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Twilit Wolf

Ok, this is a little something I made up while i was playin Twilight princess, (all rights reserved to Nintendo.)
It's about a girl who sides up with Link to deafeat Zant. I have lots of errors in the spelling section...

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - A Foul Wind
Submitted: April 16, 2007 • Updated: April 16, 2007
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Chapter 2 - Time to be Cute
Submitted: April 5, 2007 • Updated: April 5, 2007
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Chapter 3 - A Link to Remember
Submitted: April 5, 2007 • Updated: April 17, 2007
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Chapter 4 - A New Begining
Submitted: April 6, 2007 • Updated: April 17, 2007
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Chapter 5 - The Perfect Pet...Or Not?
Submitted: April 7, 2007 • Updated: April 7, 2007
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Chapter 6 - Smooth Sailing, I think.
Submitted: April 14, 2007 • Updated: April 14, 2007
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Chapter 7 - A Missing Part of Life
Submitted: April 17, 2007 • Updated: April 18, 2007
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Chapter 8 - Feeling Better, Almost
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Chapter 9 - Kids are so Reckless
Submitted: April 19, 2007 • Updated: April 19, 2007
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Chapter 10 - Wolves!
Submitted: April 19, 2007 • Updated: April 20, 2007
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Chapter 11 - Lanaru
Submitted: April 20, 2007 • Updated: April 20, 2007
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Chapter 12 - Demanding Midna
Submitted: April 21, 2007 • Updated: April 21, 2007
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Chapter 13 - Into the Twilight
Submitted: April 21, 2007 • Updated: April 21, 2007
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Chapter 14 - Bugs Everywhere!!!
Submitted: April 21, 2007 • Updated: April 21, 2007
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Chapter 15 - Into the Temple
Submitted: April 22, 2007 • Updated: April 22, 2007
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Chapter 16 - Diababa
Submitted: April 24, 2007 • Updated: April 24, 2007
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Chapter 17 - Answers
Submitted: April 26, 2007 • Updated: April 26, 2007
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Chapter 18 - To the Twilight, Again.
Submitted: April 27, 2007 • Updated: April 27, 2007
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Chapter 19 - The Childeren's Hope
Submitted: April 28, 2007 • Updated: April 28, 2007
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Chapter 20 - The Mountain and the Stone
Submitted: May 6, 2007 • Updated: May 6, 2007
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Chapter 21 - Fang
Submitted: May 10, 2007 • Updated: May 11, 2007
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Chapter 22 - Zant's Best Friend, the Freak of Nature
Submitted: May 14, 2007 • Updated: May 14, 2007
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Chapter 23 - The Secret That Wants Out
Submitted: May 16, 2007 • Updated: May 16, 2007
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Chapter 24 - The Very... Odd Day.
Submitted: May 17, 2007 • Updated: May 17, 2007
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Chapter 25 - The Battle
Submitted: May 20, 2007 • Updated: May 20, 2007
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Chapter 26 - To Death Mountain: Take 2
Submitted: May 27, 2007 • Updated: May 27, 2007
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Chapter 27 - Goron Mines
Submitted: May 29, 2007 • Updated: May 29, 2007
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Chapter 28 - Darbus and Illa
Submitted: May 29, 2007 • Updated: May 29, 2007
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Chapter 29 - Dusk's Story
Submitted: June 2, 2007 • Updated: June 2, 2007
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Chapter 30 - Xiaon, Bird of Legend
Submitted: June 3, 2007 • Updated: June 3, 2007
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Chapter 31 - A Scattered Soul
Submitted: June 6, 2007 • Updated: June 6, 2007
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Chapter 32 - Through Eyes of a Tiger
Submitted: June 13, 2007 • Updated: June 13, 2007
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Chapter 33 - Secret of the Goddesses
Submitted: June 15, 2007 • Updated: June 15, 2007
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Chapter 34 - Lake Hylia
Submitted: June 15, 2007 • Updated: June 15, 2007
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Chapter 35 - Heartbreak
Submitted: June 15, 2007 • Updated: June 15, 2007
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Chapter 36 - Seigh-Ri
Submitted: June 29, 2007 • Updated: June 29, 2007
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Chapter 37 - The Truth Hurts
Submitted: June 29, 2007 • Updated: June 30, 2007
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Chapter 38 - EVERYTHING!
Submitted: July 1, 2007 • Updated: July 1, 2007
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Chapter 39 - Trust with Heart
Submitted: July 18, 2007 • Updated: July 18, 2007
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Chapter 40 - The Coward, Swordsman and a Wolf too
Submitted: July 24, 2007 • Updated: July 24, 2007
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Chapter 41 - The Trail to Renado
Submitted: July 27, 2007 • Updated: July 27, 2007
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Chapter 42 - Rutella
Submitted: August 5, 2007 • Updated: August 5, 2007
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Chapter 43 - Dusk Tries to Remember
Submitted: August 6, 2007 • Updated: August 6, 2007
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Chapter 44 - Seigh-Ri has Anger Management Issues
Submitted: August 7, 2007 • Updated: August 7, 2007
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Chapter 45 - She Understands
Submitted: August 7, 2007 • Updated: August 7, 2007
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Chapter 46 - One More One less
Submitted: August 12, 2007 • Updated: August 12, 2007
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Chapter 47 - Delema
Submitted: August 13, 2007 • Updated: August 13, 2007
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Chapter 48 - Thank God for Water Bombs
Submitted: August 14, 2007 • Updated: August 14, 2007
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Chapter 49 - The Lakebed Temple
Submitted: August 16, 2007 • Updated: August 16, 2007
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Chapter 50 - The Seven Twilit Beasts
Submitted: August 22, 2007 • Updated: August 22, 2007
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Chapter 51 - Paired with Seigh-Ri
Submitted: September 26, 2007 • Updated: September 26, 2007
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Chapter 52 - Change of Opinion
Submitted: October 8, 2007 • Updated: October 8, 2007
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Chapter 53 - Morpheel
Submitted: October 9, 2007 • Updated: October 9, 2007
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Chapter 54 - Zant's Cruel Move
Submitted: October 10, 2007 • Updated: October 10, 2007
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Chapter 55 - The Light is Fused
Submitted: October 11, 2007 • Updated: October 11, 2007
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Chapter 56 - Riding Light and Fire
Submitted: October 12, 2007 • Updated: October 12, 2007
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Chapter 57 - Eyes in the Darkness
Submitted: October 14, 2007 • Updated: October 14, 2007
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Chapter 58 - The Creatures Within
Submitted: October 15, 2007 • Updated: October 15, 2007
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Chapter 59 - Nye's Future
Submitted: October 17, 2007 • Updated: October 17, 2007
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Chapter 60 - Lanaru's Transformation
Submitted: October 26, 2007 • Updated: October 26, 2007
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Chapter 61 - The Desert Awaits
Submitted: November 2, 2007 • Updated: November 2, 2007
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Chapter 62 - Final Trial
Submitted: November 5, 2007 • Updated: November 5, 2007
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Chapter 63 - Too Much Trust Will Bring Heartache
Submitted: November 12, 2007 • Updated: November 12, 2007
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Chapter 64 - Twilit Wolf
Submitted: November 13, 2007 • Updated: November 13, 2007
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Chapter 65 - Followed?
Submitted: November 15, 2007 • Updated: November 15, 2007
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Chapter 66 - Lanaru's Point of View
Submitted: November 22, 2007 • Updated: November 22, 2007
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Chapter 67 - To Be Real
Submitted: November 26, 2007 • Updated: November 26, 2007
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Chapter 68 - Larudo's Save
Submitted: December 15, 2007 • Updated: December 15, 2007
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Chapter 69 - One Shard
Submitted: December 28, 2007 • Updated: December 28, 2007
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Chapter 70 - Oh, Twilight Princess
Submitted: January 10, 2008 • Updated: January 10, 2008
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Chapter 71 - A Bird of A Sorrowful Past
Submitted: January 27, 2008 • Updated: February 29, 2008
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Chapter 72 - In The Cell of Imprisonment, There is a Light
Submitted: March 1, 2008 • Updated: March 1, 2008
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Chapter 73 - What Hope?
Submitted: May 26, 2008 • Updated: May 26, 2008
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Chapter 74 - Possession
Submitted: June 26, 2008 • Updated: June 26, 2008
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Chapter 75 - Enter the Twilight Realm
Submitted: July 18, 2008 • Updated: July 18, 2008
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Chapter 76 - Sols of Light
Submitted: January 18, 2009 • Updated: January 18, 2009
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Crystalgirl29 on June 22, 2009, 9:53:22 AM

