Glimpses Of The Past
Submitted September 18, 2008 Updated January 21, 2009 Status Incomplete | This is mainly a story of how Shifu met Oogway when he was a tiny cub. (If you haven't watched Kung Fu Panda then there's no point in even reading this....)
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Birth Of A New Warrior
Submitted: September 18, 2008 • Updated: September 18, 2008
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Chapter 2 - Guardian
Submitted: September 18, 2008 • Updated: September 18, 2008
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Chapter 3 - Squeeze
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Chapter 4 - The Toughest Decision
Submitted: September 19, 2008 • Updated: September 20, 2008
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Chapter 5 - Calm Waters
Submitted: September 20, 2008 • Updated: September 20, 2008
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Chapter 6 - Mahjong Tiles
Submitted: September 21, 2008 • Updated: September 21, 2008
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Chapter 7 - A Tearful Reunion
Submitted: September 21, 2008 • Updated: September 21, 2008
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Chapter 8 - Oogway's DayCare Hell?!
Submitted: September 22, 2008 • Updated: September 22, 2008
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Chapter 9 - The Mid-Atumn Festival
Submitted: September 23, 2008 • Updated: September 24, 2008
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Chapter 10 - Valentines Day
Submitted: September 24, 2008 • Updated: October 18, 2008
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Chapter 11 - Disobedience (A Very Impotant Chapter)
Submitted: September 26, 2008 • Updated: September 28, 2008
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Chapter 12 - Tokoro Valley
Submitted: September 27, 2008 • Updated: September 27, 2008
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Chapter 13 - The Tournament (AKA The Paka Slam)
Submitted: September 28, 2008 • Updated: September 28, 2008
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Chapter 14 - Giao Xun Returns/ Fatally Wounded
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Chapter 15 - Pain
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Chapter 16 - Abandonment?!
Submitted: September 29, 2008 • Updated: September 29, 2008
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Chapter 17 - Together Again
Submitted: September 30, 2008 • Updated: October 16, 2008
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Chapter 18 - Don't Ever Dwell On The Past
Submitted: October 15, 2008 • Updated: November 8, 2008
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Chapter 19 - Surprise! Surprise!
Submitted: October 16, 2008 • Updated: October 17, 2008
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Chapter 20 - A Dangerous Competition
Submitted: October 17, 2008 • Updated: October 17, 2008
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Chapter 21 - Soul Concern
Submitted: October 18, 2008 • Updated: October 18, 2008
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Chapter 22 - Typhoon
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Chapter 23 - Lullaby
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Chapter 24 - Washed Away
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Chapter 25 - The Vixen In The Cave
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Chapter 26 - Reunion At Last
Submitted: October 23, 2008 • Updated: October 23, 2008
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Chapter 27 - Shifu's New Sisters?!
Submitted: October 25, 2008 • Updated: October 25, 2008
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Chapter 28 - Kung Fu Squirrel?!
Submitted: October 25, 2008 • Updated: October 27, 2008
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Chapter 29 - When The Bough Breaks...
Submitted: October 27, 2008 • Updated: October 27, 2008
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Chapter 30 - Phobias Revealed
Submitted: October 28, 2008 • Updated: October 29, 2008
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Chapter 31 - Author's Note
Submitted: November 2, 2008 • Updated: November 2, 2008
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Chapter 32 - Rebelious Autumn
Submitted: November 2, 2008 • Updated: November 2, 2008
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Chapter 33 - Autumn Storm
Submitted: December 4, 2008 • Updated: December 5, 2008
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Chapter 34 - In The Same Boat
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Chapter 35 - Always Eat Your Veggies!
Submitted: January 21, 2009 • Updated: January 21, 2009
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pixiebell on February 13, 2009, 12:29:01 AM
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make a new chapter sister .,..,kaptainkitty on February 1, 2009, 9:34:01 AM
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Wow... a whole lemon? Akimi sure does have some impressive talents! Odd... but impressive none the less *snickers*.I must say, I was greatly interested near the end of the chapter when Akimi and Shifu ventured out into acid rain *shudders*. Good thing Oogway showed up when he did. That was most epic... and rather terrifying.
You have done an excellent job with this chapter. Good job with balancing out a horrific scene with a humorous one. I honestly do not know what all Shifu's fuss is about. Broccoli's good!!! He's just such a typical child teehee.
