Tear & Haelo *Their story from the start*
Submitted May 1, 2005 Updated November 19, 2005 Status Incomplete | Hey Everybody! If you like Tear and Haelo I suggest you read the story of how they came to be. I really hope you like it, but please read it. This is a Romance/Comedy/Drama story. YAYNESS I CANT BELIEVE I'M WRITING A STORY!!
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Angel come back to me...
Submitted: May 1, 2005 • Updated: May 1, 2005
Word count: 760 • Size: 4k • Comments: 7 • views: 274
Chapter 2 - My Saviour!
Submitted: May 8, 2005 • Updated: May 8, 2005
Word count: 2024 • Size: 10k • Comments: 4 • views: 324
Chapter 3 - Bliss Is A Fear That It Will End
Submitted: May 8, 2005 • Updated: May 8, 2005
Word count: 1206 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 327
Chapter 4 - The Meeting Of Insanity
Submitted: June 6, 2005 • Updated: June 6, 2005
Word count: 1340 • Size: 7k • Comments: 4 • views: 285
Chapter 5 - The Secret Meeting At Midnight...
Submitted: June 9, 2005 • Updated: June 9, 2005
Word count: 1594 • Size: 8k • Comments: 6 • views: 225
Chapter 6 - "What's so funny?"
Submitted: July 17, 2005 • Updated: July 17, 2005
Word count: 1371 • Size: 7k • Comments: 5 • views: 497
Chapter 7 - Sing that song to me...
Submitted: July 19, 2005 • Updated: July 19, 2005
Word count: 5702 • Size: 31k • Comments: 6 • views: 303
Chapter 8 - Why Do You Love Me?
Submitted: July 21, 2005 • Updated: July 21, 2005
Word count: 1540 • Size: 8k • Comments: 5 • views: 318
Chapter 9 - Memories Not Worth Living...
Submitted: July 26, 2005 • Updated: July 26, 2005
Word count: 2721 • Size: 14k • Comments: 2 • views: 199
Chapter 10 - Be In The Band?
Submitted: August 7, 2005 • Updated: August 7, 2005
Word count: 2267 • Size: 11k • Comments: 2 • views: 304
Chapter 11 - So Much Like'er
Submitted: August 26, 2005 • Updated: August 26, 2005
Word count: 1986 • Size: 10k • Comments: 2 • views: 298
Chapter 12 - And Jealosy Takes Me Over
Submitted: August 27, 2005 • Updated: August 27, 2005
Word count: 1245 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 319
Chapter 13 - Rain Cascades Down Her Face...
Submitted: November 19, 2005 • Updated: November 19, 2005
Word count: 670 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 206
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FATE_The_Pirate on October 28, 2005, 8:32:58 AM
good good MUST READ MORE!!!!! ~FATE the PirateFATE_The_Pirate on October 28, 2005, 8:15:51 AM
this is good ^_^ i love it im going to read the next chapter now >.> ~FATE the pirateforbidden_child on October 22, 2005, 8:39:16 AM
SO MUCH EMOTION!!! I never knew Ben could be so violent when he was jealous but his jealousy probably got more powerful when he just let all his emotions out. Is Ben gonna die? I agree you should publish this it is really good and i love how you can put so much emotion in your stories. Great job i can't wait for the next chapter!!! ^^forbidden_child on October 22, 2005, 8:24:59 AM
I can't believe I haven't read this story in soooo long. It's good i especially love all the emotion in this chapter, though Ben telling everything about Sasuka to Tear was a bit annoying because i think it should have been Haelo to tell her, just my opinion it was great how you did it though. It was great poor Ben though can i have him! ^^pinktiger300 on September 13, 2005, 11:48:13 AM
I love this! "This ish so emotional! MOOOOOOremangacheese1818 on September 9, 2005, 9:42:08 PM
You should publish this, it's so good!Liedetector16 on August 27, 2005, 12:18:38 PM
Now this is what I'm talking about! Rough; intense; short, perhaps, but long enough to have a point. and to think I though Ben would die! I should hope not! ^ ^ Course I welcome death in any story. But maybe perhaps not so soon in the plot. It's only chapter twelve after all! ^ ^ Anyway, back to the story: I liked it. I liked it very much. The beginning was strong. the middle was strong. The end was sad. yes, this is good. Sweet redemtion!!!! Very good. It's funny. This actually reminds me of something from my own story, the one I'm doing with Brooke. I love relating things!!! ^ ^ Jealously is so strong. It's a very good moral for the chapter. I honestly didn't think Ben had it in him to do those things, but I guess, like the story said, he'd been keeping his own mouth shut and helping others for so long, he could help himself. Yes, yes, yes. This was a good chapter. Keep it up! We want more! We want more! ~LD16 *Sarah*
Liedetector16 on August 27, 2005, 11:31:05 AM
Well Como, I'm not going to say that I think it was a poorly written chapter cuz I can really tell that you put your heart into it, but if you want my honesty, I don't know that it was the best chapter you've done. i don't know - maybe it was just that it was so quick. Things led one into another really quickly and there was no time to think about what was going on till the very end. It just didn't seem real. Emotion was fine. Very dramatic and deep. But it was.... well, I have liked previous chapters more. But PLEASE! don't let me put you down! Like I said, I can tell you really put your heart into it and that's the important thing. and I'm still very very interested about what's going to happen. So don't you dare stop! How will I have inspiration to do a pic for you? Keep it up!!! ~LD16 *Sarah*
forbidden_child on August 7, 2005, 12:55:36 PM
Yay! I finally found out why Haelo's crazy about Tear and they kissed. Tear is going to join the band wow it was funny when she was worrying about girls sending death threats. I want to live in Haelo's apartment it sounds awesome with the see-through walls and the lights and the technology, video games and the entertainment system wow. This has to be one of my fav. chapters so far!!! Can't wait for the next one and you did a great job all your hard work paid off Buddy!!! ^^ Liedetector16 on August 7, 2005, 7:32:18 AM
GOODY, GOODY! MESSA LOVE, MESSA LOVE! WHAT'S BETTER, I NOW HAVE A PICTURE IDEA!!!!!! YAY!!!!! .... well ok, it's not exactly a whole idea yet, but the rest will come to me!!!! YES! Anywho, 'bout the chapter -
loved it! Even though it was supposed to be melonchally, my fav part was actually toward the beginning when Tear was going crazy about how girls would attack if she joined the band and Haelo goes, "Not the excuse I was expecting." I ALMOST LAUGHED ALOUD!!!! (Normally when I read I do all laughing and smiling and emotional stuff in my head, unless it's crying - something very hard to do in one's head without really doing it!)
Well now we all know why Haelo's crazy about Tear. I had hoped the girl's name would be more original, but Sakura's a pretty name anyway. ^ ^ I could so see those big, teary silver eyes!
Oh and Haelo's apartment - you totally made all that up, right? I mean, you've not actually see a room with "see-thru" wall and a TV system so technologically advanced, right? (The TV system was not so impressive as the black marble floor and the leather couches!!!! That I would definitely have in my house! I probably won't play video games or watch TV much when I get older.)
GA! BABBLING! SEE WHAT GOOD WRITING DOES TO ME?!!!! ^ ^ Anyway, it was really good.
NEXT CHAPTER, PWEEZ! *uses one of my character's IRRISISTABLE puppy dog eyes!!!!*