Crystalgirl29 on (Chapter: 1)
Crystalgirl29Wow! this is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love it sooooooooooo much!!!!


*faves*-DUH!!! r ya kiddin me?

Hey, check out my TP story i made up :)

matthespeedstar on January 28, 2009, 3:02:01 PM

matthespeedstar on (Chapter: 76)
matthespeedstarC'mon guys! You can outrun those hands!

Lanayru on January 28, 2009, 9:09:12 PM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 76)
LanayruFang and Seigh-Ri: We're running as fast as we can, kid!!! D8<

Link: Erm, guys...? We already made it out safely... o.o'

matthespeedstar on January 29, 2009, 12:38:00 AM

matthespeedstar on (Chapter: index)
matthespeedstar..... I was cheering you two on.

rainbowfox16 on December 13, 2008, 11:25:32 PM

rainbowfox16 on (Chapter: 75)
rainbowfox16HEY!! LANNY!! I'M BACK!! WOOT!!!
But seriously, great chappie. ^_^

Lanayru on December 15, 2008, 5:53:24 AM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 75)
LanayruThank youz, thank you! I'm gonna work on the next one as soon as I can! >w<

matthespeedstar on October 9, 2008, 12:30:48 AM

matthespeedstar on (Chapter: 69)
matthespeedstarIf I tweaked that Spinner, it'd make an awesome Air Gear.

Lanayru on October 9, 2008, 9:45:33 AM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 69)
LanayruZOMG It would! 8D

beccaboo on September 27, 2008, 12:32:12 AM

beccaboo on (Chapter: 1)
beccabooawesome! this is already really really cool! ^^ the details were awesome, and you even remember the map and everything! <murders the fav button>

Lanayru on September 27, 2008, 5:38:59 AM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 1)
LanayruGeez! Take it easy on teh little fave button, what he do to you?

Lolz, thanks. I spent a long time looking at the map, and playing TP to get the jist of it. :3 Thanks for the appreciation! 8D

matthespeedstar on July 18, 2008, 7:20:41 AM

matthespeedstar on (Chapter: 75)
matthespeedstarNice. I hope they find her.

Lanayru on July 20, 2008, 11:22:27 PM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 75)
LanayruSo do I, kid. So do I. :)

cashmoneyUknowit on July 19, 2008, 1:31:36 PM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: 75)
cashmoneyUknowitAwww, so sweet!
HEY, LANARU!! um, DON'T DIE!!! that would be rather sad, :'[

Lanayru on July 20, 2008, 12:35:46 AM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 75)
Lanayruindeed.

Lanayru on July 18, 2008, 5:08:32 AM

Lanayru on (Chapter: index)
LanayruWe're now entering the last chapters of Twilit Wolf. i started this over a year ago, and now it's almost time to close it to an end. i hope you guys all enyoed the story, though i'm quite upset about the first couple chapters mainly because i didn't know what writing a story meant. But now that i have improved by a long shot, well... I feel better about it.

Anyway, we only have about five more chapters left. So, enjoy them while they last! :D

cashmoneyUknowit on June 26, 2008, 3:12:40 AM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: 74)
cashmoneyUknowitoh... oh dear. O.O
um... yeah, that... that sucks.

Lanayru on July 7, 2008, 12:32:55 AM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 74)
LanayruYupperz.

matthespeedstar on May 30, 2008, 12:32:28 AM

matthespeedstar on (Chapter: 73)
matthespeedstarLANARU!! Don't gooooo! If yu hav to, kick Ganon's @$$ for me!!

Lanayru on May 31, 2008, 12:03:49 AM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 73)
LanayruLanaru: *saulte* aye aye, captian! *rolls up sleeves* I'll do my best to give him a concussion. Link can finish the rest. >:D

matthespeedstar on June 5, 2008, 6:32:41 AM

matthespeedstar on (Chapter: index)
matthespeedstarHey, leave some for me. I'll take my new sword and use my Triforce Slash on him!

Lanayru on June 8, 2008, 5:04:02 AM

Lanayru on (Chapter: index)
LanayruOkay! works for me! :D

cashmoneyUknowit on May 26, 2008, 2:35:35 AM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: 73)
cashmoneyUknowitNOOOOOOOOOO!!!! *runs past lanaru and hugs jeno* DON'T WORRY!!! LINK'S GONNA COME!!(he better soon or i will totally rip his face out) EVERYTHING'S GONNA BE ALRIGHT!!!

Lanayru on May 26, 2008, 2:38:24 AM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 73)
LanayruJeno: *blink, blink* Um, who are you?

cashmoneyUknowit on May 26, 2008, 11:40:04 AM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: index)
cashmoneyUknowithat doesnt matter!! *huggles (but not hard enough to squeeze* we're gonna get through this!!!

cashmoneyUknowit on May 18, 2008, 10:36:37 AM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: index)
cashmoneyUknowit MOE!  you better get out of your writer's block right [inow][/i], young lady! me wants to know what happens!!!! in fact EVERYONE wanna knows wut happens!! GET TO STEPPIN'!!!

Lanayru on May 23, 2008, 10:02:38 PM

Lanayru on (Chapter: index)
LanayruI'm trying, k, Cashie? it's just this stupid paragrphing I have to email FAC about!!!

cashmoneyUknowit on May 24, 2008, 12:05:39 PM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: index)
cashmoneyUknowitoh, just deal with it! we can cope, its just might take a little longer to read, nothin big. WRITE, WOMAN!!! >:(

matthespeedstar on May 5, 2008, 12:28:10 AM

matthespeedstar on (Chapter: index)
matthespeedstarDid ya try that thing yet?

Here's a hint about it: Don't stand directly behind the waterfall.

Lanayru on May 7, 2008, 8:34:25 PM

Lanayru on (Chapter: index)
LanayruOh yes, I tried it... and had a blast doing it! my brothers came down sto see what was wrong with me since I kept going "DIE YOU STUPID BIRDS OF DOOM! DIE AND BURN IN SATAN'S ETERNAL FIRE!!!!"

