Kaede falls in love
Submitted June 13, 2005 Updated February 5, 2007 Status Complete | Kaede Mishua live with her grandparents in Domino City. She loves her school and her friends. But there is a certain guy she finds it impossible to like, but maybe he is the one she will love?
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Bad Beginnings
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Chapter 2 - Something Unpleasent
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Chapter 3 - Dancing the tango
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Chapter 4 - Painful memories
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Chapter 5 - Love and tears
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Chapter 6 - Ice creams with Kaiba
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Chapter 7 - A trip to the Kaiba Mansion
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Chapter 8 - Party at Ana's
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Chapter 9 - Spin the bottle
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Chapter 10 - Strange couples
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Chapter 11 - "But the baker sells cake."
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Chapter 12 - Invading the Miharu's
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Chapter 13 - A day at the beach
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Chapter 14 - Good (and bad) surprises
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Chapter 15 - Ishtars and arguments
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Chapter 16 - Always, and never
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Chapter 17 - Decision time
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Chapter 18 - Old dreams fade
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Chapter 19 - New Year's ball
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Chapter 20 - For the love of shopping
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Chapter 21 - Three month anniversary party
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Chapter 22 - Past Friendships end
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Chapter 23 - Confessions
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Chapter 24 - Together again at last
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Chapter 25 - Date at the Chinese Restaurant
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Chapter 26 - Tormented dreams
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Chapter 27 - Sleeping, as though dead
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Chapter 28 - Yuula, schizophrenic?
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Chapter 29 - A New Beginning
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Chapter 30 - Ruined happiness
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Chapter 31 - Poor apology
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Chapter 32 - Pool Party
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Chapter 33 - The Ultimate Shopping Trip
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Chapter 34 - Fade Together
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Chapter 35 - I am seventeen, going on eighteen…
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Chapter 36 - Glamorous Indie Rock & Roll
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Chapter 37 - At the temple
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Chapter 38 - O Sole Mio
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Chapter 39 - The Final Pages
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setokaibaslittlesis on July 31, 2007, 10:38:45 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: index)
Somehow, it has become my before school starts tradition to read this. Huh. I promise this is my only post.setokaibaslittlesis on October 19, 2006, 6:15:11 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 23)
GAHH! 'TIS SO SAPPY! XD XD XDsetokaibaslittlesis on October 19, 2006, 6:12:08 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 22)
I feel very left out. :( all you peoples know each other and here I am in crappy ol' USA. I am fully moving to Moose Factory, Canada when I grow up.Lanathae on March 29, 2006, 12:44:41 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 21)
awww peter wrote a lovely coment about that chapter but then he deleted ityeah, he read that capter because he could not be bothered to get out of the computer seet
setokaibaslittlesis on October 19, 2006, 6:08:16 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 21)
Dude...you're a GUY???setokaibaslittlesis on October 17, 2006, 11:39:53 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 18)
MARIK CAN'T HAVE BAKURA!! He is MINE!!!pink_lettuce_leaf on October 29, 2005, 5:00:57 AM
pink_lettuce_leaf on (Chapter: 16)
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setokaibaslittlesis on October 17, 2006, 6:53:53 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 16)
Bwahaha! I LOVE Fruits Basket...I actually am not allowed to read manga, so all I've seen is the anime. But I've read about it on wikipedia. stupid Yuki not following my YukixTohru relationship. Grr.setokaibaslittlesis on October 17, 2006, 6:49:03 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 15)
Bwaha! My brother stalks you when you aren't looking! *shifty eyes*setokaibaslittlesis on September 9, 2006, 1:31:35 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: index)
Caitlee just realized you never told us what happened after Priest Seto and Keade went into the temple with the pharoh! (I can't spell today)setokaibaslittlesis on July 26, 2006, 7:44:11 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 6)
Ak-ward...Now I must away to Driver's ed. and the legendary cranky old teacher of doom...I hope I survive. Bye, now!setokaibaslittlesis on July 19, 2006, 4:21:35 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 4)
Awww...I just realized the list of online people on the bottom is gone! That makes me sad. :(AHHH!! MY MOM KEEPS TELLING ME ITS THE APOCOLPYS! I AM VERY FREAKED OUT!! SAVE ME!!!!! Oh, and this chapter is very nice. I'll stop commenting after every one.setokaibaslittlesis on July 19, 2006, 4:13:33 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 3)
haha. Priest Seto...hahah. The name makes me laugh. He is SO un-preist like. I don't even LIKE Yu-Gi-Oh anmore. The stupid GX thing ruined it for me. I WILL GET MY REVENGE JADEN!!!setokaibaslittlesis on July 19, 2006, 4:00:04 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 2)
aaakkk-ward! hahah. You should have slapped him. I would have laughed VERY hard indeed. He rather deserved it. FREAK!! DON'T TOUCH MY HAND!!setokaibaslittlesis on July 19, 2006, 3:40:06 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 1)
hahah. I remember why I love this story so much. I love to quote "heart of the bottle- guide me."(which I realize is not relvant in this chapter). *YUM* I sure do LOVE Bagel Bites. I wish they would be done cooking already. And now I have to go. I am suppose to be doing my health homework. I couldn't care less about arthritus. tas. tes. However you spell it. Bleh.MarhiaPotterakMewNakama on June 30, 2006, 3:23:37 AM
MarhiaPotterakMewNakama on (Chapter: 9)
I liked the heart of the bottle thingTillyenna on April 17, 2006, 1:40:26 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 39)
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!! Marik in a dress............*laughs to death*Great story manny *wipes a way tear*.......I cant beleive its over.......(write an epilogue....another one....go on, I dare you)
Lanathae on March 30, 2006, 4:20:04 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 39)
yay Art!aww i wish Art was my brother, that would be so cool X3
awww and it has ended... about time too, how long have you been writing it, but then again, how long have i been meaning to read it and not...
ah well, i probably *should* go read your HP story or something.... but no, i think i'v read to much, any more and my head will expode
don't ask my why, it just will...
Eoara on March 29, 2006, 1:50:38 PM
Eoara on (Chapter: 39)
"Esme was past around the group of girls"i think she would NOT have come to me. There is the fact that ana doesnt WANT kids because she DEESPISES them...but its all over! thats sad. but. you. made. a. friendship. speech.
HOW COULD YOU?
other than that, it was good, i suppose.
nah, joking. was very very very good. and the fact that its over is the end of an era.
setokaibaslittlesis on March 29, 2006, 8:42:25 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 39)
WOOT! FIRST COMMENT!!And how could I forget you?
We're praticaclly best friends on this thing!
I'll read your other stories, you'll read mine!
Nice ending! Your kids sound adorable!
Too bad I didn't get to rbeak Mokeba though.
Shouldn't he have moved out by now?
Lanathae on March 29, 2006, 4:23:13 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 38)
awww that was so cute X3Lanathae on March 29, 2006, 4:05:06 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 36)
XD harsh one for Tea!Lanathae on March 29, 2006, 2:52:56 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 35)
heh very well written card, just like mel ^^Lanathae on March 29, 2006, 2:46:31 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 34)
Best hair? i should've deffinatly gotten best hair,hello? bright green here!
Lanathae on March 29, 2006, 2:09:48 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 33)
well FINALLYLanathae on March 29, 2006, 2:07:57 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 32)
... i'm disapointed in you manning, why am i still not in it?Lanathae on March 29, 2006, 2:00:52 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 31)
and Joey finally gets what's coming to him, well, almost, i wish your ring cut out one of his eyes or somthing, that would have been good heh heh hehLanathae on March 29, 2006, 1:52:24 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 29)
... wow, that was unexpected.... i mean, yeah, congrats and all...Lanathae on March 29, 2006, 1:24:26 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 25)
i had to read that last bit like three times before i got what was going oni think that we should all kill Joey heh heh heh
Lanathae on March 29, 2006, 1:14:27 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 24)
"There they were, every single one of them, Sakura, Yuula, Tea, Ana, Mai, Joey, Honda, Yami, Ryou, Duke, Seto, Takumi, Mrc, Tenshi and Mokuba"why am i never invited *cries*
Lanathae on March 29, 2006, 12:48:34 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 22)
love this quote:`No, there's nothing wrong with Yuula that wasn't there when she was born.'
briliant XD
Lanathae on March 29, 2006, 12:20:46 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 19)
yay Miho!Lanathae on March 29, 2006, 12:14:49 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 18)
heh heh heh Joey is such a looserLanathae on March 29, 2006, 12:11:03 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 17)
... how the hell can everyone write such long coments? so wierd...but anyways, i thought that i might as well since i'v read so much without comenting
...very good
i shall go read the rest now
setokaibaslittlesis on March 28, 2006, 10:32:16 PM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 38)
Don't worry. I won't break the house.But I can't say I won't break Mokeba *laughs evily* vengence shall be mine!!!
Ugh.
I HATE mushy stuff
Unfortunately, I hate it SO much, I LIKE it.
Ugh!
Okay, I gots to go start writing my Fruits Basket FF
So many FF so little (ungrounded) time.
setokaibaslittlesis on March 28, 2006, 10:25:00 PM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 38)
Standard English?And you know how you were suprised to find out I didn't live in England?
Well I live as far away from england as you can possibly get.
I live in Texas!
Very far north in Texas, but still.
Okay, now I will read your chapter
AHHH! There is a poor little fish flapping outsdie the bowl on an advertisement!
*resistes urge to click here*
I'm a vegetarian too.
Tillyenna on March 28, 2006, 4:47:11 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 38)
awwwwwwwwww......little baby manny is married........AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWyou guys are sooo sweet, and i can just imagine you going BRIGHT RED!!!!!!!!!
Lanathae on March 28, 2006, 4:46:52 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 9)
one down... 29 or whatever to go *dies*how the hell do i get so behind!!!