I can't wait for the next chapter! I wan't to know what will happen to poor little Lin Lin.
pixiebell on January 26, 2009, 3:02:34 AM
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pixiebell on January 26, 2009, 3:03:08 AM
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LOL, I have to agree..... Akimi's impressive to be able to do that thing with the lemon! :DAnd yes, I'm VERY happy you got Lin Lin in!! :) I can't wait to see the next chapter!!! I'm not kidding, either. I CAN NOT WAIT. :D yeah thats amazing too sis thats a very amazing chapter you made...
your loving sister gemasis dimond
EscribirZeichnenRever on January 24, 2009, 3:43:10 PM
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LOL, I have to agree..... Akimi's impressive to be able to do that thing with the lemon! :DAnd yes, I'm VERY happy you got Lin Lin in!! :) I can't wait to see the next chapter!!! I'm not kidding, either. I CAN NOT WAIT. :D
chaos_kitten8 on December 11, 2008, 4:09:06 AM
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pixiepumpkin on December 15, 2008, 8:31:43 PM
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*gasp* Shimmer! THat's so cruel!! THe child has lost everything! Those pumpkins are the only things she has now! *whacks you* Bad girl, GO TO THE CORNER!EscribirZeichnenRever on December 15, 2008, 5:31:44 AM
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Awwwwwwww, Oogway is like walking aspirin. XD He can always make things better!! I'm actually kinda surprised Shifu got off so easily this time, though.And all I can say about that chapter preview is........ *GLOMPS YOU*
pixiepumpkin on December 15, 2008, 8:29:39 PM
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XD, a walking asprin?! *laughs loudly* My god, you're right! :D*hufs you back* Haha...knew you'd say something like that!
kaptainkitty on December 15, 2008, 10:06:40 AM
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Well.. if one thing is to be said; it is that Oogway has impeccable timing! He knows just where to be and when to be there XD.I especially liked the little apology scene in this chapter between Shifu and Akimi. I don't know specifically why I liked it... I just do ^_^
Excellent job with this chapter, and sorry for taking so long to review *hugs*. Can't wait for the next chapter!
pixiepumpkin on December 15, 2008, 8:29:02 PM
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Oh yes, Oogway is always there for whoever needs it! ^^As you can see, Shifu and Akimi have made up.....*grins* but I don't think it will be the end of all their fights..
It's okay Kitty, I don't mind at all. *hugs*
pixiebell on December 15, 2008, 12:30:56 AM
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thats your best chappie yet sister and its amazing too... caden17 on December 11, 2008, 12:42:57 AM
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your best chappie yet sayo~pixiepumpkin on December 11, 2008, 2:05:25 AM
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O___________o If Shimmer heard you say that...And thank you! *hugs*
pixiebell on December 6, 2008, 7:00:37 AM
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wow thats sound so amzaing sis and your title is amziaing aswell.....caden17 on December 4, 2008, 8:26:08 PM
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silly li. shifu wanted an apple tree, and she gave him a pumpkin patch.kaptainkitty on December 4, 2008, 2:22:56 PM
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Mmmm... chocolate-chip pancakes smothered in apple sauce! I've never tried that personally, but it sure sounds delicious ^_^ Great. Now I'm hungry.
This is such a good chapter! The part when Shifu pounced on Oogway and shouted "I got you!" was so adorable! And then that little sequence between Shifu and Akimi... oh boy. What a turn around. I never knew Shifu could be so violent. I can't wait to see how Oogway will deal with it this time. Whew...
pixiepumpkin on December 4, 2008, 8:20:22 PM
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Chocolate chips smothered in apple sauce......................hehe, does sound good!*giggle* You liked that part, huh? Hehehe, I had a feeling you would. That little scene was meant to emphasis the childness cuteness with little Shifu! ^^
Oogway will obviously handle it all with wisdom, sympathy, compassion. I mean........it's Oogway!
kaptainkitty on December 5, 2008, 8:34:01 AM
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Hmm... yes, you are right there. It IS just like Oogway to deal with any situation that way. It just wouldn't be in his nature for him to up and yell at any child, no matter how deservant that child may be (like that little rat-bag of a red panda we all know and love).Ah, but you have to marvel at Oogway's abilities to remain calm and compassionate through even the most trying times. It seems as though that fuse of patience will never burn out ^^.
pixiepumpkin on December 11, 2008, 2:09:59 AM
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Hmm, is the rat bag Wu Lian? :D True, the only time Oogway has ever raised his voice is when it involves Giao Xun.pixiepumpkin on November 4, 2008, 7:30:04 AM
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XD, Akimi is the fireworks in the night! Maybe her and Benji can now be rivals!Yes, Shifu will probably get in trouble.......little rascal. XD
EscribirZeichnenRever on December 4, 2008, 9:28:09 AM
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LOL, Benji wouldn't like getting talked off by a girl. XDEscribirZeichnenRever on December 4, 2008, 9:07:20 AM
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Cheese pancakes? O_o Never heard of that one..........I love this chap! :) I loved that you had a scene just between Oogway and his students. It was so easy to imagine him with them hanging from his neck and such. :D
Yeeeep, I knew Shifu was gonna blow it. Hard to believe this cub is the same guy who's so masterly and deep guy in the movie. :)
pixiepumpkin on December 4, 2008, 9:16:15 AM
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I haven't heard of them either.... Ming Yang loves cheese though!Heehee, of course! What else would young children do to their poor unfortunate master?
