Everyones afraid of something.
Submitted August 31, 2004 Updated September 4, 2004 Status Incomplete | The Bladebreakers get trapped in a huanted mansion!
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Come into my parlor said the spider to the flys...
Submitted: August 31, 2004 • Updated: August 31, 2004
Word count: 422 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 254
Chapter 2 - Trapped like rats...
Submitted: August 31, 2004 • Updated: August 31, 2004
Word count: 414 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 269
Chapter 3 - Stuck in the web...
Submitted: August 31, 2004 • Updated: August 31, 2004
Word count: 451 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 229
Chapter 4 - The larger group...
Submitted: August 31, 2004 • Updated: August 31, 2004
Word count: 271 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 231
Chapter 5 - The missing three...
Submitted: August 31, 2004 • Updated: August 31, 2004
Word count: 283 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 247
Chapter 6 - Discoveries!
Submitted: August 31, 2004 • Updated: August 31, 2004
Word count: 367 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 320
Chapter 7 - Fighting Back!
Submitted: September 4, 2004 • Updated: September 4, 2004
Word count: 504 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 333
Chapter 8 - Evening the odds!
Submitted: September 4, 2004 • Updated: September 4, 2004
Word count: 345 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 326
Chapter 9 - The calm after the storm.
Submitted: September 4, 2004 • Updated: September 4, 2004
Word count: 259 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 297
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SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 10:09:18 AM
Cool. Be careful of spelling errors, but that's about all I've got to say. Nice job and keep up the good work.SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 10:07:21 AM
FREEDOM!So what lesson have all the good girls and boys learnt?
TEAMWORK!
SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 10:05:56 AM
Cheating's is for losers! Go Meena, Luna and Kai! Get in there everyone else!SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 10:04:09 AM
So Meena only shows her fear when her little sis isn't around. The strong Big Sister.I wonder what those three found...
SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 10:02:14 AM
Somebody kill those spiders already!!Uhh, I'm guessing Kia=Kai, right?
SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 10:00:24 AM
Lol. Nice work with the comedy/slapstick.Again, good use of the 'catching phrase' at the end
SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 9:58:43 AM
WAAAH!! DIE SPIDERS!!!!!!!So Kai isn't afraid of ghosts.
Poor Meena
SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 9:51:15 AM
Max and Mariam = Cute. ^_^Kai's scared of ghosts? Interesting. Nice use of tension, ending this chapter with a scream
SoraYamato on October 16, 2006, 9:48:42 AM
SOund's like this is gonna be interestingPocky_PixieSticks_Anime on January 12, 2006, 2:17:59 PM
cool! that was so awesome! =^_^= *favs* *gives pocky and pixie sticks* this rocks!!!!!! =^_^=Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime on January 12, 2006, 2:16:07 PM
cool! that was awesome! Go, Meena! =^_^=Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime on January 12, 2006, 2:14:15 PM
ooh! cool! beybattle! =^_^= that jerk's cheating! Get him, Meena, Luna, Kai!!!Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime on January 12, 2006, 2:11:10 PM
no... not spiders. agh! this is cool (except the spiders). =^_^=Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime on January 12, 2006, 2:08:22 PM
ah! not the spiders again! this is so cool (aside from the spiders). =^_^=Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime on January 12, 2006, 2:06:16 PM
cool! =^_^= this awesome! i usually don't like creepy stuff but this is pretty cool. =^_^=Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime on January 12, 2006, 2:04:14 PM
scary! i hate spiders! ooh! i can't wait to read more. =^_^=Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime on January 12, 2006, 2:01:40 PM
ooh! creepy! cool! =^_^= i always thought Max and Mariam would make a cute couple.Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime on January 12, 2006, 1:58:47 PM
ooh! awesome start! i can't wait to read more. this is gonna be good. =^_^=heartless-sinner on February 24, 2005, 8:12:46 AM
SO AWESOME.TO TELL YOU THE TRUTH MEENA WAS FUNNEY. SHE REMINDED ME OF SOMEONE.HMMMMMMM...^-^SilentSoul92 on September 29, 2004, 9:04:44 AM
THAT WAS AWSOME!!! I had scary movie songs playing in the back ground and it totally fit. that was a great story! cant believe there are no comments. come on people you wouldnt know a good story if it hit you in th face. anyway great fic :)Sayka on September 4, 2004, 10:04:06 AM
Oh poo. No ones commenting :(PLEASE COMMENT!
Sayka on August 31, 2004, 6:21:59 AM
This is something I came up with while I wrote it- I hope you all like it! (Please comment)