Tillyenna on March 28, 2006, 4:41:24 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 37)
awwwwwwww.......how sweet, poor hebeny. adn poor preisty setoTillyenna on March 28, 2006, 4:37:04 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 36)
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha.....comicMariks such a girl....hes like a yugioh seiji (lol)
Eoara on March 28, 2006, 4:30:29 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 38)
*does the carzy and insane dance*NAD IIIIII WAS IN IT...but shes not back yet..*cries*..and i'm nearly sort of...half a person...fun..but still!!!!!!!!!
gooey would like to say that he is not weird...and strange.
OW...he hit me...because he really is, and i told him so. so he hit me.
AND...you say MY story is cheesy???
HAH
but itb was very good....i enjoyed it lots. now all you have to do is the few years later thingy...
Eoara on March 27, 2006, 1:29:56 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 37)
very good, my dove...i liked it mucho...was sad, but not sad enough...so, am i in next chapter? am i? am iiii???please say yes.
LALALALALAALLA
writeth thou moreth.
setokaibaslittlesis on March 26, 2006, 1:36:29 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 37)
EE! I can't wait until the wedding.Read WTDI's chapter one again!
I edited it and there is a surprise in it just for you!
Eoara on March 25, 2006, 9:16:19 PM
Eoara on (Chapter: 36)
"independent woman" HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA made me think of the destiny's child song...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...damn,.,...thats going round and round and round and round in my head nowanyways, this was a very good chapter, even if poor little 15 year old Ana was nowhere to be found....heh...she'd be just out of hospital roght now....anyways was good as always....write more soon
yaddyaddayadda
setokaibaslittlesis on March 24, 2006, 8:50:25 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 36)
Please...Let ME kill Tea
Please
She's irritating enough as it is, with out her hiring strippers
Yay! Thankies for putting Cira in the wedding
I am SOOO excited!
Nemya on March 24, 2006, 7:15:28 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 36)
Ahhh poor, poor, poor Anzu ;___:I'm so glad that wasn't me in the end *breathes a sigh of relief*
"Who cares what everyone else wants?" My goodness, what a lovely attitude x.x;;;
Why can't Marik be a bridesmaid!?! He would make such a lovely one! Awww he wants to be a girl, he's so sweet x3 I love the things he says, and his un-knowingness? x3 Fwa fwa You meanie leaving him with SETO.
Youshouldhavedrivenaway. That would have been so fun xD
Byooo this all sounds so scary x.x;; loudness, so much loudness xD I guess Yuula would like this more than me at least though ^^
What's this about her dancing with some random scary guy?! Adgarga!
(I looove cranberry juice)
I bet it's only for his money x3 Or his coats. *Steals Seto's coats*
Wyon wyon fun fun write som'ore sooon x3 I guess I'll write some myself now right?^^
setokaibaslittlesis on March 15, 2006, 12:34:51 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 35)
Hi!I was going to comment on this, but it didn't have a leave a comment thing.
Then I realized-I wasn't signed in!! I am such a loser.
guess waht?
I am now totally obssesed with Fruits Basket.
And Yu-Gi-OH.
And now I also LIke One Piece.
And sometimes Bobobo-bo-bo-bobo
-_-' Ugh. I like all the loser anime.
Bye!
Oh Great Chapter.
May Cira please come to wedding.
Just be there?
*Puh-lease?*
Nemya on March 13, 2006, 5:51:12 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 35)
So... I'm commenting on all the chapters DxSorries. I'm ultimately lazy. You may murder me. (Unless you have already been murdered by scaries)
The title... going on 18? You're only just 17, deary. (I had the sudden need to call someone that)
Yourgrandparentsareplanningyourmurder. Just thought I'd warn you. Marik's crazy.
I want that book. It sounds so fun Dx
That food sounds goood... Poor Mokie. It must be hard to have Tenshi for a wife/girlfriend. Dook's not there is he? Daaarn. And Marik x.x
Note from last chapter: Yuula and Dook cannot be voted second cutest couple as they are not a couple x.x
Tillyenna on March 1, 2006, 12:47:09 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 35)
WAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! Im in it!!!! ha LEY lu jaaaah haaaleluuhuujaaa, halelujah,, okay ill stp there. Im waving to you, and i look like a freak beacse ur right here. aj well. (ah not aj)Eoara on February 26, 2006, 1:26:08 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 35)
very very very good...now write some more. see how lacking in imagination i am today?! now..i think i wil go and hoover my room. i actually enjoyed tidying my room...**feels ill**im sure i had a fever at riding yesterdya.
AAAAh i want my imagination back. i want to write, but i just cant.
Tillyenna on February 20, 2006, 5:08:34 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 34)
awwwwwww, its just soooooooooo sad, (and i cant see any of the nominations grrrrrr damn pc)but its just sooooooo sweet, awwwww.........*fills with cuteness*
Eoara on February 14, 2006, 6:00:21 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 34)
very good.....but what about sakura??? did she not receive any nominsations? and also............i think that ddook shud have got best hair (girl) as he does have girly hair...hehehwell, was worth waiting for...tres good..i did enjoy
write more...
setokaibaslittlesis on February 1, 2006, 8:41:22 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 33)
YAY IT'S LETTING ME COMMENT!! It wasn't for a while then. Well, hello, you!! Glad to see you're back, I thought you had died!! Muy Bien. I am STILL grounded indefenitly , but every Wednesday, I get to play on the computer for an hour due to a High School church thing. You're not REALLY getting married are you? I put in a story. But I probably won't start it for at least another year. If you want to get to know me more, I now have a Xanga! ^_^! It's web address is www.xanga.com/setokaibaslittlesis Or maybe it's kiaba. I can't remember. Tillyenna on January 29, 2006, 1:07:05 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 33)
kee hee hee.....it is KAIBA.....hmmm yes......MRS KAIBA, thats gonna have to be your name.....dammit, andn mine too. well....ill make mokie change his name......i refuse to be a kaiba
(please write more)
Eoara on December 19, 2005, 12:53:20 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 32)
argh...ur online.....please come on msn....please pleasand uploadeth thou moreth
setokaibaslittlesis on December 18, 2005, 11:57:32 PM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 32)
Oh no! This wasn't the last Chapter was it?? NOOOOO!!!!!! (I got a reprieve from grounding over Christmas break because I studied so hard for my semester exams)(Spanish and Geometrey are the epitomies of evil!!)setokaibaslittlesis on December 8, 2005, 7:34:37 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 32)
Hi. :'( I'm grounded until June. Sorry. Got a d and three c's in PR and so...yeah, fuly dead. My mom called me a nobody. So you can just forget about Cira because the real one won't becoming on for a very very very long time. bye. :'(Eoara on December 7, 2005, 3:35:19 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 32)
hehehehehhe....laty and mel are SOOO funny.and so was the story
it was very good, bub.
i enjoyed it mucho. writeth thou moreth
Tillyenna on December 7, 2005, 2:04:39 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 32)
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH RED COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!! *dies from red commentness*okay an extract from your story...
difference was they were slightly quieter
I read that as.....
Difference was they were different
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA
*laughs*
please write more, this is sooooo amazing, and where does the pool come into it, its called pool party, lots of mention of party, oh wait......
you mean a PARTY AT THE POOL FROM YOUR POOL FREINDS
not a poolparty
*finally understands*
bye bye
xxx
Nemya on December 6, 2005, 6:45:20 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 32)
BUWAAAA SO AWESOME!!!!! x3YOU WROTE MORE THANK YOU THANK YOU BUT I WILL HAVE TO BE GOING SOON SO NOT VERY LONG COMMENT WAAAUUU D:
Aaaanyways, hee hee, Seto go kill Joey. Everyone should kill Joey. Seto has waaay too much money. It's like there's no limit... o.O
I don't think it's a question of you working, it's SETO. He works non-stop. Heh heh. His love. His work. (And his darling little Mokie, of course.) What's wrong with the Kaiba mansion gardens?! I can imagine they'd be immaculate already. Heh heh. Call Bob the landscape gardener. La la la.
Oh no. An excuse to buy yet ANOTHER dress. I think there'll be no more room in your thousand wardrobes. Give 'em to me! You only use 'em once xP OH NO. "Hello Kaede darling", direct translation from evil grandparent language is "I'm planning your murder and it will be very soon" THEY ARE UP TO SOMETHING! A big plot twist in your story is that you find out Seto is a girl and he is having an affair with Joey, and your grandparents kill you bwahahahaaa just you wait I know that they are up to something...
And ha ha ha ha ha the conversation on the phone to Yuula/Takumi made me laugh so much xDDD Ah, they get on so well, but so weirdly xD Ak. It's my dad's Heeeeeeello thing *hides* Yes, they are so weird siblings. I love their little shouting match xD Lucky they get on so well x3 And the thing conversation with Yuula and Kaede is so like me and you conversation xD
Ha ha. Pity the staff at the swimming pool cannot even spell. And at a time like this."Congradulations" Tfeh. (Random word of no point) What is CPR? Sounds bad... Bleh. Oh deareth. Ha ha. Mrs. Kaiba. *snick* *sncik snick* Kaede Kaiba. xDDDDDD
*Recovers* Aaaanyways. Manning, a £50 part is /expensive/! xP Hey, do you not appreciate anything Seto does for you?! How ungrateful. Shall have to eat you. Just you wait. If the grandparents don't get you first.
BWAHAHHAHAAAAAAAAAA.
setokaibaslittlesis on December 3, 2005, 7:46:05 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 31)
I got another chapter done on my story. If you can tell me how to delete chapters, that ve great.Eoara on December 2, 2005, 5:00:53 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 31)
Ana says: I KNOW Joey's a twat...and im only nice to him for the sake of my darling Honda, whom i love very much, even if no one else does.Kara (Stentiford)saya: yes, Joey is a twat, and a prick. and although Ana loves Honda, i do not, for Kuroumo and i have a special place in our hearts for one person only....the gooinator.actually, the goo as to share my heart....but never mind......
Anyhow, ma petite fille, very good story...me enjoyed mucho
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pleaseth that thou will writeth more....merci pour votre hospitaliter.