Ah, good times. :D

rainbowfox16 on March 15, 2008, 10:07:52 AM

rainbowfox16 on (Chapter: index)
rainbowfox16DUDE!!! I'M BACK!!! frackIN' A!!! Anywho, been grounded for a few weeks, but I'm back and better than ever. One good thing about being ground is that I had plenty of time to write!! So, love the chappie. WOOT!!! Oh, and you WILL hate me by the time White Curse: Ninja Style is over with. *evil giggle*

Lanayru on March 16, 2008, 3:42:41 AM

Lanayru on (Chapter: index)
Lanayruoh god... What are you planning to do? Are you killing off a favorite character of mine? (Not to mention names... *CoughDeidaraCough*)
I know you wouldn't have the guts to kill Gaara or Link. No one is that heartless besides Itachi! XD

rainbowfox16 on March 18, 2008, 7:28:53 AM

rainbowfox16 on (Chapter: index)
rainbowfox16Nah, I ain't killing Deidara *coughfagcough* and I am SOOOO NOT NOT NOT killing my boy Gaara or Link. *smirk* But SOMEONE is dieing. Yepyep. I AM SO EVIL!!!!!!

Lanayru on March 18, 2008, 8:10:16 PM

Lanayru on (Chapter: index)
LanayruExcuse me?! Did you just insult my Deidei?! *goes on a rabid rampage on rainbowfox*

Is it one of the characters I like? And do they live in the Leaf village?
That's all I want answered.

matthespeedstar on March 5, 2008, 11:40:54 PM

matthespeedstar on (Chapter: 72)
matthespeedstarTorturing those guys reminds me of when I used to pull out my slingshot, and fire bullets at those twilit kargarocs. Here's how I did it:

1. Stare at them while they're chatting. Go behind the black waterfall at the semi-last dungeon, so they can't see you.

2. Equip the slingshot.

3. Fire at one of them.

4. Watch it fall off the edge and get back up. They don't suspect a thing. LOL

Lanayru on March 6, 2008, 7:33:33 PM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 72)
LanayruOoh! I gotta try that sometime!!! X3

cashmoneyUknowit on March 4, 2008, 8:23:53 AM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: 72)
cashmoneyUknowitohhh, i just wanna hug that kid! T.T
and no, i will never, EVER sympathize zant.no matter how pathetic his situation is.the jerk...

Lanayru on March 5, 2008, 5:27:47 AM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 72)
LanayruI agree. I agree. -___-

*Holds Jeno out* Here, hug him. He needs one.

cashmoneyUknowit on March 9, 2008, 9:46:09 AM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: index)
cashmoneyUknowitawww! *huggles* ITS GONNA BE OK!!!

Lanayru on March 10, 2008, 7:33:33 AM

Lanayru on (Chapter: index)
LanayruJeno: Ugh! Squeezing me!!! X(

cashmoneyUknowit on February 23, 2008, 11:31:15 AM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: 69)
cashmoneyUknowitcan someone PLEASE tell zant to stop being a dork? not only is he ugly, evil, and stupid, but i bet he SMELLS bad, too.
>:[

Lanayru on March 3, 2008, 8:41:47 AM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 69)
Lanayru... Have you been sniffing Zant? >.O

cashmoneyUknowit on March 9, 2008, 9:48:01 AM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: index)
cashmoneyUknowitsrry, lanny, but i like life. i dont wanna go quite yet.

Lanayru on March 1, 2008, 2:58:14 AM

Lanayru on (Chapter: index)
Lanayrugah! I hate how the paragraphing isn't working!!!! Somebody shoot FAC now!!!![/color]

cashmoneyUknowit on February 23, 2008, 11:50:31 AM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: 71)
cashmoneyUknowitwhen birds start writing, its time to the old medication out.

Lanayru on February 23, 2008, 10:13:17 PM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 71)
LanayruLol. Sorry, advil don't exist here.

cashmoneyUknowit on February 23, 2008, 11:43:47 AM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: 70)
cashmoneyUknowitstupid ghosts...wut help were they? they did absolutely nothing! link could have gone on without that information! wut the heck? and i thought you didnt find out that midna was the twilight princess until the end? GAA!IM CONFUZELATED!!!!

Lanayru on February 23, 2008, 10:12:55 PM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 70)
LanayruNah, the ghost tell you see's the TP. But you don't figure out her real form until the end.

cashmoneyUknowit on February 28, 2008, 9:31:50 AM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: index)
cashmoneyUknowit...so i see.

cashmoneyUknowit on February 20, 2008, 2:29:23 AM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: 68)
cashmoneyUknowitstupid zant.

yay more characters!!!

cashmoneyUknowit on February 17, 2008, 3:34:27 AM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: 67)
cashmoneyUknowitawww...poor Fang

Lanayru on February 19, 2008, 7:31:40 PM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 67)
LanayruYou read too slow! Read the chapters or die! I waiting on you so I can make new chapter! Ain't I nice?! READ WOMAN! >:(

cashmoneyUknowit on February 20, 2008, 2:34:54 AM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: index)
cashmoneyUknowitDONT HURT ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*hides in corner* T.T

cashmoneyUknowit on January 31, 2008, 10:16:35 AM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: 66)
cashmoneyUknowit...damn.

rainbowfox16 on February 3, 2008, 2:36:56 AM

rainbowfox16 on (Chapter: 66)
rainbowfox16Oh. Lanayru said to wish you a happy b-day. Kinda late on that but 'Happy (late) B-day!'.....She threatend me into to it......

cashmoneyUknowit on February 17, 2008, 2:28:59 AM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: index)
cashmoneyUknowitwell, (late) thank you!^^

...and thank you, moe...i guess.

Lanayru on February 17, 2008, 10:19:52 PM

Lanayru on (Chapter: index)
LanayruYou're vewy welcome, Danna.

Lanayru on February 3, 2008, 8:41:10 AM

Lanayru on (Chapter: index)
Lanayruyeah, that's right! >:D

Lanayru on January 31, 2008, 7:04:20 PM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 66)
LanayruMmm.. Ouchies. :D

PrincessFatCat on January 29, 2008, 11:19:50 AM

PrincessFatCat on (Chapter: 71)
PrincessFatCatWow....interesting...seriously I can't wait to read more!

rainbowfox16 on January 27, 2008, 8:42:54 AM

rainbowfox16 on (Chapter: 71)
rainbowfox16Mysterious, and interesting. Cant wait for the next chappy.

OrdonHero555 on January 11, 2008, 11:55:05 PM

OrdonHero555 on (Chapter: 70)
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Lanayru on January 12, 2008, 1:01:24 AM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 70)
Lanayrusort of reminds you of a certian timid little Twilit we all know and love... ^^

PrincessFatCat on January 10, 2008, 9:10:19 AM

PrincessFatCat on (Chapter: 70)
PrincessFatCatAw...

Lanayru on January 10, 2008, 7:19:56 PM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 70)
Lanayruain't Dusk the cutest little Twili you ever saw? ^^

PrincessFatCat on January 11, 2008, 12:48:53 PM

PrincessFatCat on (Chapter: index)
PrincessFatCatLOL Yeah ^_^ Makes you want to hug him but somehow I don't think he'd like that too well LOL

Lanayru on January 12, 2008, 1:02:20 AM

Lanayru on (Chapter: index)
Lanayruahh, Dusk wouldn't mind. He's a huggy person. Aren't you Dusk?