Shifu ALWAYS blows it. In "Wisdom From Heaven" Kurisu sort of says that Shifu is a goodie-too-shoes (not sure how to spell it), then both him and Oogway reflect on allllll the times where Shiuf was.........not so good! :D XD
EscribirZeichnenRever on December 4, 2008, 9:19:24 AM
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LOL! If only Kurisu knew.... XDpixiepumpkin on December 4, 2008, 9:25:13 AM
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Oh she does! Oogway tells her about alllllll of it! ....Much to the red panda's disdain. He constantly pleads and Oogway COMPLETELY ignores him!EscribirZeichnenRever on November 4, 2008, 6:39:38 AM
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Ouch. O_O Crap, Akimi's a little firecracker. She's the kind of girl Benji would just clash heads with. XDOhh, boy, Shifu's going to get in trouble AGAIN, isn't he? Although I can't say I blame him......... after what she said about Oogway. O_O
caden17 on November 3, 2008, 8:24:22 PM
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fine by mekaptainkitty on November 2, 2008, 11:46:18 AM
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*Whistles* Man... that Akimi is one smart-mouthed little bi-... aherm... madam. What an attitude!!!Still, this was a great chapter! :D I especially like the spar between Leona and Risu. Awesome job there!
Aww... it is a shame that you are forced to shove this story on haiatus though :( Oh well. You know the saying: desperate times call for desperate measures ^^ Best of luck with the move!
pixiepumpkin on November 3, 2008, 5:54:51 AM
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True, Akimi is awful. She just lost everything she had though, remember that! ^^XD, yes I decided to put a few fighting matches (there doesn't seem to be enough...)
*Siiiiiigh* Groan, I'm not going to have internet for so looooooooooooooong!
chaos_kitten8 on November 2, 2008, 1:24:34 AM
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pixiepumpkin on November 2, 2008, 6:52:45 AM
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At first Akimi is indeed a jerk, but she'll soon soften up...OMG I LOVE CHOW MEIN TOO!!! BEANSPROUTSSS!!!
pixiebell on November 2, 2008, 6:07:11 AM
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I LOVE CHOW MEIN THATS SOOOOOOOO CUTE *huge*pixiebell on November 2, 2008, 6:06:13 AM
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THATS OH OKchaos_kitten8 on October 30, 2008, 6:01:13 AM
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pixiepumpkin on October 30, 2008, 8:21:32 AM
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Heehee....thanks... sorry for snapping at you eariler for not commenting yet. I'm just really sore from the needle. The first one didn't hurt but the second one...F***! The lady was like "Oops! Ouu I left the needle in to long!" And then one of the other ladies popped Sara's blood vessel, and one of them hadt to do it three times on Mikey! I swear........those ladies had jobs in janitoring, and then they got a degree in medical and that was their first day....-__-chaos_kitten8 on October 31, 2008, 6:06:29 AM
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pixiepumpkin on November 2, 2008, 1:00:35 AM
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............................b-i-t-c-hEscribirZeichnenRever on October 30, 2008, 10:13:18 AM
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Dang. O_O Out of curiosity, was this flu shots at a market or something?pixiepumpkin on October 30, 2008, 10:37:20 AM
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XD! Might as well have been...EscribirZeichnenRever on October 30, 2008, 2:56:18 PM
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Should I have gone with you and stuffed a melon bun in your mouth when you opened it? :D :D :Dpixiepumpkin on October 31, 2008, 5:12:51 AM
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XD WAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I-I guess so! But if you wanted to console me you should have brought strawberries! XDpixiebell on October 29, 2008, 2:02:23 AM
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aaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thas sooo cute story and funny *BIG HUGES* sister
caden17 on October 28, 2008, 9:27:52 PM
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you do realize i'm getting those exact same needles, right? well don't worry, even if i'm not in the cafeteria with you, my spirit will be. and remember what i told you yesterday, and you'll be fine.pixiepumpkin on October 28, 2008, 9:34:46 PM
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*hugs* Thank you brother....I love you!caden17 on October 28, 2008, 9:36:08 PM
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you're welcome... now please do me a favor and SHOW ME SOME RESPECT!!!pixiepumpkin on October 29, 2008, 1:35:26 AM
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...................................*rolls eyes* I just said I love you! How is that not respect to my big brother?caden17 on October 29, 2008, 2:01:19 AM
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touchepixiepumpkin on October 29, 2008, 2:01:52 AM
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*bites your face*caden17 on October 29, 2008, 2:04:23 AM
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i gonna hunt you down and destroy you.kaptainkitty on October 28, 2008, 4:10:28 PM
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Awwww, it will be okay sweetie! *HUGS* As DolphinMoana said; just don't look at the needle and be sure to focus your mind on something completely different. Those chappie ideas, courtisy of DolphinMoana, would do the trick perfectly! :DNow, to get your mind off the subject of nee... I'm not going to say that word, heres my chapter review!!
