Everyones afraid of something.

Chapter 1 - Come into my parlor said the spider to the flys...
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Chapter 2 - Trapped like rats...
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Chapter 3 - Stuck in the web...
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Chapter 4 - The larger group...
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Chapter 5 - The missing three...
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Chapter 6 - Discoveries!
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Chapter 7 - Fighting Back!
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Chapter 8 - Evening the odds!
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Chapter 9 - The calm after the storm.
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SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 10:09:18 AM

SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 10:09:18 AM (Chapter: 9)

Cool. Be careful of spelling errors, but that's about all I've got to say. Nice job and keep up the good work.

SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 10:07:21 AM

SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 10:07:21 AM (Chapter: 8)

FREEDOM!
So what lesson have all the good girls and boys learnt?
TEAMWORK!

SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 10:05:56 AM

SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 10:05:56 AM (Chapter: 7)

Cheating's is for losers! Go Meena, Luna and Kai! Get in there everyone else!

SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 10:04:09 AM

SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 10:04:09 AM (Chapter: 6)

So Meena only shows her fear when her little sis isn't around. The strong Big Sister.
I wonder what those three found...

SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 10:02:14 AM

SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 10:02:14 AM (Chapter: 5)

Somebody kill those spiders already!!
Uhh, I'm guessing Kia=Kai, right?

SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 10:00:24 AM

SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 10:00:24 AM (Chapter: 4)

Lol. Nice work with the comedy/slapstick.
Again, good use of the 'catching phrase' at the end

SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 9:58:43 AM

SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 9:58:43 AM (Chapter: 3)

WAAAH!! DIE SPIDERS!!!!!!!
So Kai isn't afraid of ghosts.
Poor Meena

SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 9:51:15 AM

SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 9:51:15 AM (Chapter: 2)

Max and Mariam = Cute. ^_^
Kai's scared of ghosts? Interesting. Nice use of tension, ending this chapter with a scream

SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 9:48:42 AM

SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 9:48:42 AM (Chapter: 1)

SOund's like this is gonna be interesting

Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime on January 12, 2006, 2:17:59 PM

Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime on January 12, 2006, 2:17:59 PM (Chapter: 9)

cool! that was so awesome! =^_^= *favs* *gives pocky and pixie sticks* this rocks!!!!!! =^_^=