Dusk: As long as they don't squish me.

PrincessFatCat on January 12, 2008, 8:13:07 AM

PrincessFatCat on (Chapter: index)
PrincessFatCatYAY! *hugs him but not hard enough to squish him* LOL ^__^

matthespeedstar on January 9, 2008, 5:46:44 AM

matthespeedstar on (Chapter: 52)
matthespeedstarHa ha, first time I saw the Clawshot, I was like, "Nice. Let's test this bad boy out." Good times, gooood times.

Lanayru on January 9, 2008, 7:08:33 PM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 52)
LanayruOoh, then when you get another one, you fly!!! FLY!!! Sorta... not really. Feels like it..

Seigh-Ri like clawshot. Seigh-Ri like clawshot very much! >:)

matthespeedstar on January 10, 2008, 6:00:47 AM

matthespeedstar on (Chapter: index)
matthespeedstarNah, you feel more like Spiderman. And I came up with this nickname for him: SpiderLink. LMAO

Lanayru on January 10, 2008, 6:49:59 AM

Lanayru on (Chapter: index)
LanayruSpiderLink? Never heard that before.. Nice! ^^

rainbowfox16 on January 1, 2008, 5:05:59 AM

rainbowfox16 on (Chapter: 69)
rainbowfox16Hehe. I hated that damn spinner thingy-ma-bob. Annoying.

Lanayru on January 6, 2008, 1:33:57 AM

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LanayruYou don't like the spinner?!?!

You crazy woman, you crazy! >.O

matthespeedstar on January 3, 2008, 4:53:31 PM

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matthespeedstarI've hardly read 1/2-way through, and already I been amazed by it. I hope my story turns out just as awesome as this.

http://www.fanart-central.net/story-47345.html

Lanayru on January 4, 2008, 4:08:39 AM

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Lanayru... Wow, am I really that good?

I'll check out your story sometime! ^^

cashmoneyUknowit on December 30, 2007, 12:47:47 PM

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cashmoneyUknowitugh, devouring of body parts is not my favorite. =P

Lanayru on December 31, 2007, 1:01:24 AM

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LanayruOh I do it all the time. Toes are my favorite. ^^

cashmoneyUknowit on December 30, 2007, 12:40:05 PM

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cashmoneyUknowitok, i guess we got no choice. this is a BAD case, that lanaru. and there`s only one thing that can knock some sense into her.

i didn`t wanna do this, but...ok, boys, bring in naruto.

Lanayru on December 31, 2007, 1:00:24 AM

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LanayruLol, oh geez.. Now she'll have to join the "I got sense beaten into me by Naruto" club. XD
Nah. Link's got it covered.

cashmoneyUknowit on December 30, 2007, 12:30:33 PM

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cashmoneyUknowitthe new andimproved master sword! let us all bow to its shinieness! lol

aww...kick her @$$, Link! just think of all the times she must`ve wet your bed and carpet as a puppy!!

no i`m just kiddin, lol. but i guess u do have to fite. :(

cashmoneyUknowit on December 30, 2007, 12:19:21 PM

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cashmoneyUknowit"congrats.you did it." lol

cashmoneyUknowit on December 30, 2007, 12:14:24 PM

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cashmoneyUknowitcool.thats i gots to say.

PrincessFatCat on December 28, 2007, 10:59:38 AM

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PrincessFatCatLOL That top thingie was cool though.

Lanayru on December 29, 2007, 11:28:45 AM

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LanayruIt's my favorite weapon in the whole game! :D
~Round and round Link goes, when he'll stop, nobody knows!~

LOLZ! XD

PrincessFatCat on December 30, 2007, 7:23:17 AM

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PrincessFatCatYep! LOL That thing's awesome

PrincessFatCat on December 28, 2007, 10:41:03 AM

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PrincessFatCatWow....I am not sure what to say...LOL All I know is I love this story (even though I don't comment much.....*smacks forehead*) ^__^

Lanayru on December 28, 2007, 10:45:27 AM

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LanayruI'm not so proud of the begining, (because back then, I sucked at literature) but I think I'm doing pretty well on these recent chappies! ^^
Sometimes, I don't know what to say when I comment either. I know whatcha mean! @.@

PrincessFatCat on December 28, 2007, 10:55:03 AM

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PrincessFatCatLOL
Whoa hey I was just in time for a new chapter! LOL ^__^

OrdonHero555 on December 16, 2007, 5:39:50 AM

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Lanayru on December 16, 2007, 6:12:12 AM

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LanayruWhen I first saw his real face, I thought one thing: GAY! Lol XDD

rainbowfox16 on December 16, 2007, 1:17:58 AM

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rainbowfox16*snorts* You dork. Making characters worship you. Nyah. Otherwise it was good!

Lanayru on December 16, 2007, 4:20:48 AM

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LanayruI am a light spirit! Bow down to my dragon snakyness! Mwhahaha! BOW! BOW YOU MORONS!
Lol. XDD

Lanayru on April 22, 2007, 12:42:37 AM

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LanayruWhen I fight them as a human I'm on top of Epona so they cant get me! LOL

OrdonHero555 on December 10, 2007, 6:42:54 AM

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OrdonHero555 on December 10, 2007, 6:43:41 AM

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Lanayru on December 10, 2007, 7:22:07 AM

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LanayruLol, thank's Kimmie.^^ Man, I'm like, numero uno on the Grammer Police's list of people to correct. >.<
I hate the grammer police!!! Run away! Run away! O.O *runs far away from grammer police*

cashmoneyUknowit on December 3, 2007, 7:48:17 AM

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cashmoneyUknowito, man....lanny no feel good 0.0

Lanayru on December 4, 2007, 9:51:53 AM

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LanayruAnd it only gets worse! >:D

cashmoneyUknowit on December 3, 2007, 7:42:08 AM

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cashmoneyUknowit....

....


...i have no comments. 0.0

Lanayru on December 4, 2007, 9:51:11 AM

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LanayruYeah, you know who "Nye" is right?

cashmoneyUknowit on December 3, 2007, 7:14:03 AM

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cashmoneyUknowitdo i smell foreshadowing??? *teehee!*

Lanayru on December 4, 2007, 9:50:28 AM

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Lanayru*slaps hand over cashies mouth* SHHH!!! little fan ears are listening!!!
If you want Santa to leave you presents, (and I'll give u hint hint that i got u sumtin 4 christmas) You better start speakin' swahili instead of english! >:(

cashmoneyUknowit on December 3, 2007, 7:03:05 AM

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cashmoneyUknowitum...pardon my swahili, but...WHAT THE *BLEEP*-CK IS GOING ON?!?!

Lanayru on December 4, 2007, 9:47:54 AM

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LanayruYou speak swahili? You should teach me sometime! XD

rainbowfox16 on November 27, 2007, 9:17:22 AM

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rainbowfox16Hehehe. True, you spelled wisdom right this time buuuuuut.....You didn't spell, "relizstion" right. Duh. It's 'relization'. Nyah.