This was the most sweetest chapter! Oogway comforting little terrified Shifu, words can not explain how adorable that scene was. And the beginning of the chapter; when Shifu just would not shut up about how Taplo was a "discrace to all melon buns" and how "the melon bun god will destroy him"... I could not stop laughing!!! XD THAT WAS HILARIOUS!!!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter! Any chapter with pumpkin-smashing in it has got to be good! Pumpking-smashing was one of my favourite childhood activites when I was younger :D
pixiepumpkin on October 28, 2008, 9:13:05 PM
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Thank you............I'll try not. *sigh* *hugs*Mmm yes.......I have a habbit of making way to adorable scenes when it comes to Shifu and Oogway. Why, you just wait untill Wisdom From Heaven, I'm starting it tonight!
The next chapter will arrive tomorrow or the next day!
EscribirZeichnenRever on October 28, 2008, 12:06:01 PM
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Awwwwww, don't worry about it! *HUG* I had to get a couple of shots myself not long ago. I just don't look the needle at any time whatsoever, heh-heh. I'm about to send you a couple of chappie ideas over DA though so you can think about those while you get your shots if you want. ;)Dude, I KNEW that lullaby was going to surface again. :D Yaaaaaaayyyyyy!!!!
And ah, that preview.......... That's my Benjirou, always causing some kinda trouble. ^_^ Poor Oogway DOES need a vacation. XD BTW, I think the term is 'worrywart'.
pixiepumpkin on October 28, 2008, 9:10:44 PM
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Hehe....arigato! *hugs* I'll try not to look at it...my mom bought me a poodle beanine to make myself feel better so I can squeeze it. (She was looking for a squirrel plush but she couldn't find one....)Of course, that lullaby will surface in many chapters...including my next story "Wisdom From Heaven"
Oh yes Oogway is going to be getting a vacation....by himself? No, of course not....the kids have to come too! XD Stay tuned for "Basking In The Sun"!
chaos_kitten8 on September 19, 2008, 4:46:52 AM
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EscribirZeichnenRever on October 28, 2008, 6:58:11 AM
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Mmm, maybe this'll help? I drew it myself. ;)http://DolphinMoana.deviantart.com/art/KFP-OC-Little-Netra-98913817
chaos_kitten8 on October 28, 2008, 5:42:21 AM
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pixiepumpkin on October 28, 2008, 5:55:59 AM
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Hahaha! Taplo..chaos_kitten8 on October 28, 2008, 5:57:38 AM
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pixiepumpkin on October 28, 2008, 8:04:26 AM
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She's right, don't worry about it! For that whole chapter I kept writing "Talpo" ...then I re-read her description and I was like......."Aww shoot!"EscribirZeichnenRever on October 28, 2008, 12:09:40 PM
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Heehee, I noticed it, but I'm glad you fixed it. XD Apparently, "Talpo" is the name of a lake in New Zealand, I think...kaptainkitty on October 28, 2008, 6:36:49 PM
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It is. Lake Talpo, infamous for its exquisit fishing. I've only been there twice myself, but it truley is a grand site :DSorry, just thought I'd butt into your little conversation XD
EscribirZeichnenRever on October 28, 2008, 11:47:54 PM
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Heehee, well to be honest, I feel stupid now. XD Here I am talking about New Zealand and I completely forgot we actually HAVE a New Zealander to confirm it! XDMy brother-in-law told me about the lake; he and my sister went to NZ for part of their honeymoon this past June.
pixiepumpkin on October 29, 2008, 2:01:28 AM
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XD, that's right! Kaptainkitty is in NZ!! That must be awesoooooome!kaptainkitty on October 30, 2008, 11:14:50 AM
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Hehe, you needn't feel stupid, Moana. It's difficult to remember some people's culture, especially if you don't actually know them in person.Yes, living in New Zealand is pretty awesome ^^ The country has little to offer, but what it does have is quite spectacular, especially to tourists.
