'Dragon Boy' lol.musicismylife on December 29, 2007, 11:05:35 PM
wootness!!eelchic on December 21, 2007, 11:24:45 PM
So far I tote love it!!! ^-^musicismylife on December 21, 2007, 5:28:56 AM
haha 'Naruto?!' lol hope Neji winsmusicismylife on December 20, 2007, 10:18:46 AM
yay for lee and i hope Ekyt lives!!!!!!!! *sniffle*musicismylife on December 18, 2007, 8:29:56 PM
wootness!!!hflp on December 18, 2007, 1:17:56 AM
that was awesomealchemest1 on December 17, 2007, 11:13:54 AM
Totally sweet chapter. You are right it def contained Jiriya. Lol. Sweet work mate stellar as always.musicismylife on December 17, 2007, 8:32:41 AM
oh!!!!!!yayness!!!!!! woot!!!!!!! dragon fire thingys rox my purple soxies!!!! :Dalchemest1 on December 16, 2007, 2:23:39 PM
Totally sweet mate! Excellent work. I love it. Bravo! More!musicismylife on December 15, 2007, 11:51:06 PM
yayness!!! plz keep going!!!!alchemest1 on December 14, 2007, 11:08:56 AM
Stellar as usual mate! Loved it!hflp on December 14, 2007, 6:19:33 AM
Another excellent story. Can't wait for the next chapter