Aria: *snickers*

Lanayru on November 28, 2007, 4:03:17 AM

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Lanayrutypo. It happens all the time. So I 4got the 'a'...

PrincessFatCat on November 26, 2007, 11:31:56 AM

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PrincessFatCatOoh...I want to read more! SO much drama! LOL

Lanayru on November 26, 2007, 7:11:55 PM

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Lanayru^__^ Don't you just love suspence? LOL! XD

PrincessFatCat on November 27, 2007, 8:27:27 AM

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PrincessFatCatYes *twitches* Yes I do!! *spazzes waiting to read more* LOL

PrincessFatCat on November 24, 2007, 3:08:18 AM

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PrincessFatCatAww....man I feel so bad for her....T_T

rainbowfox16 on November 22, 2007, 2:40:03 AM

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rainbowfox16*whimpers* Oh poor Lanny....It almost makes me want to cry...Almost.

Lanayru on November 22, 2007, 3:31:05 AM

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LanayruCRY! CRY ALREADY! >:D

rainbowfox16 on November 22, 2007, 11:02:23 AM

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rainbowfox16*shoves fist in air* NEEEEVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRR!!!!
Will you settle for pity? I dont do tears. Nyah.

Lanayru on November 22, 2007, 11:16:48 PM

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LanayruI guess pity works... tears are better tho.

OrdonHero555 on November 18, 2007, 9:27:23 AM

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Lanayru on November 18, 2007, 11:44:35 PM

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LanayruSuper special awesome plot twists!!! >:D
Yummy toe... :D

PrincessFatCat on November 16, 2007, 10:51:45 AM

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PrincessFatCatEw....toe....blood....gross.....LOL SOrry but now I can't get the image out of my head....

Lanayru on November 16, 2007, 11:19:01 AM

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LanayruLol, doesn't wanna make you barf up your dinner?^^

PrincessFatCat on November 16, 2007, 11:23:04 AM

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PrincessFatCat*twitches* Toe....blood...ewww....

PrincessFatCat on November 16, 2007, 10:48:56 AM

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PrincessFatCatMan....whoa.....O_O

rainbowfox16 on November 16, 2007, 8:40:59 AM

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rainbowfox16Damn. That's gross. What the hell made you make the Kogo eat its own toe...Your sick...I LOVE IT!!! ;p

Lanayru on November 16, 2007, 9:15:10 AM

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Lanayru.. I thought the sight looked delish. There was so much yummy blood...^^

rainbowfox16 on November 16, 2007, 9:26:04 AM

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rainbowfox16Hell yesh. Yummy yummy to my tummy.

cashmoneyUknowit on November 12, 2007, 9:18:07 AM

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cashmoneyUknowitWHOOO-HOOOOOOOO!!! GO XIAON!!! >=D

Lanayru on November 14, 2007, 7:10:38 AM

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LanayruYeah! just think of what willl happen when they combine the fused light with shadow!!! >:D

rainbowfox16 on November 13, 2007, 1:18:41 PM

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rainbowfox16...oh. I'm gonna cry...I know how true that is....*sniffs*

Lanayru on November 13, 2007, 7:15:27 PM

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LanayruNeed a tissue? *waves tissue in Rainbowfox's face*

rainbowfox16 on November 13, 2007, 1:22:45 PM

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rainbowfox16*whimpers* Oh man...Your killin me with this drama! Dont get me wrong, its good, no GREAT drama. I'm so wrapped up in it...I'll freak when the story ends...

Lanayru on November 13, 2007, 7:10:01 PM

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LanayruDon't freak! I have the sequel I'm going to write right after I finish this!^^

OrdonHero555 on November 12, 2007, 7:03:46 AM

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Lanayru on November 13, 2007, 6:43:34 AM

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LanayruAs long as you're content with the story, I'm fine with that.^^

cashmoneyUknowit on November 8, 2007, 8:30:35 AM

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cashmoneyUknowitLANNY!!! I`LL SAVE YOU!!!

...

oh, yeah, i cant...*BLEEP*-you Zant!!! D:<

Lanayru on November 9, 2007, 12:10:31 PM

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Lanayruuhh, Link takes care of that. He is the main character after all.

OrdonHero555 on November 8, 2007, 9:07:52 AM

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Lanayru on November 8, 2007, 7:29:17 PM

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LanayruWell, I'm a cheater and had the cheat book with me... But I didn't get it on the first try... Did sumtin wrong. >.>

rainbowfox16 on November 9, 2007, 11:38:28 AM

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rainbowfox16...-_- Yep. That's what I did. Cheated. Cheated all throughout the game...CHEATERS FOR EVER!!! I hated that part. Drove me insane. I ain't so good with puzzlers like that. But I'm as stubborn as hell, and tried for TWO frackIN DAYS before I decided to cheat. Eh...Can't say I didn't try.

cashmoneyUknowit on November 8, 2007, 8:02:48 AM

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cashmoneyUknowitohhh,boy,oh boy,oh boy, oh boy!!! XD

rainbowfox16 on November 5, 2007, 8:35:40 AM

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rainbowfox16No offense or nothin...*snicker* Wisedom...So funny. Wisdom is how you spell it. *giggle*

Aria: *smirk* You're pathetic. Can't even spell 'wisdom'? HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Me: OI!! Only I get to mack fun of Lanayru! (smacks Aria over head)

Aria: *waterfall tears* WAAAAAAH!! Why me?

Lanayru on November 5, 2007, 7:11:29 PM

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LanayruHEY! Don't correct my spelling errors! *smacks rainbowfox* Only Gaara is allowed to do that.... Because he's cool enough. I would use spell check, but that thing sucks. And It corrects me too much. So I turned it off!^^

rainbowfox16 on November 6, 2007, 9:26:59 AM

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rainbowfox16RF: *growls* HEY!! I can't help it if I'm a grammer freak!! *slaps lanayru* AND NO ONE CAN HIT ME BUT...*blinks* Hang on....(think think think) OH I KNOW!! Only my obsession can hit me. Red headed hotties. Kurama, Gaara, Kenshin...*dreamy sigh*

Lanayru on November 6, 2007, 7:03:53 PM

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Lanayru*dog slapped* I can't help it if only Gaara can correct me! *slaps* I can slap who I want when I want!
Gaara: I'm getting sick of you two slapping each other like monkeys. Do it again, and Shukaku might blow...
O.o meep....

rainbowfox16 on November 7, 2007, 8:17:02 AM

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rainbowfox16Me: o_o...Oh, how can I say no to that psyco little face!! *snuggles Gaara*

Gaara: ...Stop...*growls*

Me: NO!! To cute! Love the red heads!!

Lanayru on November 7, 2007, 8:37:17 AM

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LanayruEnnaka: Get off Gaara!!! D:< *tackles*
Gaara:.... *twitching*...thanks.... *walks away*
Ennaka: *blink blink* Did I hear right? Gaara has manners!! *wigs out*

rainbowfox16 on November 2, 2007, 3:00:49 PM

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rainbowfox16OMG!! lol* That thing is annoying. Always yapping and so uppity!Urg! Good chappie by the way! FANG ROX OUT LOUD!

Lanayru on November 3, 2007, 5:32:54 AM

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LanayruLol, it's not that bird that your thinking of. That one's a bright pink. This one is neon purple, and it has more to it than what you think.
But that other bird is very annoying. "Play my game, oh its only for animals, squack!"