EscribirZeichnenRever on October 28, 2008, 6:55:43 AM
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Don't sweat it. XDEscribirZeichnenRever on October 28, 2008, 4:51:17 AM
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BTW, I am crazy intrigued about the next chapter. O_ODo I sense another bout of sheer bonding cuteness between Shifu and Oogway? *bounces*
pixiepumpkin on October 28, 2008, 5:51:32 AM
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Of course there will be another cute bonding moment! Hehe.....what else would sappy Cryssy write? ^^"EscribirZeichnenRever on October 28, 2008, 4:48:28 AM
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YAAAAAAAAAYYYYYY!!!!!!! I just adore the way you did Benjirou and Taplo in here, Cryssy - I don't think you could've done Taplo more perfectly. :D I was still developing his character and I wasn't sure wuite how to put it, but you've just hit the nail on the head. *HUGS* Thank you!!!pixiepumpkin on October 28, 2008, 5:47:57 AM
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*eyes sparkling* Really?! I was so worried I had them out of character!! *hugs* Yataaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!pixiebell on October 27, 2008, 9:27:36 PM
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thats the funnyest story ever lol sisterpixiepumpkin on October 27, 2008, 9:31:05 PM
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Arigato!! Daisukii!kaptainkitty on October 27, 2008, 8:29:22 PM
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Lol! Once again, Shifu was forced to take a bath! Honestly, it's hard to belive that this little cub, who has such a great dislike for baths, grows up to be the same red panda we all know is so disapproving of anyone with "utter disreguard for personal hygiene" XDI really enjoyed this chapter, especially the ending. That was quite comical; Taplo quzzling down Shifu's melon buns. Poor Shifu.
As usual, I can't wait for the next chapter! From what was said in the prview, it sounds interesting.
Please update soon, and fingers crossed that Fanart Central isn't playing up when you do ;)
pixiepumpkin on October 27, 2008, 9:25:43 PM
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In my next story "Wisdom From Heaven" Oogway teases Shifu when he says "I'm going to go have a bath."kaptainkitty on October 28, 2008, 4:55:46 AM
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There's going to be another story???!!! 8D WOOOOOOO!!!!!! YAAAAAAAYYYY!!!!! Great... now you've got me all excited -_-*. You know I find it hard to wait for things like that. I have the patience of a six-year-old just before Christmas.Oh well.
I can't wait to read the part about Oogway teasing Shifu. Oh I can only imagine what is going to happen XD
pixiepumpkin on October 28, 2008, 8:00:53 AM
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s-six year old before Christmas?! HAHAHAHA!kaptainkitty on October 25, 2008, 2:58:26 PM
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Hehe, little Leona sounds quite adorable. I have to agree with chaos_kitten8 and EscribirZeichnenRever on the fact that Shifu does seem to be quite the lady-magnet XD But then again... he is such a little "cutie-cub".
pixiepumpkin on October 27, 2008, 5:10:17 AM
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Haha! "Cutie cub" was only supposed to be a name of endearment from Peach Blossom.kaptainkitty on October 27, 2008, 7:51:10 PM
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Hehe. None the less, it was a brilliant name. It fits the little guy well ^^ Cutie cub... you honestly do not know how catchy that name is XDpixiepumpkin on October 27, 2008, 9:30:04 PM
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I never meant for it to sound so........crap. Maybe I should change that name.kaptainkitty on October 28, 2008, 4:18:04 AM
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NOOOOOO!!!!! It's not crap at all!!! It's an adorable name!!!kaptainkitty on October 25, 2008, 3:54:16 PM
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Awww!!! That last part, with Shifu's mama guiding him to Oogway... that was just so touching!And yes, your dialogue for Oogway was spoy on :D
Well, off to read the next chapter (considering it's now posted teehee)
pixiepumpkin on October 27, 2008, 5:08:46 AM
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Heehee, I tried to make it as touching as I could.kaptainkitty on October 27, 2008, 7:43:45 PM
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Well you did a bang up job, my friend! :)pixiepumpkin on October 27, 2008, 9:28:40 PM
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Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!kaptainkitty on October 25, 2008, 4:15:56 PM
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Wow... multiple feelings with this chapter. Man, the talk of Giao Xun really releases the worst within Oogway. I never knew he could get so mad!!!
Haha! I loved the little exchange between Wu Lian and Shifu. Poor little red panda didn't see that coming XD I honestly could not stop laughing whilst reading that part.