Tillyenna on December 2, 2005, 4:50:11 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 31)
YAYNESSSS!!!!!!!!THANKIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hmmmmmmm, i think joey's a twat
Tillyenna on December 1, 2005, 3:34:23 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 30)
JOEY!!!!!!1 *runs to slap him*AWWWWWWW *is overwhelmed with cuteness*
please write more
setokaibaslittlesis on November 30, 2005, 8:50:44 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 30)
mm...no Cira :( jk. heheh. So, cool...not much else to say, is there. Excpet that Joey is a jerk and no one ever listens to me when i say that.setokaibaslittlesis on November 30, 2005, 8:44:56 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 29)
Congratulations. Do I get to be in the wedding. *gives puppy dog eyes...no wait*gives Chibby eyes* So cool. heheh. But obvious. But COOL. No one ever gets married in my stories, and the reason why shall become apparent at the end of my story. setokaibaslittlesis on November 30, 2005, 8:40:33 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 29)
I haven't read the chapter but...MY BROTHER'S GOING TO ASK YOU TO MARRY HIM ISN'T HE???? He is SO dead when he gts home. jk. I wonder what Cira's reaction will be...Eoara on November 30, 2005, 5:56:38 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 30)
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW **yet again erupts with cuteness***Nemya on November 29, 2005, 6:00:39 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 29)
ARGARGA AYAYAAAA WHAT THE HUH AYYAAAAAAA MIXED REACTION TIME x3BUT AYAAYAYAYAYAYAYAAAA YOU WROTE MORE THANK THANK YOOOOUUU, HAWWY WAWWY X3 AND IT'S SOO GOOOOOD AND ARAGRAG SETO PROPOSED WHICH IS GOOOOD BUT BAD BECAUSE IT IS MEANING NEAR THE END OF THE STORY! D:
Hem. I knew Yuula was not schizophrenic. Pweh. And what do you mean "was that way generally" and suggested taking her to a mental asylum?! SHE IS NOT INSANE I TELL YOU, good job she recovered and back to normal, *phew*
YES. You have /tons/ of nice dresses, they cost loads, and you only wear 'em once?! HOW RICH ARE YOU!!?!?
AND ARAGRAG there are your grandparents, plotting your demise I tell you, YOUR DEMISE!!!!
Everyone staring at you and Seto as you are both such freeeaaaks. I don't think Seto likes communication.
Ha ha. Katy being nice to Seto. What is this world coming to, eh?
Kara crying (nearly) ooooh. Dear.
PLEASEY WEASY WRITE MORE PLEEEAAAAAASE!!!!
Nemya on November 29, 2005, 5:48:40 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 28)
*glomps* YAYAYAYAAAAAA YOU WROTE MORE AND I MUST COMMENT BUT WHAT THE HUH THIS IS SUCH WEIRD CHAPTER AND AHHH YUULA IS GOING INSANE... I must stop typing in capitals now, however I admit she is going like me, only weh I am not schizophrenic.
Mweh heh heh. Aw, Yuula thinks she is going out with Ryou, I hope Duke took it that Yuula said /not/ to going out with him urk not agin please xP
Well, onto next chapter and awaaa Mokie's awake too and NO DON'T YOU EVER COME BACK AGAIN DOOK! YOU ARE NOT WELCOME HEEEERE!
NOT WELCOME.
I'm not insane.
Marik: Yeah right.
Mel: Onto next chapter, sorry for short-ish-ish comment and non-existant on last chapter xP
Eoara on November 29, 2005, 5:34:16 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 29)
AEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW *************ERUPTS WITH CUTENESS TO INFINITY** SOO CUTE AM ALMOST CRYING!!!!!
Tillyenna on November 29, 2005, 5:34:12 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 29)
CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*first comment dance*
*my freinds gonna get married dance*
*just a general dance dance*
awwwwww, you two are soooooo cute together, congratulatios, awwwww. im so pleased for you, aw i was just like, awwwww, and even more awww,
ah im actually bursting with happiness now
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
ps i know i said i wanna be nice, but NICE TO SETO!!!! thats just ott
Tillyenna on November 29, 2005, 5:29:57 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 28)
YUULA HAS GONE INSANE...omg this is so weird, because she's insane, and the doctors think they should send her to the pink castle with the ment in white coats, and yet she is just acting like mel normally does...
weird
perhaps mel is insane
you never know
well actually we do
she is
anyhoooooooo
coool story
please write more
please
xxx
Eoara on November 29, 2005, 2:43:19 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 28)
AND...Mel didnt say " I'm going to eat yiour toes" ONCE todayEoara on November 29, 2005, 2:42:41 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 28)
I READ IT FIRST...nad yuula is TOO fast turning into mel...anyways great chappy...i LOVED it...hehehe
setokaibaslittlesis on November 24, 2005, 11:03:17 PM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 27)
OKay...what about Ryou? AND THAT WAS SOOOO AWESOME!! THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!! ^__^ even though me part made me sad...but that's about how it went down, yes. jk. I just fall asleep making up fan fiction so I think about these things a lot. I'm no insane, kay. Well, thanks!!!Tillyenna on November 24, 2005, 2:32:59 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 27)
OMFFFFFFFHFOSGthats a bit of an akward moment, i dont know why im typing this as im sitting next tpo you ish, but hey...
WRITE MORE doof
setokaibaslittlesis on November 19, 2005, 7:30:50 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 26)
Okay: 2 things:1. If you don't write more soon, I shall kill you. I don't care if I don't live in Britian. I shall kill you anyway.
2. I am gonna get some pictures up soon!! ^_^
setokaibaslittlesis on November 19, 2005, 7:23:57 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 25)
OH....MY...GOSH...0.oTillyenna on November 18, 2005, 8:11:25 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 26)
Tillyenna on November 18, 2005, 8:06:16 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 25)
...dogTillyenna on November 18, 2005, 8:01:50 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 24)
Thank you....TOE, sorry mel infcted my blood by writing I love hagrid on my finger......oh well
COOLO STORY
Lanathae on November 17, 2005, 4:32:57 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 8)
how the hell can everyone else write such long comments...oh well....
very good ^^
*sniff* but i'm still not in it
Lanathae on November 17, 2005, 4:17:33 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 7)
yay ^^ this is soooo goooodi hope i'm in it soon >
Nemya on November 16, 2005, 5:52:06 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 26)
Manning, you have got the "We all love Clover" ssong stuck in my head. Still.Curse you.
Nemya on November 16, 2005, 5:50:41 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 26)
Ha ha, Ani. Of course you have to comfort Anzu. And then she will steal your Yami from you x3Nemya on November 16, 2005, 5:49:30 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 26)
RAGRAGAR YAYAYYAYAAAAAAAA YOU WROTE MORE THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU AND THERE IS LOTS OF BLOOOD AND VIOLENCE BWAAAHAA THANK YOU SOO AWESOME YAYAYAYAAAA WAAUUUU THANK YOOOU!Well, anyways, lovey-loved it, so awesome as lots and looots of violence x3
So I shall do pointies:
-AARRGAR the grandparents are dragging you away they're evil I tell you, get away before it is TOO LATE!
-JOEY SHALL DIE!!! He is a evil little toe and should be EATEN I TELL YOU!
-HA HA HA HA DOOK IS CRYING! Wha ha ha ha doofus *snick* Thank you for making him cry^^
-Hee hee, Mokie is unconcious. Katy and Mokie have seriosuly shifty kids. And I mean SERIOUSLY shifty.
SETO. IS.
CRYING.
Heh heh. He does cry, for his poor darling little Mokie. He loves him. x3
*Twitch* Kissing Seto. Bleurk. There is a good reason you shouldn't, and it isn't because you might be seen.
Of course you're still a slave. You're SETO'S slave. *Shudder*
BWA HA HA HA HA And there is the torture bit yayayayaaa stoning to death!! Awesome. Hee hee. And lots of blood.
Oooh, and blood spilling out of her mouth x3 And then she dies!!! And what d'you mean, SAnura wasn't like other people?!?!?! EXCUSE ME! She was perfectly normal. *Nod*
And that's the end of that chapter.
(Get it?!?! HA HA AHHAHAHAAAA)
Eoara on November 16, 2005, 5:37:24 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 26)
thats is so cute...and so sad. awww. so sad. aww*cries*
Lanathae on November 16, 2005, 3:47:35 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 6)
mmm mint choc chip >< *drool*Lanathae on November 16, 2005, 3:20:36 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 5)
aww that's sooo sweeet ^^Lanathae on November 16, 2005, 2:23:20 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 4)
awww nice ^^*reads more* ^^
Lanathae on November 16, 2005, 2:16:17 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 3)
^^ sooo goood*goes to read more*
my comments are so short compaired to mel's >
Lanathae on November 16, 2005, 2:05:54 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 2)
*sniff* am i ever in you story... thought not, oh well*keeps reading*
Lanathae on November 16, 2005, 2:01:07 AM
Lanathae on (Chapter: 1)
cool cool...BUT SOOO LOOOONG ><
.... ok then, onto the next chapter.... i hope they are not all this long >
Nemya on November 15, 2005, 5:41:10 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 25)
Joey. Is. An. Idiot.But YAYAYYAYAAAAAA, YOU WROTE MORE, THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOOOUUU I LOOVE IT, T'IS SUCH AWESOME CHAPTEEEERRRR! Shall go through pointies:
-How many dresses do you /have/?!
-argahe oh no it's your grandma and she is soooo creepy! Little do you know, she is plotting to kill you!
-Mmmmm Chinese food sooo tasty *drools* wish I was there, actually Yuula is there, sort of, in a non-eating way xD
-Seto poisoned the necklace, so when you put it on, you die. BWAHAHAHAAA feel Seto's hatred!
-Aw, story of Kaede's parents and family so sad wau D:
And then... Awesomeness. Lots and lots of chi scene. And we all know who's responsible *glares at Joey* You little toefestation.