OrdonHero555 on October 27, 2007, 4:34:30 PM

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Lanayru on October 27, 2007, 11:30:07 PM

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LanayruIf that were so, I would join you. Because burning camps is fun! like when you're in the desert at a good enough distance were they can't see you, you shoot an arrow at their steeds and it goes crazy and runs the Bublins over!! >:D
Ah, fun times, fun times...

OrdonHero555 on October 27, 2007, 4:31:03 PM

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Lanayru on October 27, 2007, 11:28:09 PM

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LanayruYeah, the one thing that I hated most in TP that drived me insane when I first played it was that Bublin King. I was all lyke, "WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO DIE ALREADY!!!??" I mean really, not only did he fall off a bridge twice, get chopped to peices by your sword about three times, but they burned down their own camp while he was still in it! I don't think he could limp out of the camp that fast, don't you agree?

PrincessFatCat on October 26, 2007, 9:56:22 AM

PrincessFatCat on (Chapter: 60)
PrincessFatCatWhoa! Exciting! And a bit scary...O_O

Lanayru on October 26, 2007, 11:52:41 AM

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Lanayruooh, it gets better... it gets way better...

rainbowfox16 on October 27, 2007, 1:57:50 PM

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rainbowfox16WHY YOU SO MEAN TO POOR LANARU?! *sniffles and snuggles lanaru* It's okay Lanny, I still love you!!!

Lanayru on October 28, 2007, 12:23:58 AM

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Lanayruit's not lanaru... It's link...

OrdonHero555 on October 19, 2007, 5:58:57 PM

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Lanayru on October 21, 2007, 7:45:45 PM

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Lanayruyeah, I luvz the clawshot too! X3
Did you know that when you get the second clawshot in the ooccoo's place, you can latch onto Argorok's tail as he flies around while your traveling through the temple?! That is, if you can get close enough to him. I saw some screenshots and it was pretty awseome!!! >:D

rainbowfox16 on October 19, 2007, 9:26:57 AM

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rainbowfox16WOOOT!! I'm lovin' it!! *hums McDonald's song* Anyway, love the new chappie!

PrincessFatCat on October 16, 2007, 1:06:05 PM

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PrincessFatCatLOL Skull Kid's funny! Wow yeah I never know what to say when I comment. I guess the awesomeness of your story leaves me speechless. LOL ^___^

Lanayru on October 16, 2007, 8:10:42 PM

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Lanayruyeah, that's it! ^^

PrincessFatCat on October 22, 2007, 12:39:16 PM

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PrincessFatCatOf course it is! LOL ^___^

rainbowfox16 on October 9, 2007, 7:18:35 AM

rainbowfox16 on (Chapter: 52)
rainbowfox16*grins* I remember that fight...I also remember it took more than one shot to finish that fracker off...*sigh* Nothings ever what it seems. I'm glad Dusk and Siegh-Ri are on good terms now though *squeee!!*

Lanayru on October 9, 2007, 7:28:56 AM

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LanayruThat frogie thingy was so gross!!! >.<
Just looking at it made me feel sickeroo!
yeah, Seigh just wants her sissy back, Dusk just wants to go home, Lanny just wants to kill Zant and turn human and find out what she's gonna do afterwards, Midna wants her kingdom back, and Link wants to save dah world! Did I get everyone? >.O

rainbowfox16 on October 12, 2007, 9:32:03 AM

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rainbowfox16Yupyup. Everyone's there. Nice new chappie's by the way!!

Lanayru on October 12, 2007, 9:58:43 AM

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Lanayruwhy thank youz.^^

PrincessFatCat on October 8, 2007, 12:19:04 PM

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PrincessFatCatAww....that's kinda sad. T_T

Lanayru on October 8, 2007, 8:13:05 PM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 52)
LanayruWell, of course it's sad. It's a sob story! Wow, i feel pathetic.. I just made up Janta as I went.

PrincessFatCat on October 16, 2007, 11:00:25 AM

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PrincessFatCatLOL

rainbowfox16 on October 7, 2007, 8:45:31 AM

rainbowfox16 on (Chapter: 51)
rainbowfox16pouts* I don't like Seigh-Ri...She's mean to Dusk! He's my favorite Twili!!*snuggles Dusk*

Lanayru on October 8, 2007, 7:12:11 AM

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LanayruDusk :*wheeze* You're... crushing me! XP
LOL, poor Dusky, he's paired up with the one person he hates most and can't do a thingie aboutz it. But don' worry Dusk, Lanny's gotz some thing's up her sleeve, yes she does... Heh, heh.. Time for the author to write a little more about seigh-ri... >:)

rainbowfox16 on October 7, 2007, 8:41:02 AM

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rainbowfox16I know what ya mean Link. It took me for frackin ever to get outa there! >_<

rainbowfox16 on October 6, 2007, 6:38:38 AM

rainbowfox16 on (Chapter: 34)
rainbowfox16*shiver* I know what ya mean OrdonHero...scary...like pedophile scary *shiver*

Lanayru on October 7, 2007, 5:04:04 AM

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LanayruClowns are scary. Very scary indeed X(

rainbowfox16 on October 6, 2007, 1:53:34 PM

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rainbowfox16Yay! ZORAS RULE

Lanayru on October 7, 2007, 5:03:25 AM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 48)
Lanayruyepperz. And so do water bombs.
And so does Lanayru! XD

rainbowfox16 on October 6, 2007, 5:57:13 AM

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rainbowfox16FANG!! LOOOOVE IT!! Love the sarcasm ,the attitude, it sooo rox!!

Lanayru on October 7, 2007, 4:59:23 AM

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LanayruFang is awesome. She's actually, my first TP Oc. I came up with Lanaru after her, and didn't know what to with Fang, so here she is! ^_^

rainbowfox16 on October 6, 2007, 5:53:07 AM

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rainbowfox16....I thought Eldin was a moth...

Lanayru on October 6, 2007, 7:30:14 AM

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Lanayruuh, no, eldin's a cross between a human and a bird

rainbowfox16 on October 7, 2007, 8:47:13 AM

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rainbowfox16O_o that makes me sooo...confused...I could've SWORN he was a moth...I've been drawing him wrong all these months...*burst into tears* I'M SO SORRY ELDIN!!!

Lanayru on October 8, 2007, 8:23:44 AM

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Lanayruwell, I was a big fatass cheater and used a TP guide with the descriptions of characters (including the light spirits) It told me what animals they were:
Lanayru: snake
Eldin: Bird/human thingie
Faron: Monkey/squirrel
Ordona: Ordon goat

Lanayru on May 19, 2007, 11:01:35 PM

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Lanayrumeh, she just hates the golden warrior. Hey, he called her a bad howler, if someone called me a bad singer, i wood not be a happy camper! >:)

rainbowfox16 on October 6, 2007, 6:14:37 AM

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rainbowfox16tell me about it! *begins singing waaaayyyy off key* I don't know why everyone says I have a baaadd voooiiicce!

cashmoneyUknowit on August 7, 2007, 9:03:58 AM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: 39)
cashmoneyUknowityeah, link, be like voldemort!!!have a bunch of friends and use them like tools!!!!XD

Lanayru on September 26, 2007, 8:52:29 AM

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Lanayruwhat u mean fool?! >.O

Lanayru on September 26, 2007, 8:19:32 AM

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LanayruOkay, I goes back to work now.