But I can't quite fathom how I felt at the end. It was neither a happy end to the chapter... nor a sad one. I don't knnow :/
Anyway, good chapter!
pixiepumpkin on October 27, 2008, 5:07:38 AM
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True, Giao Xun is the only person in the universe that Oogway truly hates. He will appear again in later chapters......and will do something you couldn't possibly imagine. The old tortoise cares very deeply for his students.and despises all who mistreats children.kaptainkitty on October 27, 2008, 7:45:20 PM
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Ooh... now I'm really excited!! I knew Giao Xun was going to be a major role in your fic, and now that you've said that he "will do something you couldn't possibly imagine" makes me really look forward to reading the upcoming chapters!pixiepumpkin on October 27, 2008, 9:28:07 PM
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Yes, Giao Xun will also be in my story "Warriors From Heaven". He will also do something you won't be able to imagine........kaptainkitty on October 26, 2008, 7:38:24 PM
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Well... Shifu finally has a little male friend to play with. ... That is absolutley impossible to say without making it sound wrong. XD But you know what I mean teehee.Aherm.. great chapter, as always! It wasn't a cliffhanger this time :) But still... that preview was enough to make up for that.
I seriously can not wait for the next chapter. By the sounds of it, it's going to be really interesting.
I just hope in advance that Shifu, Benjirou and Talpo (whoever they are) can swim...
pixiepumpkin on October 27, 2008, 5:04:31 AM
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Benjirou and Talpo are actually DolphinMoana's OCs! I asked her if she wanted them in the story....and she practically exploded from excitement!kaptainkitty on October 27, 2008, 8:00:29 PM
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Haha! Yep... that comes as no surprise. There is nothing that can bring greater joy to a writer than when another writer wishes to borrow their OCs. It shows how much others like what they have created :DI have to admit though, I've read all of DolphinMoana's stroies (at least... I think I have...) and still the names Benjirou and Talpo aren't ringing any bells. I must have forgotten about them. I swear; a goldfish has a greater memory-span than I do!
pixiepumpkin on October 27, 2008, 9:27:04 PM
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"The First Step?" Her own narrated version of shifu coming to the palace as a cub.kaptainkitty on October 28, 2008, 4:37:07 AM
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Yeah.... I swear; I've read it! I know I have! But I just....Hang on.... hold up a sec... I think I remember who Benjirou and Taplo are now. They are his friends, along with that little raccoon girl (can't recall her name heh heh ^^')
EscribirZeichnenRever on October 28, 2008, 4:45:28 AM
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Her name is Lin Lin. XD And yeah, Benji and Taplo were with Shifu when Koto caught him fighting the piglets.kaptainkitty on October 28, 2008, 5:02:33 AM
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Ah yes, I remember that scene :DAnd hello again! How was your vacation?
EscribirZeichnenRever on October 28, 2008, 5:05:58 AM
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Good and cold, thanks for asking! :) I actually got a couple of new pictures to scan in and put on DA. ;)kaptainkitty on October 28, 2008, 5:56:59 AM
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You're welcome :) I can't wait t see them!pixiebell on October 26, 2008, 8:05:50 AM
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thats funny when hey are fighting saiying didtoo did not that a funny partpixiebell on October 26, 2008, 8:04:11 AM
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thas very good and funny aswellpixiebell on October 26, 2008, 8:03:39 AM
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thats cute loloolololpixiebell on October 26, 2008, 8:02:59 AM
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thas very good siterpixiebell on October 26, 2008, 8:02:29 AM
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that's a good storykaptainkitty on October 25, 2008, 2:23:04 PM
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Aww... *sniff*. That's so sad. Poor cubby Shifu. At least he has Li... and his little stuffed polar bear, Pong ^^Well, this was an excellent chapter. Now... of to the next one! *skips off*
chaos_kitten8 on October 25, 2008, 7:50:53 AM
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pixiepumpkin on October 25, 2008, 8:29:17 AM
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Leona just lost her family!chaos_kitten8 on October 26, 2008, 1:57:01 AM
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pixiepumpkin on October 26, 2008, 10:29:24 AM
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Don't worry about ti!caden17 on October 25, 2008, 4:10:13 AM
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thank you so much.being sarcastic.