Awww, you saved little girl^^ Kindy-windy^^
Seto, you know you want to blub your eyes right off. It's his darling MOKIE we're talking about here. Make 'im cry. You know you want to. Heh heh.
Ahhh, stained red with blood, such a lovely description x3 Hee hee. The suspense! Lots of chi. Lots and lots of chi.
Awesome job! YAYAAAAA cannot wait for next chapter!!!!! Please write more soon!!!
Did I mention Joey is a total toe? He needs to be eaten.
Eoara on November 15, 2005, 5:08:58 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 25)
oh, and joey is a prickEoara on November 15, 2005, 5:08:38 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 25)
AWWWWW....you HAVE to write more RIGHT now...as i say so..it was so cute. i am shcoked. so sad. poor yuula.so sad.
awww.
*is shaking*
poor yuula.
Nemya on November 14, 2005, 4:56:08 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 24)
AGARGARA YOU TOE YOU PUT UP SO MUCH, THANK YOU BUT ARAGRAGA GET BACK TALKING ON MSN NOW PLEASE! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR WRITING SOO MUCH, but.... I cannot comment on it all. Sorry D:Well aaaanyways, awesome lot of chapters. Seto is a freeeaaak. And lying at the bottom of the pool is fun... Unless your ears start popping... That's painful D:
Ha ha. What Yuula can be when she grws up. Urrrrkeh. Well, I guess Dook can get lots of money from doing his game designing and then she doesn't have to get a job, eh? xD
Actually, then she'd have to stay home and look after the kids. Nooo. She can hide in her bedroom. Or make Dook take 'em away. That's it. Bwa ha.
Eoara on November 14, 2005, 3:30:01 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 24)
OWAH i did write a long comment. it is mainly blurback my mother is making cauliflower cheese.
it reeks
**vomits**
i hate cauliflower
Eoara on November 14, 2005, 3:29:10 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 24)
BUT SITTING ON THE BOTTOM OF THE POOL IS SO MUCH FUN. esp. if the lifeguards are cute. and also if the guy who taught you how to do it is incredibly hot and french. he had a weird name tho. **reminisces** ah, it was young loveAnyways, i just reread it all, and compie is no longer beiing crappy. although i am meant to be doing chemmy. Oh well. heh.
i have decided that all my characters really are seriously like me. Apart from Ana can hold her breath. and i cant. i was trying to hold my breath earlier, and i nearly died
might have been as it was freezing cold.
and also because i was at the top and end of walking up a really steep hill
with my school bag
Oh, look i wrote a long comment?!!!!
you#d better write more now, as i have made appreciative noises throughout, and given up my future career as a chemist to read this (tch! whatever)
i am now thibking about what ana can be when she grows up. hmm
after her dressage career, cos she retires when she is 29, and she does a bit of music for a while, a few ickly baby recitals.
maybe she and Honda do just lve in france, with lots of money as her father dies and leaves the houses to her and Marc. oh
they could open a ski resort
and have ONE child
ONE.
and it will probably be a boy
as they are more hyperactive than little girls
and actually quite fun.
sam is so sweet. **thinks about cute little sam**
ok. great story. write more. cheers dudette!
setokaibaslittlesis on November 13, 2005, 3:48:34 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 21)
hmnm...hey-gues what/ I AM NO LONGER GROUNDED!!! AND I updated me story!!Eoara on November 12, 2005, 3:34:57 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 23)
WHERE DO I SAY...ANYWHERE? IN MY STORY, THAT HONDA WEARS A GOLD SUIT???? where?? answer: NO WHERE. ani is SUCH bad influence on you. he does NOT wear a gold suit. and i dont understand, if you say you are going to change it so that you dont go out with seto, but honda instead, why are you so mean?or, as i had already presumed, had Ani yet again attacked the computer.
Now i consider it, that is a much more rationaly answer.
hehehe Honda is only there because of me, arent i special?
oh, gooey says he likes you, even if you hate him, as you are a high school guy.
i just told him we dont go to high school, we got to SENIOR school, so now he is in a corener crying.
actually, he is in my room crying, so in a minute he'll find ym school uniform.
HE BETTER NOT TRY IT ON...*runs to check*
phew. he didnt
anywaysm this chapter was great bub...I HATE THIS SONG....ok track is changed. but yeah. great chapter write more. must go. food.
Tillyenna on November 12, 2005, 2:59:24 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 23)
*burts*THATS SOOOOOOOOOO SWEEEEEEEEET, please write more.....please?
Tillyenna on November 12, 2005, 2:57:26 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 22)
*cries* thats real sad......but then again...it is honda, so i guess its not so bad.thank you for the cooooool room *hugs* its grat....yes there is something seriously wrong with yuula's mentla health, i still remember when she tuned to me in biology and said...."Katy.....I need mental help" "laughs head off"
Tillyenna on November 11, 2005, 4:01:04 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 21)
WHATS ALL THIS ABOUT NOT SLEEPING WITH MOKIE!!!!!!!! how evil can you guys get?????????? well i suppose we can always lead the seto doof into believing that im not sleeping with him.......YAY PARTY TIME *starts to dance* lol
Tillyenna on November 11, 2005, 3:56:16 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 20)
*throws up* not only becuase your chap is soppy, but becuase ive been ill....whoops...PLEASE WRITE MORE
and say hi to the doofuses ta your house
Eoara on November 10, 2005, 7:54:50 PM
Eoara on (Chapter: 21)
HEEEELLLLOOO...i read it. but it wont be a long comment as i am going to bombard melly with comments. um, in my story they are all on spirng break at the moment. so well, yeah.hehehe
mokie and tenchi how cute
what was i going to say???
oh yeah...its a short chapter, were you feeling alright? cos i think you might be coming down with something. i hope you are ok,hehehhe
WRITE MORE!!
Nemya on November 9, 2005, 4:49:20 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 20)
Call it 'the neverending mass of parties'. There really are too many. Seriously. Too many mega rich people who can afford to have more than a party-food-and-games party.Won't leave me a long comment eh?! You are evil. And all the long comments I give you....
So I am cutting this short. Ha ha. But, Yuula doesn't appear to be there, as when you go to pick up all the friends she is not there. Smesh.
Well, leaving then Bwaha. x3
setokaibaslittlesis on November 8, 2005, 10:52:29 PM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 20)
^_^ That was SO not a rubbishy chapter. And sorry I can't help you with the chapter name, if you've noticed mine suck majorly. I suppose you could call it The Second Birthday Party or Two-timing the Two-Timer or what not.Eoara on November 8, 2005, 5:02:24 PM
Eoara on (Chapter: 20)
awwww.....so cuteness!!! i loveths it!...what was i going to say...hohumm...oh yeah. title, how about'Love's got a hold on his life'
or something like that. its a really hard one to think about
but it was a good chapter, although a short one for Miss I-WRITE-THE-LONGEST-CHAPTERS-IN-THE-UNIVERSE but....nevermind
hehehehehe
i read it before mel hahahaha
and i shud be doing englsih or blodgily...but i may as well just write my story as i cant be bothered to do any serious work. so tattaa for now, mi amiga! tres bon work!!!
Tillyenna on November 2, 2005, 2:31:38 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 19)
thanks for the detail....really.....thanks (please note IM BEING SARCASTIC!!!!!!!!)apart from that is real good
Tillyenna on November 2, 2005, 2:22:46 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 18)
SCUMBAG.....yay, and hmmmmmm i think yuula is being TOOOOOOOO much like mel, although she isi mel, we could er...dispose of some of the less apetising characteristics (what am I on????)Tillyenna on November 2, 2005, 2:18:39 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 17)
THE SCUM IS OUT.....and the rich guy is in.....i think she has the right idea there.setokaibaslittlesis on November 1, 2005, 10:45:34 PM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 15)
Woah, woah, woah. Wait. Question! What happened to her parents?setokaibaslittlesis on November 1, 2005, 10:44:20 PM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 19)
Of course you would add 7 billion chapters while I was grounded!!*Keade woke up the next day and walked quietly out the door. To her surprise, there was tall girl (not as tall as her) standing there. She had orange hair, blue eyes that were glaring at her, and a millenium item pointing threateninling at her chest. "What the heck are you doing with my brother?" she snarled"
Heh, couldn't resist. If gets much cakier, I won't be able to read it :( Sorry, parental unit rule: I can go to this sight but no "cake". Sorry>_< Please don't hate me!
Nemya on October 31, 2005, 1:31:53 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 17)
You doofus. You yelled at Joey for cheating on you, but you were KISSING SETO IN THE LAST CHAPTER!!!!! You scumbag!!!Nyuu, Ani I only ever said, "It would be funny if Joey cheated on you with Seto" That was all I said. Waauuu *Hides*
Nemya on October 31, 2005, 1:27:01 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 19)
Sorry. Really lack of comments D:You are uploading things too fast! Way too fast! Like 3 chapters a day! I cannot give long comments for each! I don't even know if I have read this properly D:
So I love your story tonny tonny tons, but if you upload at this fast a pace I will not have time to do comments, let alone long ones! But I shall try my best. Sorry D:
I need to be punished.
PS: I DONT WANT MORE THAN 3 KIDS. And call a girl Ichigo and a boy Ryou. And yeah, have Dook and Marik fight over Yuula, especially if it results in one of their deaths (particurly Dook's, as then Yuula won't have to have kids)
PPS: You and Seto getting too lovey dovey xP Bleurk. Cake overload.
PPS: I'm so sorry for short comment D: Upload a chapter every few nights, and then maybe I will have the time to give you long comments. Sorry...
