The Ring of Chaos
Submitted June 29, 2007 Updated July 9, 2007 Status Incomplete | My part for MrGimp's colab fic! Please let me know what you think!
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - CH I: The Saga Begins
Submitted: June 29, 2007 • Updated: June 29, 2007
Word count: 1022 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 139
Chapter 2 - CH II: Duty Bound to Die
Submitted: June 29, 2007 • Updated: June 29, 2007
Word count: 1256 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 67
Chapter 3 - CH III: The Ring's Power
Submitted: June 29, 2007 • Updated: June 29, 2007
Word count: 1482 • Size: 7k • Comments: 2 • views: 74
Chapter 4 - CH IV: Death's Shadow
Submitted: June 29, 2007 • Updated: June 29, 2007
Word count: 1503 • Size: 7k • Comments: 3 • views: 72
Chapter 5 - CH V: A Friendship Forged
Submitted: June 30, 2007 • Updated: June 30, 2007
Word count: 1932 • Size: 10k • Comments: 3 • views: 72
Chapter 6 - CH VI: The Wound Deepens...
Submitted: June 30, 2007 • Updated: June 30, 2007
Word count: 1337 • Size: 7k • Comments: 3 • views: 68
Chapter 7 - CH VII: Revelations
Submitted: June 30, 2007 • Updated: June 30, 2007
Word count: 2314 • Size: 12k • Comments: 2 • views: 73
Chapter 8 - CH VIII: The Blessing of Guardians...
Submitted: July 1, 2007 • Updated: July 1, 2007
Word count: 1208 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 69
Chapter 9 - CH IX: A Vindictive Strike
Submitted: July 1, 2007 • Updated: July 1, 2007
Word count: 1804 • Size: 9k • Comments: 2 • views: 75
Chapter 10 - CH X: The Solution
Submitted: July 1, 2007 • Updated: July 1, 2007
Word count: 1802 • Size: 9k • Comments: 2 • views: 65
Chapter 11 - CH XI: Inside Your Soul Chaos Resides
Submitted: July 1, 2007 • Updated: July 1, 2007
Word count: 1637 • Size: 8k • Comments: 2 • views: 76
Chapter 12 - CH XII: Bowed, Not Broken
Submitted: July 2, 2007 • Updated: July 2, 2007
Word count: 2652 • Size: 13k • Comments: 1 • views: 70
Chapter 13 - CH XIII: Night of Solitude
Submitted: July 3, 2007 • Updated: July 3, 2007
Word count: 1394 • Size: 7k • Comments: 2 • views: 79
Chapter 14 - CH XIV: A Great Pain
Submitted: July 4, 2007 • Updated: July 4, 2007
Word count: 1815 • Size: 9k • Comments: 2 • views: 75
Chapter 15 - CH XV: The Impossible Decision
Submitted: July 5, 2007 • Updated: July 5, 2007
Word count: 1730 • Size: 9k • Comments: 1 • views: 91
Chapter 16 - CH XVI: A Mistaken Identity
Submitted: July 9, 2007 • Updated: July 9, 2007
Word count: 1105 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 70
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alchemest1 on July 9, 2007, 4:05:54 PM
Cool. A transformation! Now he really is a furry. Lol. Although i don't think he likes it much. Lol. I like this chapter. Great job. Linda's reaction to his transformation was exactly as i thought it would be. Excitement but then control for his sake.alchemest1 on October 26, 2007, 3:05:00 PM
Okay. This one was hard. LOL> HEre's the ball TENTEN. BALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MrGimp on July 9, 2007, 8:43:25 PM
great chapter man, on to more!! >w<fuzzyfur on July 9, 2007, 10:06:14 AM
that was great. I love this story so far.Flashthehedgehog on July 6, 2007, 1:52:01 AM
Awesome I loved the combat scenesFlashthehedgehog on July 6, 2007, 1:40:35 AM
Awesome chapter, that would be the perfect place for me and my boyfriend to stay in. Sadly, britain is full of buildings and chavs *groans*alchemest1 on July 4, 2007, 5:41:20 PM
(growls in frustration) he never getts to be happy. Lol. And you ended in another cliff hanger. Not fair. Now i have to wait to find out what he discovered!(nips you in mock anger)alchemest1 on July 4, 2007, 3:14:08 PM
Wow. Puppy didn't want to play. Lol. This chapter was a really cool one. Very violent. But i love the way you played it out. Anyway. When he had Linda's sister run into him and he cocked his head. That was pretty furryish. Lol.alchemest1 on July 3, 2007, 3:11:11 PM
Nice! I love the way she was playing with him. Lol. This chapter is one of those ones that is a nice reprieve after a disturbing one like the last chapter. (growls at the memory)MrGimp on July 2, 2007, 11:41:39 PM
Oh yeah! This is a great chapter! >w<Flashthehedgehog on July 2, 2007, 9:08:19 PM
Aww sweet at the end. I loved it and I'm gonna read the next chapters to see how awesome it isFlashthehedgehog on July 2, 2007, 8:57:37 PM
I should've guessed this would happen, good stuff!Flashthehedgehog on July 2, 2007, 8:32:18 PM
What a battle, excuse me while I crash down on my knees and look up at the sky"NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO EYKT WHY DID YOU HAVE TO DIE!"