I HATE YOUR CLIFFIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
caden17 on October 25, 2008, 4:04:43 AM
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first comment. yay.caden17 on October 25, 2008, 4:03:40 AM
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not bad, not bad at allEscribirZeichnenRever on October 23, 2008, 12:08:38 PM
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AWWWWWWWWW!!!!! Shifu's mama guided him to Oogway!! So sweet!!!!!And I have to say, you did awesome at Oogway's dialogue in this chapter; it sounded pretty much just like him! :)
pixiepumpkin on October 23, 2008, 1:34:06 PM
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ARE YOU SERIOUS?! YAAAYY!! I'M USUALLY HORRIBLE AT DIALOUGES!!EscribirZeichnenRever on October 23, 2008, 6:19:25 AM
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Heehee, I agress with chaos_kitten8, Shifu's a real ladies' man! XDpixiepumpkin on October 23, 2008, 8:19:08 AM
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*sweatdrop* Ahahah...? Tha-that's not supposed to be the case! Oh man! I need to get Talpo and Benjirou in there quickly!chaos_kitten8 on October 23, 2008, 5:59:59 AM
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caden17 on October 23, 2008, 6:18:34 AM
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kind of like me... even bluetails is a girl at heart. XDXDXD
caden17 on October 23, 2008, 6:12:12 AM
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heart wrenching is actually 2 wordspixiepumpkin on October 23, 2008, 6:15:22 AM
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Ohhhhhhh...................caden17 on October 23, 2008, 6:10:34 AM
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:'(EscribirZeichnenRever on October 23, 2008, 6:06:06 AM
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DANG, Shifu's like, invincible! I love the fact that he and Li are stuck together now, not sure why. On to the next chapter!! *darts off*EscribirZeichnenRever on October 20, 2008, 10:27:35 AM
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DANG, Shifu's stubborn. XD But that's not a big surprise, I guess. Pleeeeeease update soon!! :Dpixiepumpkin on October 21, 2008, 2:00:48 AM
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Of course he is! Haha, especially when it comes to baths! XD (chapter 19 for example)EscribirZeichnenRever on October 20, 2008, 10:33:24 AM
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WHOA, well that was soon. XD XD XDAw crap...........you and your cliffhangers!! *shakes fist*
pixiepumpkin on October 21, 2008, 1:58:38 AM
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Heehee! I am evil when it comes to cliff-hangers!kaptainkitty on October 20, 2008, 3:56:11 PM
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Oh my gosh! Those last couple of chapters were incredible! So action-packed. I could barely tear my eyes off the computer screen XDBut you and your jolly cliffhangers have yet to be desired. Grr! And as if ending the chapter there wasn't bad enough... you go and add a REALLY interesting preview to the next chapter!!!WHY???!!!
That's it. You leave me no choice. I refuse to take a single breath until the next chapter is posted. *Inhales...*
pixiepumpkin on October 21, 2008, 1:58:07 AM
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Don't pass out now! XDpixiebell on October 21, 2008, 1:41:44 AM
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thats the funnyiest chapter i ever read but its very very very very asome chapter too. sispixiepumpkin on October 21, 2008, 1:52:13 AM
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Thank you...is that all you're going to say though? What parts were funny? I don't get itpixiebell on October 21, 2008, 1:40:07 AM
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thats a big surpsie but funny aswell sis i love this one too in fact i love all your chapters.pixiepumpkin on October 21, 2008, 1:51:28 AM
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Thank you little imatio chan!pixiebell on October 21, 2008, 1:37:57 AM
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LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL thats sofunny sis i love the part where tigers was ranning after shifu thats dam funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!gemasis
pixiepumpkin on October 21, 2008, 1:51:00 AM
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Funny, uhhhhh? They were trying to kill him!pixiebell on October 18, 2008, 7:33:30 AM
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thats so cute and it is some what funny and its good story aswell. oh ok sischaos_kitten8 on October 18, 2008, 2:42:10 AM
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pixiepumpkin on October 18, 2008, 3:22:34 AM
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Hahahaha! Well, yes! Imagine if you were a little girl and your caretaker had bought you a trampoline! Wouldn't you be jumping up and down on them?Oh, yes...the ending. Shifu is really in for it now! What was he thinking? Oogway is definetely not going to let him off the hook! Not when they find out the extent of his injuries....
chaos_kitten8 on October 18, 2008, 6:10:36 AM
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XDchaos_kitten8 on October 17, 2008, 8:36:18 AM
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pixiepumpkin on October 17, 2008, 11:50:22 AM
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Heehee! You really love Ming Yang! Yes the beginning was suposed to be hilarious! You'd never expect Shifu to be so disrespectful to his master (but like every tot) of course he would when it came to bathing!Hahahaha! Don't worry, I'm writting the chapter right now, will be up tomorrow!
kaptainkitty on October 16, 2008, 4:52:16 PM
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Those last two updates were really good! I thouroughly enjoyed them! :D I especially like the bathing scene. That was quite comical.But there's just one thing I don't like. You ended with a cliff-hanger, you MEANIE!!! :P Please don't be long to update. PLEASE!!!
pixiepumpkin on September 30, 2008, 9:29:02 AM
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Me *laughs* Peach Blossom and Lotti are tortoises!chaos_kitten8 on September 30, 2008, 9:27:25 AM
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EscribirZeichnenRever on September 30, 2008, 11:56:47 AM
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I think she's a turtle... *shrug*EscribirZeichnenRever on September 30, 2008, 11:56:21 AM
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D'aaaaaawwwwwwwwww, so cute, you've gotten me thinking of more Shifu/Oogway bonding moments for my story. ^_^kaptainkitty on September 30, 2008, 11:42:21 AM
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Whoo! Now I can officially comment!!! I was going to do so yesterday, but I didn't have an account on this site -_-*Anywho... excellent story thus far. You have a real knack for putting emotion into your work, especially within the moments shared between Oogway and Shifu.