*Goes to burn my head*
Eoara on October 30, 2005, 9:13:29 PM
Eoara on (Chapter: 19)
its sooo cute!! and you should know...i gave up lunch for this...sort of. but its so cute. and damn right ana would kill tea. i have the right mind to pull ana out of my subconcious right now. hhe. still, its very good....methinks i can guess what seto was trying to say. just wait till you see the aboslutely brilliant picture i drew of the two of themhehehhee
WRITE MORE, BUB
Eoara on October 30, 2005, 5:51:26 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 18)
yayayay! you wrote more...and ana has a black and blue face...and joey is on the floor...where he belongs. muahahaha. and no one is talking to each other. and marik is hyper. oh dear. such a pity. he ryou DO make a cute couple...as ryou is the silent type.,...i think. anyhow....very goodi likes it. and there is going to be party!!! yayaya! partyuyy!! i likeths party...
Eoara on October 30, 2005, 2:53:19 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 17)
thats so cute!! AND YOU TELL ME OFF FOR BEING LOVERYDOVEY. tch. whatcever. Anyhow...great story, bub. Better write more, Bub. OR ELSE. hmphles...Nemya on October 29, 2005, 2:36:34 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 16)
Arrrr so good but I am so tired and reading your's and Kara's stories so I will comment later, okies?So sorry but awesomeness and you gave all chapters titles mwee sooo good thank you so much for writing, shall comment later..
Tillyenna on October 28, 2005, 8:44:48 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 16)
YAYAYAYAY is sooooo cooooooool.......manning and seto are in loooooooooooove (hey if you marry him and I marry mokie....then we'll be SISTERS!!!!)Tillyenna on October 28, 2005, 8:39:14 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 15)
awwwww....Eoara on October 28, 2005, 5:13:09 PM
Eoara on (Chapter: 16)
THATS SO CUTE....and of course...no at all like sin city....ahem. ahem. *coughcoughc* last line *coughcough*....bwahahaha, but still soo good.anyhow. i'm actually meant to be getting eady for work
but who cares
YOU'D BETTER WRITE MORE TODAY COZ I'LL KILL YOU IF YOU DONT....if you do i'll consider writing more furbie.
buts it was sooo cute....the only thing that ruined it was my mum singing.,....but that was shortly delt with,.
yeah...i really need to go now.
WRITE MORE!!
Eoara on October 28, 2005, 5:56:00 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 15)
awwww...soo sad...soo cute...and ruined by the stupid blockchecker thingy. and my cousin. but it was sooo good. and so sweet. i loved it!!!Eoara on October 28, 2005, 2:49:21 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 14)
*does first comment dance* OK , so i didnt get first comment, but i DID read it first. so there. as i was there when you wrote it. so there. at 3.30 this morning....MUAHAHAHAHAHA. im tried now. thankies again for having me. twas good fun.
and the story is looking great....BWEEHEEHEEE i know what happens.
Tillyenna on October 27, 2005, 9:31:42 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 14)
dude, those two are freaks (mel and ani) everyone loves maria, her random mutterings and her dirty books *laughs* hmmm, i think marik should wear a dress....it wouldnt be the same if he was truly a guy..PLEASE WRITE MORE, IS SOOO GOOD, YOU ARE AWSOME AT WRITING STORIES......PLEASE WRITE MORE.....PLEASE......PRETTY PLEASE......WITH A CHERRY ON TOP.........and write it soon, or else....
Nemya on October 27, 2005, 8:07:36 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 14)
"actually i dont care whether mine is longer than mels""HA!! HAAAA!! MINE IS LONGER THAN MELS!! HER ONLY TAKES UP 3/4 OF A PAGE!! AYAAAAAAYAAA!"
...
Manning, you will burn for saying your best friend is Marik. An' I drew a picture of Yuula nd Dook xD
Nemya on October 27, 2005, 8:05:56 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 14)
Ani: Mine appears longer on this story, Mmm hmm.Your's is longer for words. Mine is longer for general spacing. Mweee :3
Nemya on October 27, 2005, 8:00:25 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 14)
Arrr I made lots of typos but it's a long comment :3My mum says an inquest is when they investigate how you dies, and that could involve cutting you up :3
Sounds fun^^
Nemya on October 27, 2005, 7:56:48 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 14)
ARGARGARGA DON'T BOTHER TELLING ME WHEN YOU PUT UP A NEW CHAPTER WHY DON'T YOU ARGARGARA BUT YAYAYAYAYAA YOU WROTE MORE AND IT'S SOOO AWESOME YAYAYAYAAAAAYAYYAAAAAAAIT'S MARIIIIIK! ARARAGARG! YOU WROTE MARIK IN!!!!
Marik: Finally, someone in this story who's worthwhile.
Mel: RAGRAGA Shut up you idiot! And YOU *Finger points to Manning* Better not be thinking about any Yuula x Marik-ness, or even suggested Yuula x Marik-ness and NO NOT MAKE YUULA FALL IN LOVE WITH MARIK OR WHATEVER! Her loveyness is confusing as it is, with loving the adorableness that is Ryou, and being loved byt the freak which is Duke, without THE ULTRA FREAK OF DOOM!!!!
Marik: Shut up, idiot. *Bashes Mel over the head* As if I would ever love /you/.
Mel: Ooooh my head hurt x.X Well, back to reviewing story :3
Ooooh NOOOO IT'S YOUR GRANDPARENTS! They freak me out SO MUCH!!! I don't know what it is but.. *Shifty eyes* I think they are plotting your demise.
Joey's an idiot. That's all that needs to be said.
There is a mass of Physics lessons! They're everywhere! ARGARG too much physics!
AWWW And Ryou's talking to me awwaaaa love you Ryou :3
Honda and Ana kiss too much. Make 'em stop!!! RAGRAGARG KISSY NOISES!!! Ah well, better them then Yuula and Dook.
Awww, Ana picks Honda over all her friendies xP It's a HONDA
ARGARGA And then there's Marik! Evilness!!!! What's an inquest? It sounds like something to do with dying. Talking about that, I found a perfect present for you in WHSmith!!! (It's a write your own will kit xD) Except it was pretty expensive :__; So no will kit for you D:
ARRRR, AMrik is such an idiot, talking on the plane!!!! Wouldn't it crash or something? Cathleen went on her gameboy in the plane and it went all wobbly. I think Marik would be dead. Idiot.
Marik: Less of an idiot then YOU.
Hey, you meanie, don't say mean stuff like that!!! Although gold suit sounds scary! Hee hee, Maria style. Did you know factorisation is called the Maria technique? (After guess who, our Maria)
Pfft. Joey, a prince? HANDSOME?!? I think it was a good idea not to mention Seto... Just the "high priest" eh? I can just see Joey thinking in his mind, "I was that high priest..." Idiot xP
Marik: Yeah, and you're the one to talk?
Mel: Shut up.
ARGARAGAR And what's this, DOOK's hand around Yuula's waist!? I think she would have noticed it, the rudeness of him! RAGRAGA!!
Hey, and what's "really weird psycho girl" meant to mean?!? I'm gonna get you for this!!!!!! She just has... eccentric behaviour problems xP
Marik: Translated as Psycho. Doofus.
Mel: I hate you Marik D:
Hee hee, everyone's trying to imagine their past now xD Ew, more Ana x Honda-ness xP
And don't laugh at Yuula! It's not her fault Duke has an evil obsession. D: You know you loved that picture of seto and Duke really. Were YOU the one who said I was jealous, not Kara?
Then... He came. AK.
WHY ON EARTH WOULD ALL THE GIRLS WANT TO CROWD ROUND HIM!?!?!? Freak.
Marik: You're just jealous because you end up with Duke instaed of me.
Mel: I suggest you shut up. :K
Oh dear... Joey HAS to be an idiot agin. But, if this is after battle city, they would have all already met Marik?
Hey, what do you mean, MARIK'S your best friend?!?! I'm going to kill you.
Nemya on October 23, 2005, 6:55:35 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 13)
I forgot to say, WHY DID YOU TELL JOEY ABOUT DOOK'S PETNAME!!?!?!? HE CANNOT KEEP SECRETS, REMEMBER THE CAKE THING AT THE BEGINNING OF YOUR STORY?!?!?If he goes blabbing to anyone I will murder him. *Gets out knife*
That'd be an interesting twist to the story. May I murder Joey?!!??!
Nemya on October 23, 2005, 6:45:54 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 10)
xDDDDDI just noticed a major mistake, Hm maybe it's not a mistake and was meant to be that but...
You wrote Joey's head was standing on end xDDDDDDDDDD
Nemya on October 19, 2005, 9:22:28 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 13)
AK AK AK AK AK OH NO I'M SO SSORRY I HAVEN'T HAD TIME TO COMMENT WAAAUUU I'M SO SORRY BUT T'IS SUCH AN AWESOME CHAPTER AND SO FUNNY XDDD YAR I LOVE IT JUST LIKE ALL YOUR CHAPTERS IN THIS STORY! STOOORY! Now, must make random points.-AAGRAG Ana is shoooo freaky! And what the, "GET OUT NOW! WE'RE NOT WEARING A LOT!" ARGARGA That is so freaky!!! Geat away from them and then Honda says if you're Ana come in aRGARAG he is SUCH A CREEP!
Honda= scary.
*Snick snick* DOOKIKINS!!! I'm surprised he can put up with such a title. Pet names are... Sickening.
MANNING! You are so rude!!! Do not just shove people out of the bathroom so you can go in! Go somewhere else! You SCUM!
RAGRAGA Pancakes yuuum *drool drool* and Yuula gets to wear a FRILLY PINK APRON yayayayaaaa so cute, I love aprons, especially frilly pink ones!! Urk Honda and Joey are scary scary. Nooo manners tut tut.
Hee hee, Honda is a snowman! Wheee! And YAYAYAAAA, t'is KATY! And she is so evil! And weird! (She's got to be, to love the MOKIE) I can just imagine Anzu being like that.
"Ignoring the stares, she picked up her board " STARING BECAUSE YOU ARE A FREAK! Hee hee, you are so horrifying they cannot help but stare in sheer TERROR!
Hee hee, Yugi always suggesting duelling. Urk, sunbathing. My brother is scary. *Burys him in squand!*
Nyeee, that game sounds scary. Katy is evil. Seto is an idiot for taking Mokie's penalties. Mokie's too pathetic. I caould just imagine him whining "SETO!". Nyeh.