alchemest1 on July 2, 2007, 2:31:36 PM
(Growls angrily and snaps jaws) That's not fair! He always gets the short end of the stick. (throws phone across room in annoyence) Grrr! You weren't kidding when you said it would be maddening!Flashthehedgehog on July 2, 2007, 4:12:27 AM
Oh my days, I'm definitely going to the next one! ^^Flashthehedgehog on July 1, 2007, 9:08:57 PM
Awesome, this is really amazing story.Flashthehedgehog on July 1, 2007, 8:36:23 PM
Brilliant chapter. Off I go to number 2alchemest1 on July 1, 2007, 5:04:22 PM
Awesome chapter. A perfect way to end the tail for those who fear to read on. Now. I can't wait for the chapters for those of up that do! You have out done yourself again! Bravo!alchemest1 on July 1, 2007, 3:43:45 PM
Yay! He's not dead although his eulogy was very touching. I'm glad it wasn't necessary. Lol. Great chapter. The scene of his after death was brilliant. Well done!alchemest1 on July 1, 2007, 3:14:36 PM
I had chills near the end.... He can't be dead. That's not possible. (stunned silence and then a whimper of unacceptance)alchemest1 on July 1, 2007, 12:54:25 PM
Wow. You weren't kidding you were going to make him a bit annoyed with Linda. He didn't like that order very well. And the seige sounds like it's going badly. This chapter is really good. I love it. Keep them coming.alchemest1 on June 30, 2007, 4:02:42 PM
Once again flooring the audience with his work. Wow. I love it. That's all there is to say. I. Love. It. Keep it coming. More!alchemest1 on June 30, 2007, 1:27:58 PM
I held my breath thru the entire fight. (pants slighly tongue out) this is getting better and better with each chapter. Now I'M even worried about Ekyt. He's nuts using the ring when already wounded. He could have killed himself.(growls with exasperation and worry)MrGimp on June 29, 2007, 10:39:56 PM
Hehe, aw... 'Lamour Toujours! >w<Awesome story going on man, cant wait to read the next chapter!
MrGimp on June 29, 2007, 10:13:25 PM
Oh man, this is getting better and better by the chapter! Keep 'em coming!! >w<MrGimp on June 29, 2007, 10:02:26 PM
Another kick @$$ chapter man, seriously! Linda is a bit bossy... >w<MrGimp on June 29, 2007, 9:54:29 PM
oh whoa, i wasnt expecting that... O_o Very nice! On to the next one!MrGimp on June 29, 2007, 9:44:47 PM
whoa, awesome beginning! *flies off to chappie 2*alchemest1 on June 29, 2007, 6:18:25 PM
Nextguardian does it again! Wow. I love this story. Its extremly addictive and captivating. I will be looking for this to read and re read for months to come!alchemest1 on June 29, 2007, 4:57:24 PM
Twists and turns. I love the way you do that. Although i will admit it drives me insane waiting for the next chapter. But tonight you are a lean, mean, writing machine. Lol. I love this story. I think this is going to be your best yet. I can see myself there with the characters. Not a thing many people can make me do!alchemest1 on June 29, 2007, 3:33:39 PM
Yet another fantastic work from a talented writer. I love it. Keep them coming! MORE! MORE!alchemest1 on June 29, 2007, 1:57:12 PM
Wow. That's all there is to it. Amazing. This story has really big potential. I'm going to be looking forward to this one going further. And the fairwell saying. Did you make that because it sounded very familiar. I've heard those names before.alchemest1 on June 29, 2007, 12:54:50 PM
Cool! This is going to definitly be one of my favorit pieces you have done. You really are becoming a better and better writer every time i read your work. Wow. I can't wait to hear this story play out. I't going to be one awesome story i can already tell!