Also, you are really good with cliff-hangers. I can not wait to read the upcoming chapters! :D
chaos_kitten8 on September 30, 2008, 9:16:51 AM
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Because Iz smart!EscribirZeichnenRever on September 29, 2008, 2:16:12 PM
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'Allo!!! It's me, DolphinMoana from DeviantArt! :D I'm posting my story up here too!chaos_kitten8 on September 29, 2008, 5:03:32 AM
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pixiepumpkin on September 29, 2008, 5:04:36 AM
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Hahaha! You'll have to wait and see!chaos_kitten8 on September 29, 2008, 1:43:13 AM
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what comment?chaos_kitten8 on September 29, 2008, 5:00:28 AM
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pixiepumpkin on September 29, 2008, 5:02:24 AM
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oh.....pixiepumpkin on September 29, 2008, 4:25:57 AM
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XD, I know...I'm horrible! You think this will have you in tears? Wait untill the next 2 chapters!chaos_kitten8 on September 28, 2008, 7:10:05 AM
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pixiepumpkin on September 28, 2008, 8:39:16 AM
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Haha! Really?chaos_kitten8 on September 27, 2008, 7:29:39 AM
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pixiepumpkin on September 27, 2008, 8:41:51 AM
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Indeed! But a brat little Shifu appears to think is really pretty......heehee!bluetail on September 27, 2008, 4:11:07 AM
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i dont understand you pixiebellpixiebell on September 27, 2008, 1:08:59 AM
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cute story .pixiebell on September 27, 2008, 1:07:28 AM
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwpixiebell on September 27, 2008, 1:07:04 AM
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shifu as a baby is so cutechaos_kitten8 on September 26, 2008, 7:46:11 AM
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pixiepumpkin on September 26, 2008, 7:57:08 AM
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Shifu: It's millions and trillions of mils away.Yes he's got a shell, but it was a super sharp arrow that went the speed of a gun shot!
Shifu: Of course it was a terrible pun, I was just a child! *blush*
Shifu *proud* I was being taught by the founder of Kung Fu!
i'm planning on keeping it up! I just really want to skip to the best 2 that are coming like 6 chapters from now. Abandonment and Together Again.
Shifu *ears droop* But abandonemts such a sad one...a horrible childhood memory for me!
Me: Then don't read it when I write it!
chaos_kitten8 on September 26, 2008, 8:03:07 AM
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pixiepumpkin on September 26, 2008, 8:38:26 AM
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Shifu: Or your belove Espio sensei? *chuckle*Me: You know thats a good idea! But everyting is VERY important in the nex few chapters.
bluetail on September 26, 2008, 4:19:18 AM
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shifu as a baby it kind of scares me and im your bfpixiepumpkin on September 22, 2008, 9:38:26 AM
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over 1000, I know eh? XDchaos_kitten8 on September 22, 2008, 5:13:08 AM
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pixiepumpkin on September 22, 2008, 5:14:45 AM
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Haha! Was it cute..? XDchaos_kitten8 on September 22, 2008, 5:16:32 AM
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Yeah Shifu was REALLY cute when he was a cub!chaos_kitten8 on September 20, 2008, 11:18:04 PM
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pixiepumpkin on September 21, 2008, 12:18:34 AM
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Oogway indeed is-was the smartest being on earth pretty much. He always spoke philosophically to us, riddles that were hard to crack. Sometimes even master Shifu couldn't crack them!pixiepumpkin on September 20, 2008, 2:05:07 AM
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Oogway is very sweet, and loves Shifu as well as Kohaii and Shei Lia, the chapters are going to get very exciting. Plenty new characters will be introduced to te story, when the tournament will be comming in the next 4 or 5 chapters.BlackPhoenixHighlord on September 19, 2008, 5:34:16 AM
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pixiepumpkin on September 19, 2008, 6:53:38 AM
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I'm writting when Shifu has the flashbackchaos_kitten8 on September 19, 2008, 5:08:10 AM
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pixiepumpkin on September 19, 2008, 5:09:18 AM
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Me *nods sadly*Shifu *ears droop* Su Lin...........
pixiepumpkin on September 19, 2008, 4:56:48 AM
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Me *laughs* Me neither really, but Master Oogway can!