Hee hee, Seto said it. Nuyaa. I think Seto would look lovely in your clothes, despite the fact he's more of a dress person. Like an evening dress *thinks* He has the perfect body shape. (DON'T take that the wrong way!)
Admit it. You looove dresses on Seto!
Eoara on October 19, 2005, 7:21:46 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 13)
YES I COMMENTED BEFORE MEL ANMD I FEEL SOOOO SPECIAL....YAYAYAY....and i just got back from france and its nearly midnight....like.....23:49.....so i am going to sleepy poo....night night.xxxxwrite more.
Tillyenna on October 19, 2005, 1:35:25 AM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 13)
dude, I think the skirt suits him.Thankies for making me a dog, its fun....AND WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH BEING SHORT!!!!!!!!
awwww and EVERYONE LOVES MOKIE and everyone hates seto, he such a ....... freak
Tehshi: indeed *nods*
Mokie: BIG BROTHER!!!!!
Me: gad how i love stirring (i cannots spell?)
PLEEEEAAASSSEEEEE write more, i would love you for ever if you would........and if you didnt, well lets just say you wouldnt be there very long for me to love bwa ha ha *goes off on evil rampage*
AWWWWWWW mokie is soooooooooooooo cute *does everyone loves mokie dance*
oh wait i forgot
*does first comment dance and falls over becuase she is such a reject*
im doing lots of dances coz im wearing my ballet shoes, and it goes to the brain
WILL YOU STOP TALKING TO ME ON MSN I AM TRYING TO WRITE YOU A DECENT COMMENT HERE
no your writing skill has not gone down, that chapter was the best yet (coz i was in it of course along with my darling m....)
i should probably shut up now, but i am sooooooooo hyper, so im gonna go, i have to go cook food for brother *scowls*
have fun.....WRITING MORE (with mokie in)
setokaibaslittlesis on October 18, 2005, 6:24:11 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 12)
0.o alriighhhtt. But when do we get back to the good stuff with Seto in it. Grounded, so I can't comment agian for another 3 weeks. Bye!Nemya on October 18, 2005, 5:04:21 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 12)
NOOO THANK YOU SOOOO MCUH FOR PUTTING STORY UP BUT I WILL HAVE TO GO VERY SOON SO NO TIME TO COMMEN WAAAAAAAAUUUUAnyways, looove so much you have written loads more recently! Don't just invite yourselves in, Scumbags and Takumi is so evil letting them in and letting Dook in too NOOO How dare he come into MY HOUSE RAGRAGARGAR And OHH NOOOO makeovers Ak vile FACEMASKS! Those things make me feel sick xP
Mmm, but choocy and then VILE LETTER/PHOTO THING!!!! T'is soooo evil :K Sickening. Just plain sickening. Ew. Dookikins. Make sure you forget to ask Yuula about that. I can see why t'was shoved so far under the bedside table.
Sorry I could not comment so long D: I'm sorrry!!!! Nuwaaaaa but LOVE your story please write some more soon before I go insane!
Tillyenna on October 16, 2005, 8:10:14 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 12)
dookikins?Tillyenna on October 16, 2005, 8:03:30 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 11)
AWESOMETillyenna on October 16, 2005, 7:00:08 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 10)
awwwwwww mel and DUKIKINS,awwwwwwwwww
wheres mokie
silence
aww hes not there, oh
Tillyenna on October 16, 2005, 6:54:40 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 9)
Tillyenna on October 16, 2005, 6:46:52 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 8)
*dies of storyness*OMG!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE WEARING GOLD BANGLES AND SILVER EARINGS, NEVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER PUT GOLD AN SILVER TOGETHER ARRRRRRRGH
Tillyenna on October 16, 2005, 6:38:11 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 7)
aaaaah hees a creep!!!!!YAYAYAY MOKIE, hes sooooo ADORABLE, *laughs*
Tillyenna on October 16, 2005, 6:34:12 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 6)
*scowls* wheres mokie***************************
YAY STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!,
hmm, stupid smoking BINT
anyhoos, you and seto are sooooooo sweet (sorry i didnt comment on the first few chaps but i read them in maths, and couldnt be bothered to log in)
Tillyenna on October 16, 2005, 6:19:48 PM
Tillyenna on (Chapter: 5)
I have to say i agree with Marik, mel is the ultimate freak...YAYAYAYAYAY STORYNESSSS
(imagine, imagine, imagine a story...)
how does mel slap marik, *contemplates mel slapping her own intestines*
WRITE MORE
WRITE ME INTO IT, with my darling mokie, aww
Nemya on October 16, 2005, 5:43:16 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 12)
I am going.....TO KILL YOU.
I think you can guess as to what I'm talking about. Just you wait till I get a chance to comment properly.
setokaibaslittlesis on October 16, 2005, 1:44:35 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 11)
I promise I will actually read this later, but I need to go see if this fight girl is my friend Jessica in disguse. ARGGH!! WILL SHE END UP WTIH SETO OF JOEY????setokaibaslittlesis on October 16, 2005, 1:41:05 AM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 9)
"Guide me, Heart of the bottle." I LOVE THAT!!!! ^_^ That is aboslutely superaswesomenessfanstastical.Nemya on October 12, 2005, 5:11:23 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 10)
Ew.Ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew.
That was an evil chapter... Contained too many references to Yuula x Dook-ness. Urk. AAGRAG, I feel so evilified, so no long comment right now D:
Shall put another up later. But yes, despite all the vileness..
I LOVED IT!!!! YAYAYYAYAAAAA THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING AND SO MANY PAIRINGS/ POSSIBLE PAIRINGS AS A RESULT^^
Sorry, shall give you another comment another time. For now, I guess I shall write my own story. Or reread this..
(For the 6th ( ? ) time over. >.>)
setokaibaslittlesis on October 11, 2005, 11:10:24 PM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 9)
ARRHHHGGG!! Do you know how long it took me to print this out??? My dad is coming soon and I'm not suppose to be on the computer!!! So I had to print!! Some chapters were 11!! pages long!!!! BUT I HAVE TO READ IT!!! Tell you how I like it when I'm done!!setokaibaslittlesis on October 11, 2005, 10:54:07 PM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 3)
OMGOMGOMG!!! YOU DID WRITE MORE!!! I LOVE YOU!!!(but not in that way) THIS IS T^EH BEST COLLABORATION SCEDULE WEDNESDAY OF MY LIFE!!! THANK YOU!!!setokaibaslittlesis on October 11, 2005, 10:49:35 PM
setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 1)
^_~ I have loved this story for a while and keep forgetting to comment. WRITE MORE!! YOU MUST WRITE MORE I SAY!!!!Nemya on October 9, 2005, 4:06:47 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 9)
Erm, no, I meantMINE was longer by an inch. Came out wrong way. Mweh. Erm, those gnomes are even more scary then usual. *Hides*
I think that the comments are about the same length/lenger than the actual story...
Nemya on October 9, 2005, 6:19:37 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 9)
Ani, you are too evil. Mwa ha. Tis longer by... An inch xDI HATE. Quintus and David the Gnome. You will die. Ha, and you had too kiss HONDA. But I think Kara was the worst off.
I forgot to mention the impure thing. Urk.
Honda scares me.
Eoara on October 9, 2005, 3:55:56 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 9)
heh....great story bub! and mel and ani's combined comments are nearly the smae length as the WHOLE chapter...heh.YAYAY...soo funny...i love making an idiot of myself...like sinign karaoke...and dancing on chairs and tables......what is scary is that i dont have to be drunk to do it.
'she was staring at Honda, who was standing beside the table, staring back at her with an impure look in his eye.'
an impure look...eh?!
must do maths...
Nemya on October 9, 2005, 2:06:48 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 9)
AGARAGARAG THIS CHAPTER IS SO AMAZINGLY GOOD AGRGARGA THERE ARE SOO MANY THINGS I WANTED TO POINT OUT, SO I WILL POINT 'EM OUT IN THE ORDER THEY COME UP, WHICH MEANS I'M HAVING TO READ THIS CHAPTER AGAIN SO IT'S GONNA TAKE DOUBLE LONG TO COMMENT!!!! BUT REALLY IT IS SOOOO GOOD AND SOOO VERY FUNNY YAR THANK THANK THANK YOU FOR WRITING SHOOO MUCH! AN' BACK TO THE SCARY/FUNNY/RANDOM THINGS I'M GONNA POINT OUT! YAAAYYYAAAA HERE GOES!:-Yugi said "Kaiba!" Ahhh I can just imagine you saying thaaaat xD
-Grarg you people stealing my orange juice I'm going to kill you for that actually I haven't had orange juice in a while so I think I'm gonna go have some now, break from cranberry juice... (Also, my sister and parents just got back from horse riding so this comment may be cut short D:)
-Back and mmm I forgot that OJ tasted so niiice^^
-Ahahaha you dancing with Joey and Seto's heart is breaking aww well he still has Mokie right?
-Finished OJ, mmm, and awww, Seto's gone sulking to Takumi, and argara, what the, "I'll just hang around here with Yuula" what makes you think Yuula wants to hang around with you ew go away you freeeaaak what is your problem! (Yeah sure, Yuula is his friend xP)
-Seto is too stubborn. He's like a little toddler xD
-Yuula's not old enough to drive a car.
-"Heart of the bottle, guide me" xDDDD IIIIDIOT but yeah I love Sakura-Anzu war thing, can just see them now glaring at each other, and Yuula and Kaede hoping not to kiss Yami Aww Sakura is so happy^^
-My English is steadily getting worse and worse as I type this comment D:
-Grr, i totally agree with you on the watching people kiss thing xP Urk.