Lanayru on September 5, 2007, 9:04:03 AM

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LanayruATTENTION! I AM TAKING A BREAK FROM WRITING CHAPTERS! (unless I get millions of complaints) i'm not going to stop completely, and I'm not going to stop posting Zelda stuff, (I'm going to post a Zelda pic hopefully this weekend) I'm just taking a chill pill and getting away from zelda for a little while. I haven't took a zelda chill pill since i was five, and thats when I was idroduced to Zelda. Sooo, yeah.

cashmoneyUknowit on September 13, 2007, 7:41:30 AM

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cashmoneyUknowitmoe, if you use the phraze 'chill pill' one more time, i think i`ll hava a chatastophic melt down and blow up half of australia.NO MORE KANGAROOS!>:( so dont say it again.XD

Lanayru on September 18, 2007, 9:20:08 AM

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Lanayru..... chill pill...

PrincessFatCat on August 30, 2007, 10:56:53 AM

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PrincessFatCatO_O Whoa....


I haven't commented on your story in a long time. LOL

Lanayru on August 30, 2007, 8:23:11 PM

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Lanayrumakes your comments all the more special! Lol^^

PrincessFatCat on August 31, 2007, 1:12:06 PM

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PrincessFatCatAww! How sweet of you! LOL ^__^

cashmoneyUknowit on August 23, 2007, 5:02:09 AM

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cashmoneyUknowitwell thats just great.

Lanayru on August 28, 2007, 9:26:43 AM

Lanayru on (Chapter: 50)
LanayruYou know it! Er, I mean, "Buhleive it, buhleive it, buhlieve it"! Lol

OrdonHero555 on August 23, 2007, 2:45:18 AM

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Lanayru on August 23, 2007, 7:07:15 AM

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Lanayruty! And I finally figured out what the plot of my story is! It took me this long to figure it out what Twilit Wolf should be.

cashmoneyUknowit on August 17, 2007, 8:48:57 AM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: 49)
cashmoneyUknowit...ouchies.

cashmoneyUknowit on August 14, 2007, 11:31:12 PM

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cashmoneyUknowitBOOM!!!! no more rock. XD

cashmoneyUknowit on August 12, 2007, 3:16:00 AM

cashmoneyUknowit on (Chapter: 46)
cashmoneyUknowitmy, my.link sure has a lotta women in his life!!XD

cashmoneyUknowit on August 8, 2007, 2:03:18 AM

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cashmoneyUknowitshe`s not real, and she knows it!kinda like my fourth grade teacher.everyone hates her, and she knows it!>:) but wit fang, everybody LUVS her and she knows it!:D teehee!

OrdonHero555 on August 7, 2007, 11:18:18 PM

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Lanayru on August 8, 2007, 12:18:13 AM

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Lanayruyeah, and to think that's Fang is actually a real being too. Kinda. Its really complicated to explain. it would suck!

cashmoneyUknowit on August 7, 2007, 9:56:42 AM

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cashmoneyUknowitalrite, i only have a faint idea of wuts goin on!!!WOOOHOOO!!!

Lanayru on August 7, 2007, 11:00:40 AM

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LanayruGina, if you're confuzzed, just ask me. I will answer all of thy questions that thee has to ask

cashmoneyUknowit on August 7, 2007, 10:25:12 AM

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cashmoneyUknowitfang has saved the day again!!!!yaaaaaaayy!!!!

Lanayru on August 7, 2007, 10:53:20 AM

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LanayruWell, Seigh-Ri does have Anger problems Doesn't she Geanie?

cashmoneyUknowit on August 7, 2007, 9:50:15 AM

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cashmoneyUknowiteek!!a ghost!!everybody RUUUUUUUUUUUUUNN!!!!

Lanayru on August 7, 2007, 10:52:24 AM

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LanayruNice Gina.

cashmoneyUknowit on August 7, 2007, 10:18:39 AM

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cashmoneyUknowitAGREED!XD

cashmoneyUknowit on August 7, 2007, 9:12:08 AM

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cashmoneyUknowittch.wut gaurds THEY are.o, i feel srry for link.i think he needs to move on.all the girl cared about was his friggin horse.lanny needs to be a bit less picky!XD

OrdonHero555 on August 6, 2007, 11:03:46 PM

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Lanayru on August 7, 2007, 7:55:28 AM

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Lanayruteehee thanks! I guess writing on Zelda Gamers really helped huh?

mrsaturn123 on July 26, 2007, 6:11:25 AM

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mrsaturn123Leet ^^! I like this so far! Is interesting. *faves*

PrincessFatCat on July 25, 2007, 12:57:51 PM

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PrincessFatCat"I don't want to look like a hippie!" LOL! ^__^

cashmoneyUknowit on July 23, 2007, 4:13:27 AM

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cashmoneyUknowitdidnt you see my coments???i read it!i just went on vacation, ok?srry, i been nusy lately, thats all.so stop crying.

rstock890 on July 7, 2007, 4:24:13 AM

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rstock890ONE!!!

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rstock890 on July 7, 2007, 4:22:09 AM

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rstock890lalala....

rstock890 on July 7, 2007, 4:21:07 AM

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rstock890srry i am bored...

hehe...

PrincessFatCat on July 1, 2007, 11:59:50 AM

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PrincessFatCatAw... Lanaru's story is so sad...

Lanayru on June 30, 2007, 2:46:37 AM

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LanayruI finally got my favorite chapter done! And all questions must be saved until the next chapter. It explains EVERYTHING. Or, if you REALLY want to know, ask me on my profile.

PrincessFatCat on June 16, 2007, 12:29:51 PM

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PrincessFatCatAgetha is so funny with her odd bug obsession. LOL

Yeah that part about Illia losing her memory was so sad cuz you could tell Link was really sad that she didn't know who he was and stuff.

cashmoneyUknowit on June 15, 2007, 8:52:47 AM

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cashmoneyUknowitomg, omg, omg!!!!omg!!!!!xiaon is SO COOOOOOOOOOOLLL!!!!!!

cashmoneyUknowit on June 13, 2007, 6:26:06 AM

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cashmoneyUknowitomg, that is sad!!!i wonder wut her methods of makin peeps talk is...hope its not violent....

PrincessFatCat on June 7, 2007, 1:13:30 PM

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PrincessFatCatSorry I haven't commented on your story in a long time but I have been reading it. I think I may have said that before but anyway. Keep it up! Your story rocks! ^___^

Lanayru on June 1, 2007, 11:24:10 PM

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LanayruGina, never ask that question. You already know.

cashmoneyUknowit on June 1, 2007, 6:26:54 AM

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cashmoneyUknowitweeeeee!!!beatin the crap outta stuff is ALWAYS fun!!!!!!!!!
wut was that gurl doin on death mountain, anyways??????
o, wells.we shall find out!!!

Lanayru on May 30, 2007, 8:13:44 PM

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Lanayruwell, pain is what she feels and pain is what I put. So ha! grammer police can't get me now!

cashmoneyUknowit on May 30, 2007, 11:04:19 AM

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cashmoneyUknowitpain, pain, and yet more pain. you used that word too much in that one paragraph.
oh, poor lanaru!so sad...damn you, zant!! he evil...

cashmoneyUknowit on May 30, 2007, 10:42:04 AM

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cashmoneyUknowityou go, Lanaru!!!! you tell that goron what for!!!!
that lil speech she gave there was a little creepy, tho.