-URRRRK kissing HONDA xPPP And yes, tis worst luck xD But luckily tis only the cheek, love the "Well, it is HONDA" bit xD and for Ana "(ha, she got all the bad people!)" Indeed she did, but didn't seem to mind eh freakiness. And *twitch* KISSING NOISES :K
AND THEN URRRRK AWFULNESS OCCURS URK URK URK HOW VILE! And he is WATCHING Yuula as he spins the bottle, and he is staring at it desperately URK FREEEAAAK! But ha ha, I LOVE Yuula's reaction, tis so much like how mine would be nyeh? Ewww and he is "supressing a smile" that sounds VILE (Ha ha, that rhymes) RUN FROM THE DOOK YUULA!!!! She should have punched him when he grabbed her wrist :K ARGAR Kissing noises noo! ARAGRA That is UNNESSECARY CONTACT Seto grabs her hand!!! And what do you mean she doesn't care who it lands on, it better be because she is soo upset and horrified at having kissed Dook! But then....
AYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!^^ Yuula gets to kiss RYOU!!!! YAYAYYAAAAA THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH FOR WRITING THAT IN WAAAA IT MAKES UP FOR HAVING TO KISS THE VILENESS THAT IS DOOK THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!! THANK YOOOOUUUU! AWWW RYOUUU! But hem, back to points...
-Joey can't even spin the bottle right. Idiot. And urk kissing Joey but thinking of Seto eh?! But it doesn't actually say WHO'S face so it could be... MOKIE!!!!
-You have no more chance of kissing Seto than before. Unless, you have to kiss people who haven't had a turn yet... Hm.
URH, kissing description sickening. Sooo glad you didn't do for me and the Dook, phew, t'was bad enough.
-ARGAR, Anzu is dancing with the MARCINATOR.
-AND THEN... TIS THE SONG. Nooo Kara! You sing that song too much, tis awful and you're singing it to HONDA URRRRK xPPP And then Kaede and Sakura join scary scary!!
-ARAGRA Sister has just set me tiiime D:
AGARAGAR YOU WERE RIGHT THE ENDING IS SICKENING!!! TIS YOU AND JOEY... *TWITCH* EATING CAAAKE! ARGARGA SINKING SOOO LOOOW! BLEURK!
Heeeeey I just realised something, that Yuula and Dook never use petnames HA and tis too late now because you said Yuula gets Dookaphobia the next day soooo haaa no pet names and oh great my mum is getting moody ohh nooo and I must go and I bet this comment does not work like last time waaa! BUT I LOOOOOVE THIS CHAPTER YAY THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!!! Please write some more soon and I will worship you! THANK YOU!
Hee hee, Marik has not put a single mean comment in, nyee hee!
Marik: You spoke too soon. Idiot.
Eoara on October 6, 2005, 9:55:12 PM
Eoara on (Chapter: 6)
OK....i am sooooooo most ulitmately definitely going to write a story that consists fo weird mel freaksims...YAY...great story....just finished rereading...WRITEHT THOU MORETH!!Eoara on October 4, 2005, 4:53:24 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 8)
"with the music as the catalyst, the party got started".....you included CHEMISTRY in your story *faints*Nemya on September 26, 2005, 11:00:28 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 8)
GREK GREK IT WOUND NOT LET ME POST MY FULL COMMENT SO HERE IS THE END HALF OF IT YAR:Aaaaaaaanyways, back to the point, I LOOOVE This and even more cos it is such a long chapter I hope this comment is at least a little long!! Yush and I cannot wait for next chapter EVEN if poor, poor Yuula has to have cake with the Dook. That is just EVIL, EVIL. EEEEEVIL. You could just cut that bit out, eh?!? LOVE THIS CHAPTER SOOOO MUCH AND I BET FAC WON'T POST MY COMMENT NYAAAAA BUT YEAH WRITE SOME MORE STORY SOON PLEASE I CAN't WAIIIIT Yar THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!
Nemya on September 26, 2005, 10:59:30 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 8)
AWAAANYAAAHAAAAYAYAYAAAAAAAAAAAA THANK YOU THANK SO SOOOO MUCH FOR WRITING AND THIS CHAPTER IS SO LOOONG TOO THANK YOU WAA WAAA NYAAA I LOOOVE IT SOO MUCH!!!!!!! YAYAAAAAA!!!! YOU PUT UP MORE STORY THAANK YOU BUT I HAD TO RESORT TO USING SCHOOL COMPUTERS NOOOO BUT I LOOOVE THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!! RGARAGRA so awesome!!!But,: "`Aww, why don't you two just kiss and make up, you did make such a cute couple,' Sakura baited, teasing Yuula" Grek grek grek I will murder you Aniiii!!!! Although, this is not quite you saying it so I guess it is your fault Manning no mean jokes about me and the Dookinator he is evil evil EVIL!!
And huh, Anzu spent 7 and 3/4 hours at your house deciding what to wear, SO WEIRD! And clothes are her sports? And she came at 7:15, and you'd already been out for a run and swimking so you must have got up at 5 to do RUNNING you weirdo?!?!?!??!
RAGAGRAGAR You freeeeeeeak but this chapter is so goood and I wish that FAC was working at my house waaaaaaaaaa Nyo nyo will have to wait til it gets working duh x.X This is suuuch a random comment and ha ha you kiss Joey and next chapter Kara has to kiss HONDA xDD And urk, cake with Dook. *hides* Lets skip that part, or don't make it obvious that's what they're doing right? Or you could just not mention it at all?!?
Ha ha, Anzu loves Marc? I love how her legs turn to jelly Yar yar how wierd..
Nyaaa looove it and I dunno how long I've spent typing but I bet this isn't as long as previous ones waaaaaugh nooo
Marik: Here she goes again, freaaaaaak.
Mel: No Marik, you are the freak, you live in my intestines, who here agrees Marik is the freak, not me?? I bet you all agree, yup?!?
Eoara on September 26, 2005, 8:01:06 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 8)
yaya first comment***and i just choked as i was bout to say yay to noone in particualr**** anyhow....i wuvvles oo soo much right now...youd better wrtie mroe soon...especially as i just ripped out ym entirre voice box for you...see you tomorrow if i dont die at my MRI scan. !!! yaya! great story!!Nemya on September 24, 2005, 11:39:58 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 7)
*glomps once more*Nyush. I like the loveyness between Manning and Seto. Or in storyness on general. But I'm sorry Manning but Mokie and Seto are MEANT TO BE TOGEETHER!!!!! NUWAAAA NOOO AND I DO NOT WANT TO EAT CAKE WITH THE DOOK HE IS A FREEEAAAK!
Marik: And who is talking.
Mel: Nuwaa shut up Marik you are always being soo mean to meee you bully!
NYAAAA I loooove your sotry and despite the Dook cake thing, I can't waaaaiiiit to read next chapter! Ha ha, Ana has to have cake with HONDA xDDD NAw, and how about Sakura and YUUUUGI?! xD Poor, poor them. Actually I cant be talking as I'm stuck with Dook xP
Manning, you are a cruel cruel person. Please write more story sometime! PLEEEEAAAAASE dear fweindikins!!!!!! FWIENDIIEEEEE!!!!!
Eoara on September 22, 2005, 4:13:11 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 7)
yayayayayayayayyy...is the pary next??? eh?Eh?eh?Eh?yayayayay
Nemya on September 21, 2005, 5:20:53 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 7)
AGRAGRAGA ARGARAGA YAAAAAAAYAAAAAA ITS SOOOO AWESOMELY GOOD THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING YAYAYAYAYAAAAAA I LOOOOVE IT!Nyaaaaa~ Thank you thank you thank you!!! You wrote more stoooory! Ahhh, and Mokie is there too! And he saying goodnight to Seto!!! He obviously adores him! Yaaayaaaaa!
Ahhh. and your last thoughts were of Seto?!??! AWAAAAAAA sooo cute you're thinking of him nuwaa nuwaa But I still think your grandparents are seriously CREEPY! I don't know exactly why, but there's something about them... *shifty eyes*
Nyaaaawaa, I finished my english essay and no didn't take too long because I didn't do it in neat (Had no lined paper xD) So will have to hop I don't get murdered and hand in tomorrow..
Ak, don't have much time so aweeesome chapter and will comment again after school! YAYYAYAAAAA Thank you so much for writing but Uh oh, next chapter is party, *hides from Dook and the sickliness*
Nemya on September 17, 2005, 3:43:36 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 6)
*glomps you*NOOOOOOOOO IT WASNT AS LONG!!!!!!! WAAAAAAAAA ;_____;
Btw, I didnt end up pairing off Yuula and Ryou because I dont think I should pair 'em up just cos I'm a Ryou fangirl. So I made Yuula love Ryou, but that's as far as it goes for her ;_;
Mel: Hey, if you add this comment length-ness to the previous one, I THINK ITS GONNA ADD UP TO BE LONGER THAN THE LAST CHAPTER ONE! YAYAYAYAAAAA! I HOOOOOPE SO!
Waaw, I think we're gonna be having early supper cos of Rachel's party, so I better stop commenting...
Marik: YES. FINALLY. SOME SENSE HAS GOT INTO YOUR HEAD. Let's go. NOW.
Mel: But waaaa ;_;
Marik: I said NOW. OBEY ME. *drags Mel off*
Mel: Waaa, you so mean Mariiiik.
Nemya on September 17, 2005, 3:36:41 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 6)
AK AK AK AK AK SOOOO AWESOME!!!! YAYAAAAAA I LOVE IT SO MUCH! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU SOOOOOOO MUCH! ARGAH I CANT TALK LONG BECAUSE RACHEL IS RIGHT BEHIND ME ON THE PHONE :K
Aaaanyways, it was such an awesome chapter! Hee hee, thank you for the ice cream! Yuula is disturbed! But I do love strawberry chocolate chip!! Ha ha, and Takumi is an idiot and has to walk down all those stairs...xDDD Ahhh, and threatening for Honda to sit on me... That is a scary, SCARY prospect.
Muwaaa, LOVE IT!!!! THANK YOU THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!!!! Awaaa, its you and SETOOOOOOO!!! You are so cute!!!