Lanayru on May 29, 2007, 8:25:37 PM

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LanayruWhen in hell did you read this?! I was in bed and you weren't even on!!!

cashmoneyUknowit on May 29, 2007, 9:04:42 AM

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cashmoneyUknowityeah, it really takes guts to insult link.and i LOVE how midna does it every 5 minutes.really making sense there.(speaking sarcastically)

cashmoneyUknowit on May 29, 2007, 8:56:59 AM

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cashmoneyUknowitaww...he found them!so cute! midna probably deserved that comment, though.she is pretty nasty.well, she does get better.so its all good.

Lanayru on May 27, 2007, 4:52:07 AM

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LanayruI put Seigh-Ri in Gean Gean! hope you like my description of her... even if I got it wrong...

Lanayru on May 26, 2007, 12:59:20 AM

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LanayruAww, srry reg, it sort of popped in my head and I had no idea wat it was from.

cashmoneyUknowit on May 23, 2007, 7:51:50 AM

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cashmoneyUknowitwow.a mailman has to write a letter so people dont run from him.sad.but, who wouldn`t? if a guy wearing short, short spandex pants ran after me, i`d run across the country if i had to.

cashmoneyUknowit on May 23, 2007, 7:43:50 AM

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cashmoneyUknowitu copier! u know that the last paragraph is from me and MY story i wrote at home!!!!how dare u?
o, well.not like i was gonna post that crap, anyways.

midna`s laff is funny, tho.and cute.good, good!

Lanayru on May 15, 2007, 8:25:33 PM

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LanayruOh you will see... It happens, don't worry, but not for a while. And she hasn't been in wolf form all this time. you know when she sort of dissapears? she transforms don't worry. I would've gotten used being a wolf but thats just me.

Lanayru on May 14, 2007, 10:48:09 AM

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LanayruYes, I comment on my own stories.

Once you hear Lanaru's side of the story, you will think shes a hero. And for the people that ask, Yes, Lanaru is representing me. In many ways. The Freak of Nature chapter expresses most of my life in it. And later in the story, you will find that Fang has many secrets to share too... *lightning crackles uncontrolably*

Lanayru on May 14, 2007, 9:38:13 AM

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LanayruOk ^^ I havent checked my mail lately. caz of motre day and all. My aunt had a big party and my cousin slept over. No time to get on the compy!!! >.<

Lanayru on May 13, 2007, 6:56:40 AM

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LanayruMeh, Fang's just messing with him. Hey, cant blame her. She was raised in a harsh desert. With those bublins and all.
Lanaru, She never died really. Literary speaking, she died at heart. So yeah.

Lanayru on May 11, 2007, 6:08:29 AM

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LanayruFang is so cool.

PrincessFatCat on May 8, 2007, 11:23:28 AM

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PrincessFatCatSorry I haven't been commenting but I have been reading it. I like how it's coming out so far and I can't wait to read more! ^_^

Lanayru on May 7, 2007, 8:34:10 PM

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LanayruI can see it now, "Link get your lazy butt up this mountian! I don't have all day here!" or something along those lines.

Lanayru on May 6, 2007, 1:51:45 AM

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LanayruAnd that friend that you watched would be me!^^ the Zelda freako! Mwhahaahaha! *looks around* I don't have problems. No really, I dont.

Lanayru on May 5, 2007, 11:07:39 PM

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LanayruWell RPG, you can't really stop typos now can you? Lol and you know I can't spell well either. I don't have scary grammer and spelling like you! XD

cashmoneyUknowit on May 5, 2007, 2:19:00 PM

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cashmoneyUknowitwell, i never really played any legend of zelda games...i just watched my friend do it.so i couldn`t say anything about the monkeys...y am i commenting then? whatever, its really good!

cashmoneyUknowit on May 5, 2007, 2:09:47 PM

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cashmoneyUknowitits ok, but next time, try and do better (if that were possible!!!) sweetness!!! keep up!!! =D

Lanayru on April 27, 2007, 8:09:50 AM

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Lanayrulol

Lanayru on April 25, 2007, 8:16:13 PM

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LanayruI will explain her sudden change in attitude in the story. so nobody come to my profile asking bout it!

Lanayru on April 23, 2007, 8:11:26 PM

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LanayruThat part was the best! BOOM! no more house!LOL I rolled on the ground laughing at it. never expected to blow up a house!

PrincessFatCat on April 22, 2007, 11:03:13 AM

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PrincessFatCatThis makes me want to play Twilight Princess again! LOL

PrincessFatCat on April 20, 2007, 6:05:47 PM

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PrincessFatCatAH HA! Now I understand what you meant by Dusk being Midna's counterpart. Sorry I didn't quite understand what that word meant until just now. -_-"

PrincessFatCat on April 20, 2007, 6:03:21 PM

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PrincessFatCatOh! So that's what Dusk looks like...

Lanayru on April 20, 2007, 12:02:05 PM

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LanayruYeah, I had to make it clear they wern't speaking doggish or whatever dogs speak.

PrincessFatCat on April 19, 2007, 10:24:41 AM

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PrincessFatCatThis story is turnung out really well. I may have said that before but it's true! ^__^

PrincessFatCat on April 18, 2007, 6:12:47 AM

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PrincessFatCatWoot! I faved you! ^______^

Lanayru on April 18, 2007, 5:35:20 AM

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LanayruSorry about the small print, I fixed it i think, and it's all better!^^

PrincessFatCat on April 18, 2007, 5:52:44 AM

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PrincessFatCatChapter 7 still has small print at the bottom. Or is it supposed to be that way?

PrincessFatCat on April 18, 2007, 5:51:54 AM

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PrincessFatCatLOL the cat's funny!^^

kittyshootingstar on April 17, 2007, 8:10:00 AM

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kittyshootingstarYou might actually want to sort this into the twilight princess section. it's under legend of zelda.

Lanayru on April 16, 2007, 10:39:18 AM

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LanayruYeah, well remeber that she kept comin home bloody, I would worry if my dogs came home bloody too! And who would help him herd the goats when Eponna's sick? I accidently clicked delete on my first chapter when i was going to edit it... -_-' so I spent the whole day i was home redoing it. I think it's better than th efirst one!

PrincessFatCat on April 15, 2007, 5:46:43 AM

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PrincessFatCatWow! This story is awesome!^^ You're very talented. I can't write stories very well. LOL^^

Lanayru on April 14, 2007, 8:31:30 AM

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LanayruI made up Dusk because I noticed that there was no one else in the Twilight realm that looked as solid and colored as Midna. And, That i felt sorry for her that she had no supporters from her world exept the Twili who stayed behind in the Twilight... So then Dusk was born from my messed up imagination!!! ^^

BlackxTigris on April 5, 2007, 4:36:57 AM

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BlackxTigrisWHOO HOO! luv it! *faves*

BlackxTigris on April 4, 2007, 9:56:26 AM

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BlackxTigrisO.O wow. THIS STORY KICKS BUTT!!!!! GO YOU!