Btw, I'm afraid Yuula and Ryou never get together. ;___; She has always loved him, but he doesnt know, and only likes her as a friend also. I thought that I couldn't have a perfectly happy ending for her... But yeah. She does love Ryou. So thankies so much for writing about them both!! Nyaaaa! They are so cute! But just so you know, they don't end up together, and Ryou doesn't even love her... Just really likes her. But, yeah. Just so you know xP Sadly, they don't end up together... This would muck up what I wrote about Yuula.
Aaaaanyways, thats enough about me rambling on. I loooooove your story sooo much! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! (Although.. Hang on... That's the cake with Yuula and Dook chapter isn't it x.X NOOOOOO) But I looove it its soooo awesomely goood! Nooo throwing rocks at me Ani XP
Looove the chapter, I cant comment more because now my mum is behind me talking to Nicky (aunt) sooo got to stop commenting waaa But I loove the chapter so much!!!! And yaya, random, but we have pizza and chocolate bread and butter pudding for supper^^
THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!!!! LOOOOOOOOOOOOBE IT!
Marik: No no no she's turning freakish again x.X I hate her (even more) when she gets like this.
Mel: Is this comment as long as the last one I left on ch5?? I dont think it is waaa better keep on talking...
Marik: NO WAY. We're going NOW. NOW.
Mel: NOOOOO IT WONT BE AS LONG, BUT HANG ON, WE'VE BEEN HERE FOR A WHILE SO MAYBE IT IS? Must check...
Marik: Okay. Let's go check. *sigh*
Eoara on September 17, 2005, 3:17:20 AM
Eoara on (Chapter: 6)
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYy.,...i was in it....but what happened to the party??????? there was no party?? is there going to be a party???????Eoara on September 10, 2005, 9:46:12 PM
Eoara on (Chapter: 5)
yayayayaayayay! more story.....AND I WAS IN IT!! tres bien mi amiga....j'aime beaucoup.
ummm...yeah/...we shud make a story out of ALL of the commets we get from mel.....that would be funny
write more!!!
Nemya on September 10, 2005, 7:47:13 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 5)
MAAAAANNNING YOU SCUMBAG YOU ARE ONLINE BUT YOU DIDNT TELLLL MEE.... OR GO ON MSN... When Yuul say sabout Duke and her "eating cake" she shouts that out pretty loud. Wouldnt other people understand? *hides*
But Manning I LOOOOOVE IT! That was the longest comment I ever left, so be honoured!
Nemya on September 10, 2005, 7:40:51 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 5)
*MEGA MEGA MEGA MEGA GLOMPS YOU*OOOH IM GOING TO TYPE IN CAPITALS BECAUSE I LOOOVE THIS CHAPTER SOO MUCH!! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU SOOO MUCH FOR WRITING MOOOOORE! I REALLY CANT SAY THANK YOU ENOUGH! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOOOOUUUUU!
Awwww, and you kissed Joey at the end! ISNT THAT ADORABLE! But you two make such an adorable couple! But not as much as you and Seto! But you and Joey are just so cute! The computer is making a freaky bleepy noise every time I type which sounds like bells^^
"Apart for thinking he must have been pretty thick not to understand what had happened, she also felt sorry for him." Ahahahaha Joey is such an idiot xDDD
IIIIDIIIIIOOOT
ARGAGARRAGARRAAAG, "cake" with Duke! IM SOOOOO glad Yuula said no. SOOOO GLAD! Luckily no one else will know what "cake" is unless theyre our schoolfriends or were in your RS class! *shifty eyes*
Marik: Heh, I know what cake means, its -
Mel: DONT YOU DAARE say that *slaps Marik round face HARD*
Marik: Owww. She's fighting back. Scary scary. *goes to hide in corner*
Mel: Hee hee, me and "Dooky" are arguuuing! Hee hee! Seto and Mokie should get together.
Aaaaanyways, must finish comment, will be made to get off soon by evil fartus. BUT I will reread!!! YAYAYAYAYAAAAA Because it is sooo good I think this could possibly be the best chapter yet! I LOOOOBE IT!
MUWAAA MUWAAA, please PLEASE write more,
NEXT CHAPTER IS ICE CREAMS!!! REMEMBER, I LOOOVE STRAWBERRY CHOC CHIP! YAAYAYAYAYAAAA! THANK YOU SOOO MUCH FOR WRITING STORY AGAIN! PUTTING UP 2 CHAPTERS IN 2 DAYS! Yes, In response to your email, YOU CAN BE MY GOD! OH GREAT STORYWRITER! (Storymakers, storymakers, stories are fabulous, stories are fun!)
YAAAAYAYAYAAA!!! IM ALL HYPERNATED NOW!!!!!
Marik: You have just passed the border into 'Ultimate freak'. You weirdo. Manning, just hurry up and finish your story so she wont be this weird for much longer.
Mel: Stooooooooooooorrrryyyyyyyyyy!
Marik: You FREAK. We're going.
Mel: This took me a long time to type! It was fuuuun! BYE-EEEEEEEEEEE!!!! THANK YOU!
Nemya on September 9, 2005, 7:55:00 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 4)
*mega glomp* NOO I JUST HAD TO FINISH COMMENTING MARIK IS SUCH A MEANIE xP
But I cant exress how much I love reading your story!! YAYAAAA! Thank you! Your picture is up, by the way.^^
But, I didnt get to say, AWESOMNESS!!!!
Marik: I dont believe I ended up with such a crummy host.
Mel: Im Hyper, can you tell?!?
Marik: *bashes Mel around head* Im sorry all these pathetic comments are from her. When they could be from actual worthwhile people. *drags body away*
Nemya on September 9, 2005, 7:48:08 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 4)
*meag glomps*AHHH had to cooment again Im so sorry Nyaaa~!!!
But its so cute! Buwaa buwaa buwaa Thank you so much again! I looove it!
Ah! You included Isis in it!?! I thought you said you werent?! Hee hee, Nya nya!!!
Marik: You are a total and utter freak. *makes hand click on submit button*
Mel: No WAA MArik you mean I havent finished commenting!! Its AWEESO
Marik: Oh no you dont you freak. BWHAHAHA
Mel: NOOO DOONT MARIK
Nemya on September 9, 2005, 6:00:44 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 4)
ARGARGA IT IS SO GOOD! I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!! Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you so much!!! *mega glomping*Marik: You little freak.
Mel: Im not little, I'm one year younger than yoooouuuu ;___;
Marik: You're still a freak.
Mel: Waaaaa ;__:
Anyways, YAYAYAYYAAAAA It is SO GOOD! Thank you so much for including Sanura in, you got her personality just right^^
Your grandma is creepy! (SHE UNLOCKED THE LOCKED DOOR!) And Seto smiles a sympathetic smile, NYAAAAA~ How cute! The whole chapter is utterly adorable and awesome!
Hey, I havent said awesomeness in a while, have I? Well, AWESOMENESS!!!
Great, my dad is calling, I have to go to his work. But I'll scan in your pic todaaay, okie BYe-eeee!
Eoara on September 3, 2005, 7:09:59 PM
Eoara on (Chapter: 3)
yayayayay!!! sooo cute....please write more....and when is it i cancome in...pleasplease!!! hellooooxxxx
Nemya on August 29, 2005, 8:25:31 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 3)
ARGARGARAGRA AGRA AWAAA Its so good! *mega glomp* Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you so much for writing more!!!Awaaaa, you danced with SETO!!!! How cuuuuute! And in the flashback...thing, he saved youuu! How adoooorable! And you have a past life tooo! ^^ Ha ha, dancing with Joey eh? And SETO! Awww awww hang on,
"She curtseyed to him as he took her hand. He pulled her close to her and swept her across the dance floor. Kaede closed her eyes and rested her head on his chest."
I REALLY hope that isnt what Yuula and Duke are doing xPPPP But it is SO ADORABLY CUUUTE with you and Seto!!
Aaaanyways, I cant waaaiiit to see what happens next!! Thank you soooo much for writing!! YAYAYAYYAYAYA!!!*mega glomp*
Eoara on July 2, 2005, 9:13:18 PM
Eoara on (Chapter: 2)
ummm...is this to do with yu0gioh??? coz i have no idea about some of the poepl, so i am guseeing that you are kaede, i knw that mel is yuula, and i guess thaT ani myst be tea.......and i sorta have guessed who the otherss are...you talk about them enough....anyhoo!!! write more please!!! or else!!Nemya on June 15, 2005, 6:05:02 AM
Nemya on (Chapter: 2)
*glomps you*Awaaa! So awesomeness! Again! I love it! *glomps you again* Thank you so very much for writing! But, you didnt dance with Seto!? He held your hand!!! AWWW! Even though it is sort of creepy x.X Im being murdered by sister, so I better stop commenting and write more of ch6 XP
Awesomeness! *claps*
Nemya on June 13, 2005, 7:01:11 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 1)
*glomps you again*Nyeek, I forgot to say, that you were kissing JOEY! *laughs head off into oblivion*
Im reading story a second time. Its so awesome! And that yoghurt was tasty.^^
Nemya on June 13, 2005, 6:53:21 PM
Nemya on (Chapter: 1)
*glomps you*YAYAYAY!!! AWAAAA! Thank you! Thank you! I cant thank you enough! *glomps* Nya, Im so happy!^^ Thank you! Thank you, Thank you!!
Anyways, its so awesome, and funny XD Joey is such a doofus (Stuffing cookies in his big fat mouth) and all the 'chump' and 'scum' XD
I REEEEAAAAALY want to find out what happens next! So awesome! Please write more, sometime? Thank you so much!^^ *glomps*
Marik: you really are unbelievably sad. *drags away*
Me: *slaps Marik away* I havent added it to faves yet! *faves x 999 x 10to the power of 10zillion* AWESOMENESS!! *gets dragged away*
Mmm, this strawberry yoghurt is so tasty^^